Hello all peoples, ponies, brony's and pegasisters, this story is another human ends up in equestria and tries to fit in kind of story.
There will be romance, adventure and random weird stuff.
I enjoy portraying myself as different characters in different worlds and so this is kind of a self insert but only partialy,
though since I dont know what would happen if I really ended up in another world.
Disclaimer: I do not own mlp fim, anything but my OC "Stolen Thunder" Lazyness + stuf I make up, is owned by their respective owners.
Chap 1 Everything has a begining
Walking through a dark forest, I've been going for what feels like hours. Further down the path I'm walking on there is sudenly a light,
dim at first but steadily getting brighter. I turn around to try too get away from the light but I cant find the path,
just a dark void. Slowly everything around me turns into a bright white light and I wake up at the sound of birds.
"A dream huh?" I mumble to myself, stretching as I wake up. Strange? I don't remember my bed being this uncomfortable.
And why does it feel like im outside? Opening my eyes I notice that I'm in some forest,
"Hello blue hair?" I say as my bang falls in front of my eyes. "That's strange?" I note as I bring up my hand to examine the hair.
Shocked to se a hoof instead of my hand I look over the rest of my body.
"Am I? No that's not posible!" I exclaim. Looking around I see a water hole, saying "well aint that convenient"
with a smirk on my face. Walking a bit wobbly in my new body I make my way over to the edge of the water,
positioning myself with my left side against it so I can see a full reflection.
"Well well well, I certainly have become a pony." Looking over my equine body I note that I have a Light blue coat,
my mane and tail are deep blue except a lighter blue strand in my tail. "Oh my, I'm a pegasus!" I hadn't noticed them before,
but there they where, a fine pair of wings. Looking away from the water, towards my side I look at my left wing as I try to move it.
"Well that wasn't too hard," I note when I finaly have it unfolded.
"Heh, it feels just like a pair of extra arms!" Getting over the hype of having wings I turn back to my reflection in the water and frown.
"I certainly don't look very manly tho," I say with a sigh. A sudden anxiety fills my mind and I swing my head down, looking between my legs.
"Phew! Still there," I say in a relieved tone.
*A flock of birds fly away from a tree nearby*
Jumping a little at the sudden flight of the birds I say, "Ok! Enough with the mirrors Narcissius!" And look around.
"Hmm, if I'm in Equestria the only forest I supose I could have ended up in is the everfree forest. I hope I'll find my way out.
"Ah, right! I could fly out!" I exclaim with glee, by jumping and flapping as hard as I can, I barely reach over the treetops before failing and crashing face first.
"Ouch!" I say in a voice deprived of all hapiness from before.
I had barely made out the shape of a castle on my little escapade to the treetops and figured, hey! Better than nothing.
Now walking with a clear goal in mind I wondered why, even though it was obviously morning, the sun hadn't started to rise.
"It's not like I arived just when Nightmare moon broke out right?" I started thinking. "Cause that would make me feel like the world is trolling me,
since I have seen all four seasons of mlp fim already. Unless, I had traveled through time as well.
"Meh, I'll find out soon enough." Walking for a time with no beaten path to follow I looked towards the moon thinking,
"I thought the craters was suposed to look like an unicorn head. Well whatever!" uppon arriving at the old castle I walk towards the room,
where the elements had been located in the series.
"Surely they wouldn't be here at the moment," I mumble to myself. Walking up to the door I swing it open and say,
"see! I said that they wouldnt be... here!" I finish with a twitching, unamused smile.
"Atleast I get a front row seat to a historical event... There we go." I say as I hide myself within the ruins.
Waiting for what felt like over an hour, I actually start feeling bored when I suddenly hear the sound of hoves.
I peek out from my hiding place and see the mane six at the entrance. "Why is the door open?" Pinkie says bouncing around it.
"I don't know," Twilight answers. "But it certainly seems like it was opened recently."
I retract my head to not be noticed as they start to look around to see if anypony's there.
"Well the elements seem to have been left untouched atleast," Twilight note as they walk up to them.
Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash started bringing the element's down from their holders, putting them infront of Twilight Sparkle.
When they notice there's only five, Rainbow dash ask's. "Where's the sixth?"
And Twilight quotes a book that says that when the five elements are present, a spark will cause the sixth element to be revealed.
Applejack ask's, "what the hay is that suposed to mean?" And Twilight aswers that she's not sure but she has an idea.
She also ask's the other to stand back, just in case something happens.
