Earlier this week, I saw a photo on Facebook showing Yang chained up in Junior's club being force to pay off the bills she caused during her first visit. Next to her is a Jar and sign saying that she is allowing the customers to do things to her. I immediately came up with an Idea that before any one does anything to her, she is saved.


Yang whimpered as another hand smacked her ass.

This was not how it was to go down. She was here to extract any information about Roman Torchwick's whereabouts by asking a shady bar owner Junior. Unfortunately, she was ambushed at the entrance and lost her fight with the twins. Now chained up, she stood their enduring the men she beat up during her first time here groping her boobs and smacking her toned ass. Nearby was a Jar and a sign that said "I've been a very naughty girl. Please help me pay off the damages from my previous visit. 5 lien: Touch me. 10 lien, Kiss me. 20 Lien: Spank me." Embarrassed by this revelation, she closed her eyes as Junior confidently strolled up.

"Guess what, Blondie, There's a new option. I am sure you can take it. Well, I am sure you body can."

Yang's eyes opened. A new option? A sinking gut feeling overcame her as Junior wrote it down on a nearby sign. 'Humiliation: 500 Lien'

Junior finished writing and stood up gaining the attention of everyone in the room. "Alright, Here is the 500 lien challenge! Your get to have ten minutes to do whatever you like to her. Be it a make-out session, or you want to make her ride you. 500 lien anyone?!"

All the guys immediately began fishing out what they had in their pockets. Yang was slowly trembling. As much as she was an expert in flirting with guys, she only had one relationship. That only lasted a couple days because Tai Yang found out and barged in on them as they were making out near the road leading to her house. As much as she hated to admitted it, she was as much of a virgin as Ruby. As she tried to compose herself, she noticed a man walking in the front. His hair was blonde and in a disconnected undercut style with the sides shaved but the top long and slicked back. He had on a black mask covering his mouth and nose, like a ninja and wore a white robe over black almost baggy pants. He also had on a full set of armor, almost like Jaune's but more modified. Unlike vomit-boy's, this guy had the chest plate extend to all of his torso, not just his upper chest. He had on a full set covering both arms, as well as a leg set that looked to go up to his thighs. His weapon was a white, and blue longsword set on his hip. He also had on twin dagger like blades, one on his back, while the other hanged on his waist just above his rear. On his right thigh just above the armor, he had a pistol which didn't look like much on first sight.

Yang's attention was interrupted when a man came forward. "I'll take the 500 challenge!" The men cheered and Yang's eye widened as the man came behind her and reached to rip off her skirt. She squeezed her eyes shut and waited for the ripping of fabric. She instead heard a blade singing past her and the sound of a body hitting the floor. The gasps of the men made her open her eyes and she looked down.

The man destined to rape her was on the ground, a blade sticking out from where his right eye should have been. Before she could question what just happened, a voice came from the direction of where she saw that armored man. "Do so and your life is forfeit."

The man glared at the crowd. Melanie and Militia got into a defensive stance as Junior looked at the man. Color drained from his face as the man stepped forward. "Talon?"

Talon continued walking until he stood next to Yang. The blonde buxom stared at his ice cold eyes as he looked her over before bending down and pulling out the blade from the would be rapist, flicking off the blood on it, and twirling it expertly back into its sheath on his lower back. Yang noticed a few engravings on the blade. Messor Tempestas.

Junior looked at the man before opening his mouth. "Talon, I want no trouble here." Talon crossed his arms, unamused. "Junior, I am surprised you went back on your word. What is this, the third time you molested a girl?"

Immediately, everyone looked at the bar owner who seemed to shrink under the gazes. Talon continued. "Besides, Xiong. Trouble arrived when you chained her up. So I am going to make this really simple." He took a step forward. "Let her go."

Junior shook his head. "I can't do that. She nearly destroyed the club."

Talon kept his gaze at the bar owner. "If you don't release her, then your club's destruction will be the least of your worries"

The room became tense as the crowd began to file slowly out the front door. Soon all that was left was the Malachite twins, Junior, and a few guards. Junior stared at Talon before giving his answer. "I am sorry, Talon. Now if you don't leave, I am afraid my men will have to escort you out."

The guards stepped forward and Yang felt an uneasy feeling as Talon lowered his head. As the first guard walked over confidently to grab him, Talon opened his eyes, glaring at Junior, and Yang could have sworn they flashed a bright yellow. "Then, don't say I didn't warn you."

