Well it looks like my previous story worked and now I am making my first real story: Grouptale. Now I've been all over looking for Grouptale fanfics, but none of them were interesting or was done the way I had in mind so now I'm making them if you know anyone who likes the grouptale au please tell them to read this (PLEASE NOTICE ME!). So I guess I should get to the point. Just so you guys know the character's development are partly inspired by "poi-rozen" from deviant art and a little bit of real life people I know.
Grouptale is not my original idea, only this story is mine
Toby fox owns the rights to Undertale (read that now cause I'm not going to always repeat it)
Chapter 1: The Seven Humans
MT EBOTT 201X
︎ ︎?'s POV
At the foot of Mt Ebott, near the town of Ebott, there is a large hole. At the bottom of the hole you see several children that fell down. Six of them are the humans that, in another universe, were killed and had their souls taken from them But nobody knows that and the last one is... a child. While they are unconscious from the fall you read their profile that appears like someone on fanfiction wrote it.
1. John owner of the light blue soul
Male
16 y/o
Ginger, pale skin with freckles and red medium length on the chubby side but not too fat. Wears a black hoodie with grey sweat pants. He is a heavy gamer and a bit lazy(though he will never admit it). He is bipolar and sometimes quiet which is a result from him not having many friends. He is secretly homosexual but only his sister knows and accepts him for it. He is kinda a cuddler but he makes sure nobody knows that. He is obsessed with puzzles from jigsaw, to mazes, to mysteries . His one real friend is Jerod who despite their differences are pretty close. He loves the joy of laughter and making other people laugh. He has a strange addiction to feeling silk which is why he carries a red silk ribbon in his hoodie pocket. He also carries a toy knife that he likes to use as a toothpick.
2. Jerod owner of the orange soul
Male
16 y/o
Light skin but with tan arms and legs and dirty blond hair that is shaven a 1/2 inch long. Wears orange-indigo basketball shorts and an orange tank top with a bandanna on their head and carries fitness gloves in their large military backpack that they carry around. He is very athletic and is best friends with John. He is in his school's wrestling team which he enjoys. He is ticklish (not important but only John knows that) and has an easy sense of humor, which results in John practically taking advantage of this info. Though he is great at school he is dyslectic and gets tutoring from Iris.
3. Delilah owner of the blue soul
Female
14 y/o
Light/fair skin with brown hair that just barely reaches their neck. Wears a white dress shirt under a dark red button up vest with a salmon skirt and ballerina shoes. She is John's younger sister. She loves ballet and is the "popular girl" as well as the group leader of her school's ballet club. She is also very charitable and every year has a bake sale for charity. When it comes to looks and style you see her.
4. Iris owner of the purple soul
Female
12 y/o
Indian with long brown hair. Wears a peach sweater with cargo shorts and a scarf, has on very cloudy glasses, and carries around a thick notebook and a pencil. She is a child prodigy and moved up several grades into John and Jerod's grade. She is good friends with Delilah and always attends her performances. She is very studious and likes to talk sophisticated. She loves to write down lots of notes which results in her getting many notebooks, her current notebook is all blank.
5. Diego owner of the green soul
Male
14 y/o
Latino with caramel skin and black wavy hair. He wears a simple green t-shirt and cargo shorts with an apron. He loves to cook (obviously) and he is usually seen helping out at the local soup kitchen. There is not one bad bone in him but he will still fight in self defense, which is why he took self defense classes to be able to protect himself but still not hurt anyone. Also as a weapon he carries his pan since its more convient and nonlethal. He also helps out Delilah with her bake sale and donates to her charity.
6. Caleb owner of the Yellow soul
Male
10 y/o
Latino with caramel skin and black hair in a crew cut. Little brother to Diego. Wears brown cargo pants with a red flannel shirt. He has with him a empty toy revolver and a authentic cowboy hat that he got for his birthday. He is athletic (not as much as Jerod) but also a gamer. He loves shooting games but not one where you kill the innocent. He met John when they were playing Call of Duty online. He does like to play with toy Nerf guns. Although he can be a stubborn person he is friendly and very affectionate (he will hug and cuddle almost anyone).
7. Frisk owner of the red soul
Male
10 y/o
Asian with dark brown skin that has a somewhat yellow complexion. Brown hair that reaches to his neck. His eyes are for some reason always squinting and looks almost like his eyes are closed. Wears blue shorts and a blue-purple striped shirt. He is sometimes quiet but when he's not he can be pretty flirty to people of both sexes. He is a real pacifist which doesn't help since he gets bullied from time to time. He became best friends with Caleb when he saved him from bullies. His other friend Iris helps him with school work. He has a band aid on his left cheek from when he recently fell off his bike and carries a stick because...well just because.
