Hey y'all! This is my very, very first fanfiction EVER so please; I need reviews to tell me if this is good or if it sucks majorly! I will accept flames, but I will ignore them! I need reviewers to tell me if I should give up on this story! Thanks for now.
"Blah" Talking
Blah Author's Note
Blah Thinking
Pairings: SasuSaku, ShikaIno, NejiTen, NaruHina
The Pool Party
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Tenten was training, watching each kunai blast the target in the bull's-eye.
She was currently taking a breather when Neji walked up.
"Hey Neji-kun." Tenten said. "Hn." The ever-famous stoic Hyuuga replied. "It's so hot, Neji-kun!" Tenten sighed. Then she got a brilliant idea. "Neji-kun!" she exclaimed. "Let's have a picnic pool party! We'll invite everyone! It'll be fun Neji-kun!!!"
"Whatever," said Neji. Wow, he thought, Tenten looks really pretty today. She was going casual/casual in white cargo Capri pants and a pink tank top. It hugged her curves nicely and Neji was drawn from his thoughts when Tenten said, "C'mon Neji-kun! Let's go gather up some people!" "We'll make the party at one o'clock today!" Tenten grabbed his hand and Neji felt a shock go up his arm.
"Fine." He agreed solidly as Tenten dragged him behind her.
Haruno Sakura was leaning over the bridge where she and her old Team Seven used to meet before missions and training. She was looking at her reflection, watching Sakura trees shed their blossoms into the water. It was probably the hottest day of the year, so Sakura was wearing a short, white skirt and a light blue tank top. Suddenly Uchiha Sasuke was walking by the bridge and leaning over next to Sakura.
"Hey, Sasuke-kun," Sakura said lightly. She still had feelings for the prodigy, just not as obvious as they were when they were twelve. (A/N they are all 16-17 in this story)
"Hn," the ever-famous stoic Uchiha replied. Sakura groaned inwardly. Curse Sasuke and his "hn" language. God! I mean who knows what "hn" means?! Sakura was wrapped up in her thoughts when suddenly SASUKE broke the silence. (A/N tear. I'm so proud. Lol) "Hey Sakura, you look erm…….really..Uhh nice today," Sasuke finished awkwardly. "Aw, thanks Sasuke-kun," Sakura blushed. Then the awkward silence was broken by seeing Tenten (still dragging Neji) screaming, "SASUKE, SAKURA WE'RE GONNA HEAD TO THE LAKE FOR A PICNIC POOL PARTY! PASS IT ON!"
Sakura just looked and Sasuke and sighed, I'll go tell Ino-pig and the rest of her team. You take care of Naruto, all right?" "Hn." Sasuke said again. Sakura rolled her eyes and headed off to find Ino, Choji, and Shikamaru.
Uzumaki
Naruto was downing his thirty-sixth bowl of ramen and Ichiraku
(A/N Spelling?) when Hyuuga Hinata showed up. (A/N btw-I made
Hinata lose her stuttering because its just too darn troublesome
(ha-ha Shikamaru) to type up. Sorry for being lazyJ)
"Hi, Naruto-kun," Hinata blushed. Yes, even at sixteen the
shy Hyuuga heiress is still shy around Konoha's number-one
hyperactive knuckle head ninja! (A/N don't get me wrong, I 3
Naruto! He's one of my faves!) "Hey, Hinata-chan!" yelled
Naruto. "Do you want me to buy you some ramen?" "Oh, no thank
you, Naruto-kun." Hinata said lightly "Oh well, I guess I gotta
go pay for my 36 bowls now," Naruto said sheepishly. "Ayame (A/N
ramen girl) gave me 30 off until 1:00 PM and it's just a
minute 'till. I gotta go pay now!" Naruto paid for his meal and
offered to walk Hinata home. She accepted, and they were on their
way. "Man, it's got to be the hottest day of the summer!"
Naruto exclaimed. "Yes, it's so hot; Akamaru has been panting the
whole day!" Hinata chimed in. Then, suddenly, Sasuke appeared.
"Dobe, Hinata, Tenten and Neji are inviting us to a picnic pool
party it's at one o'clock today so just show up." "WHAT DID
YOU CALL ME?" screamed Naruto. "Dobe," Sasuke muttered darkly.
And then, POOF! He was gone like Kakashi. "Well, I guess
I'll see you at one, Hinata-chan," Naruto said as he dropped
Hinata off by her house. "G-good-bye, Naruto-kun," Hinata
whispered. Then she ran into her
house.
Currently Team 8 was in a field near the riverbed. Yamanaka Ino was yelling at Nara Shikamaru for being a lazy bum, Shikamaru was tuning her out, watching the clouds, and Akimichi Choji was consuming bag after bag of chips. Finally, Ino stopped yelling at Shikamaru as he secretly watched her profile, joining him to stare at the sky. Then all of a sudden, Sakura was there! "Hey, guys, Ino-pig!" she said happily. "Hey Forehead Girl," Ino cried happily, as she hadn't seen her best friend in a while! (A/N Sakura and Ino are now best friends, they made up after the Chuunin Exams) "I came by to tell you that Neji and Tenten are planning a picnic pool party and they invited us! It's at one o'clock!" "Too troublesome!" groaned Shikamaru. "You're going and you're going to like it! shrieked Ino. Sakura quickly left before she got engaged in another Shika/Ino fight.
Shino, Kiba, and Rock Lee were currently having a "boy's day out" and were sitting around doing nothing, until Tenten showed up, STILL dragging poor Neji, and she was screaming "WE'RE HAVING A PICNIC POOL PARTY AT ONE O'CLOCK TODAY AT THE LAKE!!" and running off again.
"uhhh okay" all three boys said in unison.
Okay
I know, this is probably a REALLLLY short chapter but remember, this
is the first chapter and they will become longer! PLEASE REVIEW I
WONT GROVEL, BUT PLZZZ! I NEED TO KNOW IF THE STORY IS ANY GOOD SO
FAR AND THIS IS MY FIRST FIC SO yeaaaa. Ok well I hope you like it! Ja ne!
xoxo,
XxMysticRosexX
