Miss : This is the first thing I've put up.. please don't flame me!

This is one of my originals. I didn't put up anything about the character Troy (despite the name, she's a girl) and how she met the three brothers. Mainly 'cause I never finished that one. But this is the "behind closed doors" series.. mainly about how you never really know what's happening behind a closed door, even if you think you do.

I so far have three made—but I only like the third one. I'm only putting it up because my friends like it. (I dunno why though)

Sorry for the delay.

----Behind Closed Doors----
Yazoo was going slowly down the hall and passed Troy's door while looking for Kadaj. It was closed, but that meant Troy was in there, and he wasn't looking for her. He went around the house some more before going back to Troy's door. As soon as he was about to knock to ask her if she knew where Kadaj was, he heard his voice coming from inside. It was quiet and faint, but he heard Kadaj say, "I might do it too hard..." followed by Troy saying, "I need it.. If you don't, I don't know what I'm going to do. I need you to so bad."
Yazoo covered his mouth with disbelief and ran to get Loz. They both came back and nosily pressed their ears against the door to hear it better. They heard Kadaj's voice, "Right there? Is that better?" then Troy answering, "yeeeeeeeeeesss..." The two brothers couldn't believe their ears as they listened on, they heard Troy say, "A little harder..." and Kadaj saying, "I'm not trying to hurt you." She responded, "I can take it, just do it, please..."
Right there, Loz and Yazoo had heard enough. They busted through the door, and Loz yelled, "GET OFF MY BABY BROTHER!" They both looked up in pure surprise. They saw Troy sitting on the bed and Kadaj standing behind her, scratching her back. She looked up and said, "Knocking is key... and you want me to do what?"
They both stood there with dotted eyes. Loz answered, "Oh... I umm.. I uh.. we thought... you were... Umm..."
Yazoo was no better, but he just said, "Oops..." Before backing away.
--END—

Like I said, I don't even like this one. Please don't hurt me… I don't have any money…

Besides, its so short, you didn't waste too much of your time, right? But if you found this remotely interesting, maybe you should wait for me to put three up. Reviews that aren't telling me to kill myself are wanted.

OH, and just because this sucked doesn't mean that everything will!