The guard didn't feel it and Yang didn't see it, but Talon twirled around the guard and unsheathed his Kodachi on his upper back. Yang saw the name. Furor Impius Tempestas. In a split second, the blade sliced through the guard's chest and waist. Talon stop his motion, crouched down, his blade in a reversed style. The guard stood there for a few seconds before blood began to pool on the ground. Then as if he was a tower of blocks, three section fell away. His upper body, his mid torso and his legs went in different directions.

The room as in shock at the man's speed. Melanie and Militia were now realizing that their original assumptions about Talon were now wrong. This person was no longer a threat. He was a danger.

Junior recovered quickly and pointed to Talon. "Get Him!"

The remaining Guards pulled out guns and crowbars but by the time the first show was fired, Talon moved. He dashed toward the nearest guard and interlocked his leg to the guards. Clasping a firm grip, Talon flipped his body around, using his momentum to send the guy flying into the air. Talon swung Furor Impius Tempestas around in mid-air and cut cleanly through the man's head. Slicing off half of his skull just above the mouth. He turned to the next guard who had raised his crowbar to bonk him on the head. Raising his blade again, he parried the crowbar and whirled to the man's side, locking in his hands. Headbutting the guard, Talon pulled out Messor Tempestas and sliced through the man's arm, severing it from his body. Twirling his body around like a windmill, he extended his arms and Yang watched as the twin blades ripped through the man, cutting him in half.

The guard holding the gun was now the only one standing, The fight barely started and within four seconds, the aggressor managed to kill off the majority of the guards. He dropped the gun and ran to the door, but he didn't far when he suddenly felt his head get lighter and he watched as it fell away from the still running body before everything went black. As his body fell, the weapon, a curved sword that was on another dead guard, embedded itself into the wall, blood dripping on its serrated edge.

Melanie raced toward the man, in an attempt to blindside him. Talon turned to face her when he realized his mistake and turned to narrowly avoid getting kicked by Militia. His focus interrupted, Talon felt Melanie's boot slam into him, sending him flying across the room. Hitting the ground, Talon rolled back up to his feet and sheathed both Furor Impius Tempestas and Messor Tempestas. Melanie and Militia dashed toward him, ready to end the fight.

Talon raised his hands and waited for Melanie to get close to try and deliver a push kick when he moved. He used his left hand to push her left leg in the direction on Militia before twirling around Melanie as the former slammed into the latter, sending the two to the ground. Talon waited until Militia got up and dashed toward him, She threw a right hook followed by a left, while Talon simply blocked them by swatting them away. Militia tried to throw in a kick, but Talon was ready, sending a fist to slam into her knee causing the girl to cry out. Seeing an opportunity, he jumped up and performed a spinning hook kick, sending Militia flying and slamming into the wall violently. Melanie saw this and tried to attack Talon but she too was surprised by his ability. She ran to him and jumped up to launch a flying kick to his torso, but Talon countered by utilizing the spin hook again, but this time, he jumped up to delivered the kick. Melanie was both surprised and in immediate pain as she too was sent flying toward the wall.

Junior grabbed his rocket launcher to fire at Talon, but a quick glanced to his direction caused Talon to grab Furor Impius Tempestas and fling it toward the bar owner. Before he could even press the trigger, Junior felt the blade pierce his chest. He stopped all motion to look down and saw the hilt fully suppressed into his chest. He looked up and his eyes widened. Talon had closed the distance quickly and leaped at him, slamming into the bar owner with a flying knee kick. Junior flew across the room and hit the bar table hard, with a painful crack as he bent back unnaturally. Melanie and Militia stared at him dropping Junior with now fearful eyes as Talon turned to them. "I will not ask again. Give me a key, or you will not live to see the morning."

Melanie turned to her sister. "I don't want to do this anymore." Militia looked at her sister. Despite still being able to fight, they couldn't risk it if Junior was dying. "Agreed."

She reached into the middle of her chest and pulled out a small silver key. Tossing it to the man, she and Melanie both ran over to help Junior. Talon caught the keys and reached over, pulling Furor Impius Tempestas out of the man's chest before walking over to Yang. As the girls picked up the broken bar owner, he called out to Talon "Was it worth it, boy."

Talon looked at him, while still putting the key into the lock holding up the huntress's arms. "Wouldn't have been had you just let her go."

Junior grunted in pain before the Malachite twins decided they wanted to be away from the man and carried their uncle away to a nearby door. Melanie helped up Junior while Militia closed the door, locking it to prevent the two in the room any chance to come after them. Satisfied with the results, Talon turned to unlocking the chains. "Till we meet again, Xiong"

Pulling away the chains on her ankles, he looked up at Yang. "Are you alright?" Yang stared at him, a mixture of awe and shock, before her eyes swirled into a red color and she launched a fist at Talon, the man simply dodged as she stumbled away, before crossing his arms. Yang turned around to glare at him. "What the hell! What is wrong with you?"