Wow, that sure is a lot of exposition, you think to yourself. So it seems they all already know each other and get along with each other pretty well. You seen this before but the question never gets answered, why would anyone climb the mountain. Don't they know the legend, "Those who climb Mt Ebott never return,". Could it be an accident? Could it be out of curiosity? Or maybe it might be...But then your attention goes back to the kids who are just waking up. I'll put that on hold for now I will watch them from where I am. This is very interesting.
Frisk's POV
"groan Where am I, what happened," you say to yourself. You get up feeling sore from the fall. Sore, why am I just sore and not have a broken anything? You hear several other groans and look around. There are people around you on the ground. Taking a closer look you all recognize each other. You all call each other's name.
"Caleb"
"Frisk"
"Diego"
"Delilah"
"John"
"Jerod"
"Iris"
"Frisk! I'm go glad your okay", Caleb said giving him a tight hug which you returned with a cheeky grin.
"Likewise buddy, but where are we? Do you remember what happened" You ask with a hint of concern. You cant remember what you were doing to end up here.
"I-I don't know," Caleb replied, "all I can remember was that we all were heading towards the mountain for some reason and then we all fell down here." He then took off his hat and started scratching his head in confusion.
"Oh I don't remember either" Your face goes a little sad, "but at least were okay. C'mon lets check on the others, though they probably don't remember either.
"Hey John need a hand" Jerod asked extending his arm to help him up, him already up on his feet.
"I-I'm okay, nothings broken. Looks like the flowers broke our fall. Wait, flowers?" John says while getting himself up. Looking around it's indeed true that you all fell on a patch of yellow flowers that surprisingly are not crushed at all.
"I've never heard of flowers breaking a person's fall, fascinating," Iris says inspecting a flower. "These look like the town's Buttercup flowers but different. Look at the blossom part it looks like a sunflower but the disc pale and larger, also the stem is as thick as my thumb, must be some sort of evolution to absorb the sunlight easier down here," Iris starts to draw a sketch of the flower and write down some notes. "The whole flower feels pretty sturdy yet soft, that must be why we survived the fall".
"Wow your right their also kinda pretty", said Delilah as she sniffed one of them. Iris grunted in response being too occupied with her notes.
John was ironically getting impatient. "Thats nice and all but can we please focus on getting out of here". You giggle, John's patience changes based on his mood, usually he's the really patient one.
Everyone agreed in unison and started to figure out what to do next. Looking up you see the sunlight top of the hole, which is about forty feet high. Thank god for the flowers. It looks like this hole is actually a cavern, stalagmites and all. You begin to worry that there is no way out but up, which looks impossible. Looking to your right you see a tunnel with what looks like an ancient doorway. I wonder whats in there, the exit, oooh maybe treasure. While everyone else argues on how to climb up you head towards the doorway. "I'll just look in there and come back", you tell yourself. He looks back to see if anyone saw him, no one has. You take a deep breath and step through the door.
*Several minutes later*
Caleb's POV
UHHH! How much longer are they going to argue you thought. This have been going on for several minutes and your freaking bored. They didn't even let him contribute.
"Hey frisk what do you th-". You look behind you and he's not there. "huh" You do a 360 turn and still no frisk. You need to tell the others. "GUYSSS!" You yell loudly that echoes across the cavern. Everyone jumps and stares at you wide eyed.
"Bro what was that for?!" Diego exclaimed. He didn't look angry, he never snapped at anyone, just surprised.
" Well you were all so preoccupied with your little debate it was the only way. Was any of you watching?"
"Frisk? I thought Iris was watching them"
"No, you know I get distracted by my notes Jerod. Delilah was your brother watching them?"
"Uh I can speak for m-"
"No he was too busy arguing like an idiot" John was glaring daggers at Delilah who scoffed and turned her heels.
"So he's gone?" You are starting to get anxious. Knowing him he will probably keep wandering off until he runs into somebody, hits a dead end, or gets hur-
Suddenly a loud pained scream rings out in the distance that grabs everyone's attention. Following that scream is a call for help. By the sound of that voice they know immediately who it is. With no words spoken they all look at each other and runs towards the source of the voice.
Don't die Frisk, stay Determined
Wow I didn't think I would finish the first chapter so soon, but here we are. In case you were wondering I change the tutu to a skirt because it didn't seem practical that she would be wearing it when she was climbing the mountain. I was also going to get rid of the toy knife but I didn't want to change the character too much. Finally the reason I stated that John was homosexual was because...well your gonna have to wait for the rest of the story.(DEAL WITH IT HOMOPHOBES)
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