Hey guys. This is my first fan fiction so constructive criticism is allowed and appreciated. I don't know how to write these yet so please review or pm to help. Here's the story.
Disclaimer:I don't own House Of Anubis or any of the characters I only came up with the plot of the story.
~Eddie's POV~
I was walking home after a night out with my friends Fabian, Jerome and Alfie and that was when I saw her. The girl was curled up in a bundle, her auburn hair flowing over her face she didn't look as though she was homeless ,but she was lead there unconscious so I did what a normal person would do. I picked her up and took her home to my apartment.
It must have been at least an hour before the girl finally started to awake .She tossed and turned before she finally sat up. As soon as she opened her eyes I saw that they were a glittering emerald colour she was stunning. Looking round my apartment the girl managed to mutter a 'where am I'. Me being the gentleman I was answered, " Umm you must of fell asleep or passed out. You were in an alley way I couldn't leave you so I brought you home. Thinking about it I should have just-" she shut me up before I could continue rambling ,"What do you mean you found me in an ally I was at home the last time I checked!"she shouted at me her voice spitting venom."Ok girl I get your mad but you were in an alley way unless that's your home I doubt you were at home" I yelled back with just as much force." she looked at me and I looked straight back. We must've sat there staring at each other for a while until she broke the silence "One I have a name and it's Patricia. Two I believe you."
~Patricia POV~
I don't know why but I felt safe in this apartment. No matter how safe I felt It explain how I ended up in the streets but one way or another I would find out how I ended up there no matter what."Eddie, my name is Eddie" he stated interrupting my thoughts. Eddie. This guys name was Eddie. I was in Eddie's apartment. He might have been a random stranger but now he is Eddie a guy who took me in.
So guys that's the first part. if you want to find out what happened to Patricia you will have to review. I know it wasn't that long but if It gets some reviews I will work on the next chapter which will hopefully be better and longer.
~Sibuna