Figuring that Nightmare Moon will soon apear, I sneak out through one of the holes where there had been windows,
just as the others where finnished walking out front, leaving Twilight to concentrate.
As fast as I can, I hurry over to the place where the elements would end up. However, I fail to notice that I get spotted by Nightmare Moon who smirk evilly.
Positioning myself on a ledge outside of one of the broken windows on the far end of the room I start waiting. No more than a minute or so later,
Nightmare Moon teleported the elements into the room along with Twilight, who I know had jumped after the elements and been brought along for the ride.
Nightmare Moon let out an evil laugh as the shocked Twilighi saw her.
My heart skipped a beat when Twilight started skraping the ground with a hoof in preparation to charge.
"Haha how cute," I mumble to myself. Nightmare however just look taken aback by the much smaller pony's agressive behavior and says.
"You're kidding! You're kidding, right?"
Twilight's horn starts to glow as she charge and not backing down, Nightmare charges as well.
Just as they are about to clash, Twilight teleports herself to the elements, effectively confusing Nightmare for a second.
Using her magic on the elements Twilight get's zapped and blown back as the energy sparks back and forth between the orbs.
Nightmare Moon who was now back at the side of the elements, trying to deny what was going on got relieved when the sparks just stopped,
leaving Twilight in despair. Nightmare shatters the stone orbs and begin her villainous monologue and laugh.
Twilight looks back to the entrance as she hear the voice's of her friend's.
Knowing this is the time when the real spark happen I look on as she lectures Nightmare saying that she cant destroy the elements just like that,
and that the spirits of the elements are right with them. After some explainations by Twilight and some flying neklace creating crystals,
plus the sixth element appearing, creating a tiara for Twilight, Nightmare sigh's.
"I didnt think I'd need to do this" she said. "Do what?" Twilight ask's. "This!" Nightmare shout's as she looks over to me,
shocking me since I thought I wasn't discovered. Using her magic she teleports me to her side, keeping me levitated right to the left of her.
"Hey, that's cheating!" Rainbow shouts, pointing a hoof at me.
"Now let that poor mare down this instant," Rarity says putting her hoof down. Nightmare laughs,
"you wouldnt want this unlucky mare to get hurt now would yo..." My kick land's on Nightmare's jaw knocking her out,
making me fall to the floor. Rubbing my face since i landed on it again. "Maybe you should use the elements now?" I sugest.
"Oh right!" Twilight says and they activate them, rainbow collored light start's shooting out, wrapping around the unconsious Nightmare moon.
Knowing that the mane six would be out cold for a bit, resulting from their first use of the elements I decide make myself scarce.
Looking out the window I could actually see Ponyville from this room.
Climbing onto the edge of the window and unfolding my wings I wince as I look down, knowing that this was my most stupid idea yet.
"Geronimo!" I scream as I jump out, using my wings to glide through the air not daring to flap them, in case something goes wrong.
"Now that was an awkward way of meeting them," I mumble to myself as I glide through the air.
Back at the room Twilight and the others start to stir. Rainbow Dash complains, her head hurts and Applejack asks if everyone's ok.
Rarity notice's her tail is back and act's all happy. They also notice their necklaces. Then Aplejack speaks up.
"Gee Twilight, I thought it was just a bunch of hoey, but I guess we realy do reprecent the elements of friendship."
"Indeed you do," Celestia says floating into the room through a window. Twilight get's over to greet celestia meanwhile the other's are bowing.
Celestia tells Twilight she knew that she could defeat Nightmare Moon by making some true friends. "Well we almost didn't," Twilight confess.
"What do you mean?" Celestia ask's.
"Oh, oh!" Pinkie says. "There was this mare I havent seen before who got caught by nightmare but then knocked her out like whoa!
With a kick right to the muzzle so tecknically she defeated Nightmare but then we used the elements to make sure she would stay defeated,
and then we passed out," looking around Pinkie ask's. "Where is she anyway?"
The others look around, "Well she couldn't be far!" Aplejack notes. She look's over to Rainbow dash who takes the hint and says,
"you can count on me," nodding. Just before Rainbow dashes of, Celestia clears her throat.
"Why don't you bring her to ponyville instead and we'll meet there." Thinking for a second Dash salutes Celestia before taking to the skies.
Soaring over the forest I frown and say, "I hope that didn't change the story too much. I shouldn't realy get involved with the mane six if posible."
Thinking of how to get by in equestria while living under the radar I jolt and look up towards whatever had sneaked up on me,
catching me by my front legs from above.