Talon raised an eyebrow. "Is being chained up a fetish you have? Pretty fucked up if you ask me."

Yang's eyes widened as she began waving her hands in front of her. " N-n-n-no. It's not that. It's just...Why?"

"Why what?"

"Why did you kill them."

Talon stared at the huntress before looking at his handiwork. Blood was everywhere as well as the part of the guards he killed. Taking a moment to survey his handiwork, he turned to Yang. "Sometimes, people like them don't deserve to live. If they see the error of their ways, that's fine. But by chaining you and making an announcement to degrade you via rape, they sealed their fate."

Yang stared at him unsure why he felt that he held the right to end the lives of these people. Sure they were about to defile her but did they really need to be killed? She grabbed her head. "I guess. Gods this is so head-spinning. I was just trying to find anything about Roman Torchwick"

Talon's eyes widened "Rome?. Fucker's alive? How bout that."

Yang looked at him. "You know him?"

Talon nodded. "I had a run in with him. Would have been able to end his life if it hadn't been for his little ice cream sidekick. That being said, their bullhead went down a few miles away. Thought the crash killed the two."

Yang nodded before sighing. "Well, now I got no leads." Talon tilted his head toward the blonde. "Why are you looking for him? The guy is a former huntsman, I.E, he's dangerous."

Yang looked at Talon with uncertain eyes, before closing them. "He's working with the White Fang and my partner wants to put a stop to it."

Talon placed his hands on his hips slowly nodding in understanding. "I am assuming that she has some bad juju with the dude?"

Yang rolled her eyes. "That's one way to put it."

Talon stared at the blonde before giving a weak smile behind his mask. "Well, good luck with that." He turned around to leave before he remembered something. He turned around to Yang. "Hey just a heads up, your boyfriend with the blue hair is outside."

To say Yang was angry was selling it short. Her hair lit up like crazy as she clenched her fists. "He is not my boyfriend. Running out to leave me to these assholes made him lose some serious points."

Talon was surprised. He thought he was her boy but it look like he didn't have the skills to combat the club. Saying he up and abandoned Yang was like saying he sold her to the club. He was at a loss of words. "Wow….Just ...wow."

Yang nodded before grabbing her Gauntlets and scroll on a display case nearby. Checking her ammo then her scroll, she sighed. "Well, I better find my team before something bad happens to them. Thanks for the help lover boy."

Talon shook his head. "Sorry, Milady, but as much as you are beautiful, You be better off with my younger brother Jaune than me."

Yang whirled around to meet his eyes. "Jaune? You're his brother?" Talon nodded. "Older brother. And yes, that's why I am here. To check up on him."

Yang slowly nodded. If Jaune was anything like Talon, he would fill out nicely in the future. Remembering Pyrrha's stake in him, made her regret even considering going for the goofy knight. "Well, I am not his girl. Someone else has that role."

Talon whistled "Wow, he has one?"

Yang shook her head. "No, she is trying to wait for him to ask her."

Talon face-palmed. "Then she might as well be asking a brick wall. Jaune is not the type to ask. He's been that kid who undervalues himself. Basically he won't ask because he thinks he has no good qualities a woman would like."

Yang grinned. "No kidding. Well, He does have some good qualities about himself. If he was any better, I'd date him myself."

Talon's look showed Yang he was about to give either a lecture of a piece of advice. "Any girl who wants a man in her life would forge the man she wants, Jaune may not have the qualities now, but if he has potential, then what's stopping you from making him yours? Remember, A sword isn't considered the best because it's on display, It's the best because it was forged that way, it was wielded in battle to make it that way, even if it has seen better days, the only two things you can do is melt it, or reforge it."

Yang stared at the man before slowly nodding. "Maybe you're right. I might try my hand in dating Jaune. Thanks for the tip, Shinobi-boy. Now if you-" Her scroll started beeping and she picked it up. Despite the scroll being transparent, Talon decided to look away. Seeing Yang's grinning face turn to one of concern he tilted his head. "Something wrong?"

Yang looked up at her savior. "My team's being attacked by a paladin."

"A what?"

"A robot."

"Ah." Talon realized. "Ah, well, you better get out there."

Yang smiled and cocked her Gauntlets chambering her rounds. "Thanks, I'll see you around."

