This is the beginning of my first story but the chapters will get much longer than this. Be as critical as you wish. It probably won't be rated M but will be UkUs. Obviously, I do not own this series.
"Dude, this is gonna be so awesome!"
"Alfred, please wait or at least help."
Alfred halted and turned back to assist his twin, Matthew. This was their first day off from school for summer break. It was Alfred's idea to go to the nearby water park to celebrate their short period of freedom and both him and his brother were very excited. Although it would surely be crowded, neither cared to mention it as they didn't wish to ruin the fun.
Unloading the bags of their change of clothes, towels and other necessities, Matthew closed the trunk and locked the car, proceeding to walk forward. Alfred was oozing enthusiasm, trying not to race forward. They hurriedly went to the front, payed their seperate admissions ("It's alright, Matt." "Alfred, we're not going through this again.") and traveled inside to the closest bathroom to change.
Coming out, Alfred had on a light blue swim shirt that matched his eyes and swimming trunks with the American flag branded on it ("It's not a fashion statement. I know my rights."), whilst Matthew wore matching red swimming trunks and swim shirt with white accents. Both had put their goggles over their blond hair and kept their glasses safely in one of their bags. At one corner, Alfred was able to find a chair to put their things on; Matthew taking out a bottle of sunscreen. "Wait, Alfred. I have to put this on you or else you're going to burn up." Not that he actually ever did but better to be safe, right?
"Alright, fine. Hurry up", complied Alfred, pouting his lips and puffing up his cheeks a little at having to wait even a little longer. Matthew chuckled slightly at Alfreds face but went on to quickly apply the sunscreen and waiting for Alfred to do the same for him.
"Finally! Where should we go first?"
"How about we just try to get used to the water first in that one", suggested Matthew, pointing to a shallow end of a small pool that lead into a short stream filled with people floating easily which circled around the main part of the park. Seemed easy enough. Lifeguards were standing nearby anyway so it was all good.