"Drat!" I say, giving me a confused look from Rainbow Dash who stered me towards the center of Ponyville.
"Can you let me go?" I ask her, sounding as polite as I possibly can.
"Sorry, no can do! Princess Celestia asked me to bring you to ponyville so we can talk." I get in reply.
"And so the plot thickens," I murmur. This making me get another odd look from Rainbow.
The rest of the jurney was mostly just an awkward silence, only disrupted by me saying.
"I do have my own wings to fly with you know!" Only to be shot down with.
"Yep, but I'm not letting you go." From Rainbow Dash.
"Well that's the first time any girl says that to me," I mumble. Obviously too loud since Dash apparently heard it and retorted.
"Well I supose it's mostly stallions saying that with how cute you are and stuff."
Blushing a bit by having been called cute, I just shut up and await whatever fate have in store for me.
Arriving, we land right beside the girl's just as Celestia decree that Twilight would take on her new mission and live in Ponyville,
making everypony really happy.
Turning to me Celestia ask's, "so is this the ma"Stallion"re that you where talking about?"
Looking like she was deep in thought for some reason. The other's nodded before realising I had disrupted Celestia.
"What did you say?" Everyone ask's.
"I'm a male! Aand a pegasus I might add," I say as I unfold my wings and do a little swing sideways with my head to dramatice the whole thing.
"No you're not!" Come's a blunt answer from them,
"Of cause I am, would you like to check for yourself, is that it?" I say angrily and point a hoof in between my leggs.
The others blush a bit before Pinkie speaks up. "Not that you silly filly, Ops! What we meant was that you're not a pegasus."
"You are an Alicorn," Twilight say's stepping up. Looking up I see a small horn that previously had been hidden below my bang.
"Well I'll be!" I say touching it with a hoof.
"How in tarnation did you miss that?" Applejack ask's.
"Yeah you'd have to be pretty stupid," Spike cut's in. I frown at him and say.
"Well I've only been a pony for an hour or two," retorting.
"By the way!" I turn my head to Celestia who as the others seemed to be stuck wondering about things.
"Sorry for kicking your sister," I say looking over at Luna who was a few feet behind Celestia.
"What?" Rainbow Dash Ask's nopony in particular. "Oh right you missed that part," Twilight says and fills her in on what happened after she left.
"Oh, it's ok. I'm sorry for trying to use you as a shield," Luna says looking sadly at me.
"No worries, I obviously wheren't careful enough sneaking around trying to get the front seat's to such an event."
"You soud as you already knew what was going to happen," Celestia notes. "Why is that?"
"I, oops! Me and my loose thounge." I say looking at the others.
"Well let's just say I had an idea about what was going to happen because of some kidds show I watched."
"He aint lyin atleast," Aplejack says stepping forward. "But I cant shake the feelin that there's somethin more too it."
Not wanting to make anything bigger than it is I look at Celestia and hurry to say.
"Well why dont you just make me stay here and let your student keep an eye on me?"
"That I shall, You are hereby to stay at the library with Twilight sparkle untill further notice, and Twilight!"
"Yes Celestia?" "Please report to me, any news on this new companion of your's." Celestia waves her hoof at me, still with a pondering look on her face.
"I will," Twilight answers with a nod. Celestia excuses herself saying how she must go back to Canterlot and suddenly,
I have Pinkie Pie pressing her face against mine, making me fall back into a sitting position. She glances down for a second before saying.
"Hi mister! Dont you dare think you can get away from me giving you a welcome to Ponyville party!"
Sighing I say, "Sorry! I wont run or hide from you guys anymore. Just haa... let's take it at the library."
I stand up and walk of towards the library, leaving the others to follow. Walking behind me, right out of earshot. Rarity says to the other's,
"I still cant believe such a cute pony could be a stallion."
"You'd better belieeve it!" Pinkie say's bouncing up beside her. "Pinkie, say you didn't!" Twilight ask's.
"How else was I suposed to know you silly?" Pinkie say's still bouncing around them.
"Well he does look good, although a little dainty." Aplejack say's looking at me. "Well he certainly is easy on the eyes,"
Fluttershy who had mostly been quiet suddenly said making them look at her.
"I know right," Rarity adds. "I almost thought I might have a thing for mare's for a while there."
Rainbow mostly hung her head glancing up at me thinking back at what she had said when carrying me back to Ponyville.
"I told him he was cute," she mumbled to herself. A little embarrased by having let that detail slipp.
