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Chapter 1: The "Lady-Man"
It was a warm summer afternoon in Tokyo. The air seemed just right for a stroll.
Finally a break from the week of what seemed to be a perpetual hell zone. In such warmth sat the granddaughter of the Higurashi shrine. Yes. That old shrine. It was the type of home that scum kids chose as a teepee victim. So sadly, the now 19-year-old girl had to find a lick of coolness for her sacred reputation.
Kagome was her name. She was definitely a sight for sore eyes! Her skin was as soft as petals and her chocolate eyes small tidal pools of bliss and fun. Her raven hair was almost so lengthy; people thought it was born 2 days before her. Even Kagome's very own beating heart was beautiful and caring. She mirrored the perfect girl. BESIDES her tint of bad luck. Today was the day where this bad luck would be yet another mistake. You'll understand me soon enough.
Sitting under the shade of the largest tree, The God Tree, Kagome was joined by her overgrown cat Buyo. The corpulent cream-colored cat stretched across her apathetically. Kagome looked down at the animal with a smirk. She shook her head as it began to play with the hem of her blue jeans. The teen reached down and scratched his head giggling bubbly.
"I'm glad your having fun Buyo…" She spoke softly. Kagome looked down at the dusty old novel that sat stiffly besides her. Her tone suddenly went to anger." Ha! I hate this stupid book! I just want to throw it down the toilet! Why is Gramps making me read it! Demons don't even exist!" she took the decrepit piece of literature in her hands. The binding was held together by the love of tape and prayers. The cover was so faded; you could only read it in ultra-violet vision. What a way to enjoy the summer. Reading myths to please the close to rare visitors of the shrine. It suddenly dawned on her that she was wasting her time. Hey, I said she was beautiful, not brilliant. Kagome fixed her tank top and stood up. Buyo and the book toppled to the ground. The cat meowing dramatically, the book slammed shut. Literally, the shrine helper put her foot down.
"I'M THROUGH WITH SUMMER READING! IT'S NOT LIKE WE'LL HAVE ANY VISITORS TO IMPRE-" Just as the word 'impress', came to mid birth on her tongue, it stopped. From the not-so-quiet-anymore solitude she hogged, came the sound of unfamiliar cursing from an unfamiliar voice. Curiously, Kagome's head turned over to the voice. Standing at the top of the shrine steps pacing was a person. A hooded old person from the looks of it. Kagome looked closer. The stranger's hair was long. Longer than her own. Kagome looked closer at the elderly citizen with glistening silver hair that curved around their neck. Squinting in the sunlight of the distant image she gasped and cursed silently to herself.
'Oh my Grandall!! A visitor was standing there for the whole time! AN ELDERLY VISITOR AT THAT!' Kagome ducked behind the tree in case the figure turned back to reprimand her for their long wait. She kept her eyes locked on the person. 'Aw man! Elderly people are cranky when they're mad! What should I do??' Kagome pressed her back up against the bark of the tree until her heart stopped pinning her to it. She studied her options.
Make Souta do it.
Make Souta do it.
Make Souta do it
Do it herself
Options A, B, and C seemed to be quite alluring, yet she long decided that she wouldn't be able to sleep properly with the cruelty of her plans. Sighing, she straightened the "STAFF" pin on her chest and made her way over to the shrine steps to the pacing old woman. 'All right…let's get this over with… Steady…steady…it's for the concert tickets…it's for the tickets.' She mentally coached herself. Kagome got closer and closer to the Shrine Entrance. She dug through her head for her lines then rolled her eyes still walking.
"Good afternoon ma'am, welcome to the Higurashi shrine-" The teen stopped abruptly as she felt the sting of shock plumage down her throat. The pacing body stopped so their back was facing her bewildered expression. They had heard her and had stopped their anxious footwork. Now things were starting to get weird. Even from getting a glance of their back Kagome could see, that was not the body of an old woman. The body was slim. Masculine. Chiseled. It was the body that most teenage guys wanted: a slim build. From what Kagome could see, this was a male. A young male. She could also see that this male for the most part cared about what he looked like. He wore a red hoodie vest with a white t-shirt underneath. His black baggy jeans swayed through the risen breeze. His red converse was "out-of-this-world" fresh.
