What's up guys, new story because my last one was getting ZERO feedback so I thought that you guys didn't like it. In this story I will put a fan of RWBY in Remnant so deal with it. If you don't like these stories I'm sorry. But if you do ENJOY! When doing the voice of the mystical narrator use the voice from Stanley Parable!
(Mystical Narrator POV)
Let me tell you about a girl named Elizabeth Jane Smith. She has bright green eyes, and shoulder length black hair, and a pug named Frankie. She lives a normal boring life, but one day that all changes.
(Elizabeth POV)
I got up at seven like usual, took a shower, fed Frankie, and got ready for work. But as I get out of my Parents home I see some black clouds on the horizon.
"Hmm I hope I don't get soaked." I think out loud to my self. I start walking towards Walmart, but suddenly feel a drop land. Then more landed, and more until in was completely drenched. I entered the store, checked myself in, and started working one of the cash registers.
I was almost jumping in joy when my shift was over because I hated my job. I then noticed that it was STILL raining! I then walked home slowly, getting as wet as if I went to a pool.
When I reached my door it was slightly ajar for some reason. I walk in and call out to my parents. No reply. I was actually kind of scared.
"Pull yourself together Elizabeth this is just your imagination" I thought. But out of no where the culprit springs up and grabs my wrists. I scream but he puts a hand over my mouth, but I bite his hand and elbow him in the gut.
"Arg ow" he screeches, then advances at me with a knife. I've taken self defense classes so I know what to do, but fear freezes me in place. He stabs me between the ribs.
"Ahhhhhhhhh" I scream along with a few swears. My dad rushes in with a bat and is relieved when I tell him it was a bad dream. He smiles gets me a glass of water and leaves. I can't sleep so I get on my laptop with my earbuds and watch the first episode of RWBY a show that I loved. When I was finished I started to type more on my story of Scarlett before sleep wraps its warm embrace around me.
I wake up in my bed I get dressed, take a shower, and head downstairs to feed Frankie. Since today is my day off work I decide to go to my favorite cafe in town.
As I walk down the street with a happy skip I see an odd looking pawnshop I've never seen before, intrigued I head down that way. I walk in and the man greets me with a warm hello. I say hello back and see a rather peculiar object. It was a box labeled Pandora in fancy cursive. I look at the box and decide to open it. But as my hand reaches the top the man snatches the box away.
"But sir!" I say "This is on sale". He replies "not anymore". "Why not?" I say being my curious self. "your asking too many questions!" he says. I snort and knock the lid of the box off. "Boop" I say playfully. Bad mistake.
It seemed like nothing at first just a single little tug. The man yells "run!". But I just say "why what could opening a box POSSIBLY do!?" I yell. Soon the tug from the box is getting harder and I can feel myself getting closer to the box. Then suddenly we both get pulled in the box. I scream in agony as the box does its magic. When I wake up I'm in the middle of a forest.
"w-where am I?" I turn to see the pawn shop guy get up. I slap him, and he yells "what is that for!?" "Why do you keep something like that in your store?!" you yell.
"Well I-" he's interrupted by a claw going through his chest and I scream at the top of my lungs. I begin running but can feel the beast catching up.
I eventually slow down and the beast tackles me. I close my eyes and brace for death.
Sorry for a short first chapter. I'll try to get more down next chapter. I'm just starting out so tips, pointers, and personal preferences are gladly accepted. AAAAND I will see you in the next chapter!