Walking into the library I leave the door open for the others and go to thr center of the room waiting for the others.
"Oh the questions they must have," I think as I remember we haven't even introduced ourselves yet.
Obviously Twilight had thought of the same thing, cause when they where all gathered before me in the room she started clearing her throat.
Just when she started saying, "I am." I interupted her and said "yes yes I know, let me try.
"You are Twinkle twinkle little starswirl + dragon," I making a quick gesture at spike. With a smirk on my face all the while.
"And you!" I say without letting them gather their thoughts. "Are Fluttereyes!" I point at Fluttershy who hide's shyly behind her mane.
I quickly change my target pointing at Rarity, saying "Miss Fabulous!" Getting a happy but confused look from her.
Pointing over at Pinkie she starts bouncing, "Oh oh, my turn, my turn." "Kinky pie!"
"Oh he got it right! No wait heey. I see what you did there mister." She exclaims, doing the I got my eyes on you motion with her hoof.
"How I like em apple's!" I say as I point towards Applejack who get confused and don't know what to think,
"and finaly" I say as I turn towards Rainbow Dash.
"You!" I say pointing at her, you're. She takes a step back. "You're Flying Collors."
Dash gives me a confused look and Twilight snickers at what I did there. Being the only one who got the joke at the start.
Flustered Rainbow say, "So what's your name then? Girly guy?" I just smirk at her try to get back at me and say
"nope, but I guess my birthname would be strange so you can just call me Stolen Thunder or just Thunder is fine."
"I mean after all my mark is of a captured lightningbolt," I say as I point towards my flank on wich a whitened doubble zig zag bollt was,
with some kind of bands around it. "Well you certainly stole our thunder back at the old castle Thunder, its like you just sapped it upp." Twilight note, snickering.
"So is there a reason you messed up our names intentionally?" Applejack ask, having caught on to everything since the start cause of her element.
I smile at her saying, "sorry Applejack. It was just too funny to pass up."
She semed satisfied with the answer, nodding her head understandingly.
"And I'm not Kinky," Pinkie says out of the blue.
"Do you mean as a name or personality wise?" I ask, putting her on thin ice.
"As a name of cause" she answers without thinking. "Yeah, I thought as much" I say nodding. "Cause I know you looked."
This put a blush on Pinkies face making her say "I'll get you yet!" "Are you going to rope me in?" I ask. "Yea-no, I mean Gah!"
Pinkie says before storming out screaming "just you wait."
"Was I a little too harsh?" I ask the others who also had a slight blush on their faces cause of the whole thing.
"Oh, dont worry. She will get over it" Fluttershy says quietly hiding her whole face behind her mane when I look at her.
"Well then, I'm not realy hungry and this has been a strange day for me. So I think I'll go to bed early" I say as I head into the guest room.
Closing the door behind me and just laying on the bed I soon drift of to dreamland. Still in the room outside Applejack speaks up.
"I'm glad I wasn't on Pinkies end of that. Ah might have just roped that guy in just too prove I could."
"Tell me about it," Dash say's. "Well I'd better get back to my animals now," Fluttershy notes.
The other agrees and start to leave themselves. Just as they walk out the door leaving Twilight and Spike, Rarity looks back and add.
"Now Twilight, watch yourself so you don't attack him in his sleep just because you're living with such a cutie."
Speaking through her teeth Twilight says. "I'm not that kind of girl Rarity." "Oh I know darling," Rarity says with a wink as she close the door.
Having nothing more to do, Spike soon went of to take a nap, leaving Twilight standing alone in the middle of the library.
Looking at my door for the longest while she started thinking, Well nopony would know if I.
She had walked over to the door grabbing the handle with her hoof before thinking, no! I'm not that kind of mare.
"Let's just sleep, yeah lets sleep." She walked up to her own bedroom and got to sleep.
Later in the night, somewhere in the darkness a voice could be heard shouting, "I'll get you yet!"
Waking a few neighbours, Pinkie shove a hoof in her mouth then say, "oopsie."
Well that's the first chapter, I am not perfect so there will be errors so I'll be happy if you point them out so I can become a better writer.
I hope everypony enjoyed this chapter, It would be fun knowing what you liked/disliked and any other thought's you readers might have.
Before anyone ask's how the others arrived at Ponyville first I'll just say, Duh! Magic Duh!
Hmm, actually I might use magic as an excuse to other stuff as well later on. We'll just have to wait and see.
If you leave questions I will answer them, if I have an answer.