Still "befumbled", (a word Kagome used frequently) she stood with her jaw opened. A fly tried to enter her mouth however so she quickly closed it. Her mind spinned. 'What's with the white hair?? This is not an old lady! It's a young man! Wait? What's he saying??'
"Oh god-Oh god-Oh god-Oh god!!" The guy said. He was so wrapped up in his own worrisome thoughts to even notice her standing there. He began pacing again. That was when she got a glimpse of his face. A gorgeous face, shrouded in worry. His unusual eye color however made the coo-coo clocks fly! Kagome backed up in disbelief.
'IMPOSSIBLE! SILVER HAIR! GOLD EYES!! I'VE GONE NUTS!!' She cried mentally while having a mental breakdown. The boy kept pacing
"Oh great! This can't be happening to me!! Stupid well! I need to go!" He said hurriedly to himself. He glanced down at a silver watch around his wrist. Kagome took a gulp of air for courage to face this odd looking person. She cleared her throat in an attention-grabbing manner.
"EXCUSE ME SIR! CAN I HELP YOU!" The guy looked up at her like if she was a pest. Kagome fought staring at him due to his appearance.
"What the hell do you want?" He snapped impatiently. Almost instantly, Kagome was offended. For this dudes looks, he was pretty rude!
"Well I can ask you the same question! Why are you here! Do you need ticket information or something-!" Before the teen could finish though, he had pushed past her roughly.
"Move it sweet heart! You're in my way!!" The young man took off in a sprint, running behind the house in speeds of light. Kagome gasped as she was knocked on the dirt. Looking around, she saw that he was heading to the well house. Not good! There was a lot of expensive stuff in there! Kagome panicked and stood up quickly. She was an average runner, but she had to be twice the speed of Jesse Owens to beat this guy! Boy he was fast. From her little La-La picnic on the ground, she saw nothing good about that guy, which probably meant no paycheck from her Grandfather. Fearing no "Kasmik Krss" music will ever some to her, the girl stood up and bolted after him.
"HEY! STOP! YOU CAN'T GO IN THERE!!" She screamed. The silver haired gold-eyed guy looked back at her as he sprinted with such alacrity. Kagome was already tired and he looked like he run circles around her. Finally, the odd boy stopped and quickly slid through the doors of the well house. Kagome ran inside hot in his heels. She faced the hooded "criminal" as he was now looking down the well chanting: Crap I'm so late! Where is it? Where's the jewel!! Where is it!" Kagome shut the door behind her as she glared angrily at this guy. How dare he run through their home onto private property! How dare he be so rude to her! And why was he so worried? What the heck is so good about the jewel?
"HEY! You! What in Sam's Hill are you doing in here! Get the heck out! Or I'll call the police!" She threatened bravely. Her enemy turned to her. This time he was smiling. Kagome noticed a small fang-like tooth curl a tiny bit over his lip. His fingernails were long and pointed. In fact they looked more like claws. The boy who was her age smiled mischievously as one of his legs was half over the lip of the well.
"You got spunk kid. Heh. The police. That's almost funny." Kagome began to feel her legs go stiff cold. She shivered a bit in fear. Why wasn't he scared? All he did as smile at her. The smile made her blush however. The boy looked at his watch again before pondering. "I don't know if you're healthy enough for this, but since I found you, you're coming back with me." He pointed to himself as if she just wouldn't understand.
"W-w-w-hat!! NO WAY!" Just as the terrified girl was about to run for help, she was lunged into her capturers arms." Let go of me!! HEEEELLLLLPP!!"
"WILL YOU SHUT UP?! I JUST NEED YOU FOR SOMETHING! IT'S JUST A STUPID TEST! YOU'LL COME BACK!!"HE STRUGGLED TO KEPP Kagome still as she fussed with him.
"LET ME GO! LEAVE ME ALONE!!" The boy rolled his eyes and leapt down the depths of the well. Kagome's screams of confusion and fear echoed as they fell downward.
"Hey girl! Hold on tight!" Kagome stopped her scream for a talk break.
"ARE YOU CRAZY! WHAT ARE YOU DOING! WHAT'S GOING ON!"
just then, a blue light engulfed the two…the boy's hood fell down…
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