Heyo! Yadakitty here! Constructed Criticism is always good! AND NOW TO THE STORY! I do not own wolf's rain btw! If i did the wolves would have wings lol.
The sun's rays hit Kiba with full shine, promising a cloudless day, and happy traveling. Beside him Kiba could feel the others waking up.
"It's morning already," Toboe said, interrupting himself with a yawn. Through the corner of his eye he could see Tsume. The white haired man stared back.
"Hige, went out half an hour ago to catch us some food," Tsume got up to his feet,
" He must have gotten into some trouble, which is no surprise." Suddenly a wolf scampered in with a fat rabbit in his jaws. Then there three more wolves crowding around the rabbit.
"Oldest gets to eat first," Tsume barked out his gray tail flashing agitated as he shoved Toboe lightly. Hige proudly marched to the center of them all.
"Well I caught it," Hige said puffing out his chest to make him seem taller, "I get the first bite." 'What trivial nonsense,' Kiba thought to himself. Kiba stepped towards them gracefully.
"I'll divide it evenly. Happy now," Kiba growled, splitting the rabbit with his sharp fangs. The wolves gobbled up the pieces of meat; they knew that it would be one of the few bits of food they would get for a couple of weeks…..
*Running, through ice. Through hail. Through snow. Kiba…*
Kiba's ears perked up. He thought he heard someone calling his name. Him and his packmates had ventured out of their makeshift cave to find that it had snowed last night. And it had snowed heavily. Kiba could hear the rest of the wolves muttering behind him about getting their paws wet. Of course they didn't understand.. They don't understand anything.. They needed to get to Paradise, Kiba could feel it calling to him. Nuisances: that's all they were…
For now…
This is only chapter one! Don't worry Kiba will change in due time lol