this is my first fan fiction and first PARAGRAPH sorry im really busy so i can only write one right now, i'll right bigger ones when im not busy.
"Fionna! Use your crystal sword now! i cant hold this much ugly for that long!" i heard my sister cake yell to me as she was holding the lastest of the ugliest monsters i've ever seen.
"just hold on for a little longer!" i yelled as i climbed up the slimy snake like body of green goop and scales, my crystal sword i got from gumball or was that ice queen... wait the ice queen dressed as gumball.. oh whatever its mine now! My crystal sword slicing behind me and as soon as i reached the monsters neck, i quickly lobbed off the head. My sister cake sighing in relife as she unwinded and returned to her normal small cat self. Also no im not a cat, im the last known human of Aaa, and the best dam adventurer in the whole universe!
"Ok girl. i think thats enough for today, time to go home and make some bacon pancakes!" my sister said, look more exauhsted than usuall.
"YAYYY! hey, are you okay? you seem more all adventured out... and thats not like you." i asked, concerned for her, she's the only family i got.
"Fionna, we took on 7 monsters in one day. OF COURSE IM TIRED! just get on my back and lets go home" cake laughed.
"Fine. but i expect bacon pancakes when we are home!" i smiled.
once again sorry for how bad amd small it is :/ please help me become better at my writing skill with your cunsructive critisism!