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Hate: A barrier between you and me

Chapter 1

One 10 year old kid was sitting on the chair in the living room of his house. His parents came near him and patted his cheeks. Both mother and father of kid car near the kid.

Mother started in hatred and serious tone: Abhijeet beta, aj mein tum se kuch zaroori baat karna chahti hun.

Abhijeet said in confused tone: kesi baat mama? Kesi baat papa?

Father was about to say: beta vo..

But mother of Abhijeet cut Abhijeet's father and said in teasing tone: ap to rehne hi dijiye. Ap to apne bhai ki side hi lene ki koshish karein ge hamesha. Meri to koi ahmiyat hi nahi hai ap ke dil mein.

Abhijeet's father Praduman said in complaining tone: kesi baatein kar rahi ho Aanchal? Kya tumhe mujh par ab bhi yakeen nahi hai? Mene to tumhaari khaatir apni family ko chor diya.

Aanchal said in angry and teasing tone: yahin to, yahin to ap ki ana ko aag lagti hai. Ap mujhe zimmedaar maante Hain na ke ap ko apni family chorni pari? Jaise main to kuch samajhti nahi. Ap ko afsos hai halanke nahi hona chahiye. Ap ka khaandaan aur ap ka wo do takke ka bhai us ki to ap side mat hi len to acha ho ga. Ap mere bacche, Abhijeet ko barbaad kar dein ge. Mujhe khudi baat Karne doh usse

Abhijeet asked to Aanchal in most confusing state: mama papa, ye ap dono Kya baatein kar rahe the? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi a rahi mama.

Aanchal said to Abhijeet in soft tone but still the hatred was visible in her voice: Abhijeet, tumhaare aik chacha (father's brother) Hain aur un ka aik beta Daya.

Abhijeet asked in most exciting tone: kya? Mera koi cousin bhi hai. Ap ne pehle kyun nahi bataya. Kitna maza aye ga, main aur wo, kya naam tha? Haan Daya, jab mein aur Daya mil kar khelien ge to bohat maza aye ga. Wo rehta kahaan hai maa? Mera us se milna ka bohat dil hai. Vo mera dost ban jaye ga yippee.

Aanchal said in strict and angry tone while holding Abhijeet from shoulders: Abhijeet, wo tumhaara dost nahi, dushman hai, dushman, samjhe tum dushman hai vo tumhaara.

Abhijeet said in scared tone: Kya? Dushman? Lekin kyun? Mene us ke saath Kya Kiya hai jo vo mera dushman hai? Main to kabhi us se mila bhi nahi.

Aanchal said in angry tone: Abhijeet, us ki family aur hamaari family aik doosray ke dushman Hain. Tumhaare daddy ke bhaiya ki family hamaare khandaani dushman Hain. Unhon ne mere aur Praduman ki shaadi mein bohat rukaawatein daali Hain aur ye dushmani kabhi khatam nahi ho gi. Aur Haan vo hum se bohat door rehtey Hain aik gaun (village) mein. Lekin jab bhi tumhaara aur Daya ka saamna ho to apni aur us ke khaandaan ki dushmani kabhi na bhoolna. Samajh gaye na, mene Kya kaha?

Abhijeet nodded his head in yes slightly.


In a village, a event was going on. Everyone was enjoying the festival so much. It was the birthday of son of sardaar of the village. The sardaar was so rich and was living in a big haveli with his wife and son Daya who is only 10 years old. Whole village was invited in the birthday of Daya. The event was going well until they heard some gun shots. It was hilarious for them and everyone in the event. Daya got too much scared listening gun shots. Some people gave backup to little Daya and took him in the haveli safely with his mother Deepika. After some time, Daya's father Salunkhe came inside the haveli. Deepika ran to Salunkhe and asked him in teary tone: kuch pata chala Salunkhe? Kis ne kiya ye? Kis ne chalayein goliyaan? Agar hamaare Daya ko kuch ho jaata to...to main mar jaati.

Salunkhe said in tensed tone: aadmiyon ko bheja hai pata lagaane ke liye.

Deepika said in hatred tone: ho na ho, ye sab zaroor ap ke ikhlote bhai sahab Praduman ka hi kaam ho ga. Yakeen nahi hota ke vo is had tak ja sakta Hain...agar mere Daya ko kuch ho jata to...

Salunkhe stayed quiet.

Deepika again said to Salunkhe in serious tone: acha ho ga agar hum Daya ko us ke dushmanon ki pehchaan kara dein. Kahin bara ho kar vo apne dushman ko hi dost na samajh bhete

Salunkhe said to Deepika in irritated tone: jo ji main aye, wo karo.

Salunkhe went from there and Deepika came near little Daya who was scared with frightened expressions on his face.

Deepika said while patting Daya's cheeks lightly: Daya

Daya said in frightened tone: mom, ye wo bahar goliyaan, wo wo kis ne chalai?

Deepika answered him in hatred tone: humaare dushmano ne.

Daya asked in meaningful tone: kon Hain hamare dushman?

Deepika answered in hatred tone: hamaare apne hi hamaare dushman Hain kyunke unhon ne ham se daga ki. Tumhaare abba ke bhai, unhon ne khaandaan se bahar shaadi ki jo ke hamaare khandaan mein hargiz jayaz nahi. Us Aanchal se shaadi kar li. Aur jo hamaare khandaan ki riwaayat torta hai vo hamaara dushman hota hai.

Daya said with innocent look: mujhe kuch samajh nahi aya.

Deepika said in meaningful tone: ahista ahista sab samajh mein a jaye ga.

Deepika came out from her room and saw Salunkhe with two man whose hands were tied.

Deepika asked to Salunkhe: Salunkhe, ye log kon Hain?

Salunkhe said to Deepika in serious tone: inhi logon ne goliyaan chalai theen.

Deepika said: Kya? Lekin kis ke kehne par? Zaroor Praduman ne hi kaha ho ga

Salunkhe said to Deepika: nahi, Praduman ne nahi, doosray gaun ke sardaar ne in logon ko bheja tha lekin ab sab theek hai.

Deepika said in teasing tone: oh acha, par Kya pata kab Praduman bhi apni had paar kar dey us Aanchal ke kehne par.

To be continued


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