Notes: The first chapter of my story! Thanks for clicking! (:
Warriors belongs in all to Erin Hunter. I only have the names, but if anyone's names happen to be the same, I apologize, it's all by conky-doink. I haven't read any Warriors fan-fictions yet, so..XD
"Come on, Flameburst! We don't have all day, you know!" Soulbreeze, a gray and white she-cat exclaimed to her fellow warrior, Flameburst, who was a ginger she-cat. "Yeah, yeah, I'm coming..." Flameburst murmured. They were both on a hunting partol, and Flameburst was padding around a bush, while Soulbreeze was nagging at her all day, scaring the prey off. "Come o-" she was cut off by Fmaeburst. "Listen you little brat! You've been nagging me ALL Fricking day! Now will you shut your retarded mouth and stop scaring the prey off? Jeez, your like my mother." Soulbreeze stared at her friend, mouth gaping wide. "Uh, O—okay! Flameburst, okay!" she ran behind the bush. "Flameburst can be powerful when she wants to be, that's for sure!" She thought. "Whatever, we have prey to catch!"
Flameburst and Soulbreeze returned to their ShadowClan camp. They had caughten Frogs, snakes, blackbirds, and a vole or two. They placed their fresh-kill onto the pile and walked to the center of camp, where the leader, Leafstar, was sitting. They were newly-named warriors, so they were eager to tell the leader what they had caught. "Leafstar! Leafstar!" they called. "Yes, young ones? What may I do for you?" she mewed. She was a beautiful black she cat with green, piercing eyes. "Mrs. Leafstar, we caught all kinds of things for you! We got a few voles, snakes, frogs, and two blackbirds!" they mewed in unison. "That's great, you two!" she smiled. "How about you guys go pick out something to eat, the clan has been fed." Flameburst and Soulbreeze looked at each other in awe, then at leafstar, then back at each other. "Thanks, Leafstar!" they mewed as they raced to the fresh-kill pile. Leafstar smiled. "What young cats, they will make fine warriors."
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~Starreh