Dragon age 2 fan fiction

DISCLAMER: I do not own dragon age 2, any charters, or places.

This is my first fanfic so any advice you may have would be appreciated.

Chapter 1

I am a typical twenty year old girl-gamer, I work in a comic book store and my life is normal, boring but normal. I've always wanted more tho, I've always dreamt of living in a fantasy world of dragons or aliens or elves (I kinda have a thing for elves). But I'm stuck here, or so I thought.

I was working one day, just a normal day when an old woman walked in the store.

"You look bored" she said approaching me.

"Just a little bit, can I help you find something?" I said with a fake smile.

"No. You interest me" she said looking me over. She sounded like Caption Catherin Janway form Star Trek Voyager.

"Ok" I said starting to feel uneasy

"How would you like to go on an adventure?" she said almost seductively.

I raised an eyebrow and took a step back.

"Um, I think I'm good." I said taking another steep, yep really uneasy.

"HA! You are too cautious! You're not like that when you play your video games." She said smirking.

Alarms went off in my head. STALKER! "I uh…hate to do…something." I said and quickly walked away.

She laughed and everything want black.

I awoke in a field with a killer headache. OH CRAP! She kidnapped me! I am so SCREWED! I heard male voices and panicked I stayed down hoping they didn't know I was there.

"Oh come on Garrett!" one man said. What I know that voice, but I couldn't be. I sat up and looked in the direction of the voices. OM efen G its default male Hawk and Carver from Dagon age 2.

They notice me and look at me confused probity by me staring at them or because I'm lying in a field or both.

"Are you alight?" Hawk asked approaching.

"Um, yea I think so. Where am I?" I ask still in shock

"Just outside of Lothering" Hawk answered

"Why are you laying in the middle or a field?" caver asked

"I..I have no idea; there was an old woman…" I then realized the same woman who played Janeway also did the voice for Flemeth, oh crap was that Flemeth.

"Lets get you to the village" Hawk said holding out his hand "I'm Garrett but prefer Hawk and this is my brother Caver" Carver smiled and nodded.

I took his hand and said "it's a pleasure to meet you, I'm Lilly"

I was in Furled, in Thedas a world of dragons, and dark spawn and archdeamon and elves (oh elves).

We started walking and I noticed hawk carried a staff; he was a mage that means, Bethany! I had to find out what happened so far, if Bethany was still alive I might be able to save her.

This is not going to be a normal day like I thought.