Chrono Saga:
Legend of the Chrono Star
Chapter 1:Introducing Baraste and His Father
The young boy was slowly awoken from his sleep and saw the shining sun burning in his eyes like a phoenix was hovering outside. He got out of his bed and dressed properly for the day. He put on a brown trousers and Brown boots. He looked around and yawned. He quickly grabbed his white undershirt and put it on. After that he put on his white overshirt. It was rather large for him but was not too long, only too wide. As he began to run down the stairs of his house his shirt would wag with his motions. He called out to his father.
"Father?! I'm up!" He said. His voice was a nice tone and volume. It was soothing. It also had the tone of a 16 year old. This was fitting because he was 16.
"Ah, Baraste! Youre up, good. Today is the big day. So, how do you feel?" His father said.
Baraste winced. "It's Bar! Dont say BARASTE! Its too long anyway," Baraste paused and then began again,"I'm fine, today is the day we go hunting! Yeah!" Bar yelled.
The city they lived in was large and overpopulated. It was separated into sectors known as Leys. The cross point between the leys were known as Ley Lines. The city was known as, none other than, Leyline. Baraste was named after the mayor. Bar hated the name, because Baraste was the last name of the mayor of Ley 1, or Kintra. Total there were 10 Leys each one with a specific name, named by the citizens. The overlord, or Master, of the entire city called them by the Ley number.
Bar looked around, the sun was still bright and he felt it through the window. Leyline had vehicles but the smog was not powerful today, like it usualy is. Bar was looking forward to the hunting trip. He grabbed the sword off the wall. It was a quick to use but weak, dull hunting sword. They walked outside and hailed a cab out to city limits. This would be the beginning of Barastes Chrono adventure.
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How u like first chapter? Short,sweet and to the point. It introduces Baraste and his father, and Brings out the main current setting. R/R about what it is supposed to Deliver, not about how much action there is and what not. Next Chapter:The Thrill Of The Hunt
Legend of the Chrono Star
Chapter 1:Introducing Baraste and His Father
The young boy was slowly awoken from his sleep and saw the shining sun burning in his eyes like a phoenix was hovering outside. He got out of his bed and dressed properly for the day. He put on a brown trousers and Brown boots. He looked around and yawned. He quickly grabbed his white undershirt and put it on. After that he put on his white overshirt. It was rather large for him but was not too long, only too wide. As he began to run down the stairs of his house his shirt would wag with his motions. He called out to his father.
"Father?! I'm up!" He said. His voice was a nice tone and volume. It was soothing. It also had the tone of a 16 year old. This was fitting because he was 16.
"Ah, Baraste! Youre up, good. Today is the big day. So, how do you feel?" His father said.
Baraste winced. "It's Bar! Dont say BARASTE! Its too long anyway," Baraste paused and then began again,"I'm fine, today is the day we go hunting! Yeah!" Bar yelled.
The city they lived in was large and overpopulated. It was separated into sectors known as Leys. The cross point between the leys were known as Ley Lines. The city was known as, none other than, Leyline. Baraste was named after the mayor. Bar hated the name, because Baraste was the last name of the mayor of Ley 1, or Kintra. Total there were 10 Leys each one with a specific name, named by the citizens. The overlord, or Master, of the entire city called them by the Ley number.
Bar looked around, the sun was still bright and he felt it through the window. Leyline had vehicles but the smog was not powerful today, like it usualy is. Bar was looking forward to the hunting trip. He grabbed the sword off the wall. It was a quick to use but weak, dull hunting sword. They walked outside and hailed a cab out to city limits. This would be the beginning of Barastes Chrono adventure.
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How u like first chapter? Short,sweet and to the point. It introduces Baraste and his father, and Brings out the main current setting. R/R about what it is supposed to Deliver, not about how much action there is and what not. Next Chapter:The Thrill Of The Hunt