She sprinted out the door. Talon stayed a minute i the same place before he too walked out. Yang was on her bike, The blue haired boy staring at her, a bit red-faced. Must have been yelled at by the girl. Yang started her bike and sped off waving at Talon and leaving the blue haired boy behind. Talon watched as she rounded a corner before turning to go the other way. "I doubt it. Brawnen. I doubt it very much."

Time to find his little brother. Time to kick his ass.


Hey guys,

Sorry about the extended hiatus. To put it short, I came very close to losing my job. Not because I was under-performing or anything, but because we lost multiple contract in security. Any other security guards understand that when you lose clients, you lose money and I went down from getting 800 dollars to only receiving 300 if I am lucky. Anyway, I was bored Like I said above, I saw a photo on Facebook showing Yang chained up in Junior's club being force to pay off the bills she caused during her first visit. Next to her is a Jar and sign saying that she is allowing the customers to do things to her. I immediately came up with an Idea that before any one does anything to her, she is saved. I was originally gonna put in Jaune, but I thought what if it's an OC. And not only any OC but A brother of Jaune. Hence I created Talon Arc. Alluding from Star Wars Starkiller/Galen Marek, Soul Calibur's Taki, and Marvel's Captain America, Talon is a skilled SOB. However to make him Human and not a Gary Sue, He has a weakness. Being a Glass Cannon is one of the worst weakness you can ever have.

Here's his Bio, Feel free to utilize the OC for any story. just let me know if you do use him. be nice to see where people take his story.


Bio of Talon Marek Arc

Name: Talon Arc

Affiliation: Unknown.

Side: Neutral/Good

Sibling: Older brother of Jaune Arc, Second oldest in the Arc Family

Semblance: Force Aura- The ability to project Aura to do anything he desires.

Weapons:

Longsword-Ferrum Tempestas (Storm Blade) and Shield-Tempestas Variegatum (Storm Sentry)

Twin Kodachi blades-Furor Impius Tempestas and Messor Tempestas (Storm Fury and Storm Reaper)

SDC Combat pistol (Unknown)

Personality: Stoic and silent, but is mentoring and caring when he needs to be. He is not afraid to spill blood, but he defines his kills as people too far gone to reintegrate into society. He is very formal to people and rarely jokes. Despite being the estrange brother to Jaune, he acts as a secondary father figure to the huntsman in training, always reprimanding him when he commits a foolish act. However he does care for his little brother and was the one who stole Crocea Mors from the family to give to Jaune. He has no affiliation with Ozpin, sensing a distrust to the headmaster and all those who follow him. Ozpin has attempted to persuade Talon to become a Huntsman to no avail as Talon views Huntsman as glorified mercenaries.

Strengths: He is a master with the Sword, able to wield it traditionally and unconventionally. His go to style is the Sith Shien: A stance where he holds the sword in reverse. When the sword is not applicable in the given situation, he will switch to his Kodachi's. His speed and his agility are legend, having been given the title, the untouchable Ninja. Able to use long combo like techniques, most opponents do not stand a chance when engaged with Talon. He has beaten Qrow and Winter due to them underestimating his ability to dodge and sneak around them. He has even given Glynda Goodwitch a hard time despite her semblance.

Philosophy: Talon believes in all out combat. He holds nothing back in fighting. To him, to limit yourself to morals and honor, makes you both predictable and vulnerable. He also understands a lot about life choices and the consequences resulted by said choices.

Weakness: He is a glass cannon. He is very powerful, but a few hits can take him down. Opponents however have made accounts that despite being a weakness, Talon is almost untouchable given his Agility and Speed. When utilizing Semblance, Talon can be taken down if his Aura is brought down by extensive use. However, Jaune rarely finds this a hindrance due to his extremely large aura pool. While there is no record of him being defeated, He has been in scenarios where fleeing was the best option. He has fought Raven, and Cinder on equal footing and he believes until he is a full master of his skills, he will fall if he engages them again

Attire: He wears the Remnant version of the Jedi Adventure robes. (SW: Force Unleashed 1). He also sport the Modified Armor ( ACGearmaker-Deviantart)

Style: When wielding Ferrum Tempestas: Sith Shien (Starkiller's Stance) When wielding Furor Impius Tempestas and Messor Tempestas: Taki's Stance. W hen Unarmed: Practitioner in multiple styles similar to such as Muay Thai, Boxing, Krav Maga, Shurikenjutsu, Tae Kwon Do, Savate, Professional Wrestling, Wushu, Judo, Brazilian Jiu-jitsu, (Note: Just to clarify, he knows and practices moves from the styles, does not mean he's a master.)

Alludes to: Starkiller/Taki/Steve Rogers (Star Wars, Marvel and Soul Calibur.)