Hello everyone. I have uploaded this before but have had to make some changes in it, so here it is again, the revised addition. Please feel free to review and tell me what you think. Helpful criticism is most welcome if you have any.
Please enjoy the first chapter of my SasukexOc story.
The alarm played a dreadfully cheerful tune for so early in the morning, and Yuki fumbled, half asleep, to turn it off. She managed to drop her phone onto the floor and she groaned, having to reach down to retrieve it.
"Stupid damn alarm," the teenager grumbled, picking up her traitorous phone and finally managing to turn off the alarm. Sighing, she flopped back onto her bed, not at all ready to get up yet.
"Yuki," the girl's mother called from downstairs in the kitchen, jolting her awake. "Yuki, you'll be late for school again! Hurry up and get down here!"
Yuki rolled her eyes and slowly got out of bed, taking her time getting dressed and packing her schoolbag before dragging her feet to the kitchen table. She dumped her bag onto the counter and sunk into the chair, pulling her auburn hair into a ponytail. She covered her mouth as a loud yawn escaped.
Yuki's mother raised an eyebrow at the girl. "Really now Yuki. You're sixteen years old and you're already acting like an old man. Do I have to start giving you a bedtime curfew?"
"That's not fair!" the teenager wined, stifling yet another yawn. She blinked back the moisture from her eyes and rested her head on the counter. "I don't want to have this argument with you so early in the morning. You know I'm responsible, I just get carried away with my books sometimes." It wasn't like she always stayed up late reading, and she honestly didn't mean to stay up reading until two this morning. Yuki shook her head, deciding not to voice this to her mother. She might ban me from books for the foreseeable future. She thought wryly.
Her mother just shook her head, exasperated. "Hurry up and eat your breakfast or you'll miss the bus again. And I'm not going to drive you to school again." She picked up the set of car keys on the bench and waved them at her daughter. "I have to go into work early so make sure you lock the door behind you. Have a good day at school, dear."
"Love you mum." Yuki called as she walked out the door. She decided on an apple for breakfast and made her way to the couch to watch some television while she waited for the bus.
It was about ten minutes later when the teenager heard the bus zoom past her house, while she was laughing at something stupid Team Rocket did on Pokemon. Yuki jumped up from her spot on the couch and raced to the window, cursing the fact that the bus driver had it out for her. He knew that she caught it every day, surely he could stop and wait for her to come out, stupid man!
"Stupid, stupid, stupid. Argh, I'm going to be late again!" Yuki cursed as she nabbed her schoolbag from the counter and raced out the door, locking it behind her. She debated whether to chase after the bus or walk to school but decided against the former. She didn't want to look like an idiot to her schoolmates by chasing the bus down. Yuki sighed, "Walking it is then."
It was a beautiful spring day outside and most other people would stop to admire the beauty of the flowers or the baby ducks waddling past, but Yuki was in a bad mood now that she'd missed the bus and she just stomped past the family of ducks, making them squawk and scuttle away in fear.
"This day is going to be just fantastic." The girl grumbled to herself sarcastically, not at all looking forward to the horrible day ahead of her.
I'll post the next chapter up within the next few days, so stay tuned. Don't worry, you'll get to see Sasuke soon!
R&R? I'll love you forever. xD Should I make the chapters bigger as well, or is this length suitable for you guys? This is my first full-length story that I'm posting so I'd be very happy to hear your thoughts. :)