Description: Write about a cat warned a about not doing something, but he or she does it a anyway. It should result in something bad, like them getting cold and sick. It's pretty open-ended, and I can see a lot of different directions it can be taken.

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"This is the last time we allow those fish eaters to cross our border," Birchstar said from the top of her rock "Sunclan has had enough."

Yowls of approval came from the crowd below

"We attack at dawn," she said as the clan chattered excitedly. This would teach Streamclan once and for all. In the past moon, five signs of their crossings had been found. Today, actually seeing an unfamiliar cat had been the last straw.

Birchstar's friend, Aldershade, walked up to her.

"You are provoked to easily my friend," he said "I feel this battle won't go over very well."

"Oh quit your complaining," Birchstar replied "Your always worrying about one thing or another. Besides, it's time we show those water dwellers we're not to be messed with."

"Yes I know," Aldershade replied "I've just gotta bad feeling about this."

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The group of cats crept slowly along the base of the trees, and quietly passed into Streamclan territory.

Birchstar looked behind her to see her clanmates closely following her. Aldershade looked at her as if to ask, are you sure. Birchstar looked on ahead, towards Streamclan camp.

"Come on guys," she whispered to her clanmates

They nodded and followed her into the camp.

"INTRUDERS," a voice called out

Birchstar looked up in panic to see a cat on gaurd duty was alerting all the others. This was bad, this was bad.

Cats were coming out of their dens to see the intruders. Then, suddenly, the sleepy cats were awoken and began to attack. Birchstar looked around in horror to see that her clanmates were losing.

"Birchstar," a cry sounded out "Help me Birchstar."

She looked over to see Alsershade, just befor a giant paw raked over him and he toppled over.

What had she done

"Retreat Sunclan, retreat," she howled over the noise of the battle "Retreat Retreat."

She hurriedly ran to drag Aldershade and a couple of others came to help her.

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"I'm not sure how much longer he has," said Rivermist, the clan medicine cat "He wounds are deep, but he wanted to talk to you."

Birchstar walked slowly into the medicine den, the sharp smell of herbs greeting her. She was overcome by guilt. Her mistake had caused what was soon to be the death of one of her greatest friends.

"H-hello," a weak voice came from a little bit ahead "Birchstar... I-"

"I'm so sorry Aldershade," she sobbed "I should have listened to you."

Aldershade tried again

"I'm sorry I failed you in the battle," he said "I di-"

"No, no," muttered Birchstar "this is my fault, it's all my fault."

"I did try to warn you," Aldershade wheezed out, then broke off into a coughing fit "I-I told you it was a bad idea... I t-told you s-so..."

And with that, Aldershade went limp, never to breath again, leaving Birchstar alone, yowling in pain.

The End.