This is my first story so I'm sorry if it's rubbish, I am deicating this story to my friend sam a.k.a xOx-Waiting-For-My-Vampire-xOx
Too Little, Too Late
I looked around to see five men circling around me, the same men that had passed the shop window, they were advancing coming slowly toward me as if in unison, I stood there petrified
not able to move, one of them spoke in his low, deep laugh "so glad you could make it to the party, your just in time for dessert." A shiver ran up my back, the way he stood there looking
at me like he had just won a prize. I opened my mouth to speak but a tall, blonde man with glasses interrupted me "don't you mean she is just in time to BE dessert", the man stood
there with a sickening smirk on his face enjoying every moment while the rest of the men all broke out into a controlled, cold laughter.
I thought I had found my escape so I ran to a large gap in between the men but I was too slow, two of the men grabbed me and pushed me backward where I stumbled to the ground
and fell onto the hard, wet concrete floor. I stood up quickly, swayed slightly but regained my balance, one of the men stepped forward his arms wide, he came so close to me, he was
about to grab my arms I had no time to think so brought my knee up hard and fast and caught him right in between his legs, doubled over and fell to the ground with his face all
scrunched up in obvious pain. As the man lay on the floor holding onto his privates for dear life the rest of the four men came rushing towards me, two of them held me down to the
ground where had just been forcibly pushed one of them walked slowly over with a knife "let's get this show on the road," the man's voice was gruff and there was a hint of a smirk in his
voice too. The man with the knife kneeled down in front of me and brought his arm back, I closed my eyes bracing myself for the impact.
Iam sorry it is short and Iknow I use a lot of commas, sorry, and please review you can say what ever you like, good,bad, tips, ideas well anything but please review
and sorry it's short
