Hi guys! I recently watched jane by design and I loved it. However it didn't end how I would have hoped and since they cancelled it, I wanted to make my own ending because I really want it to have a proper ending.
so here is my vision :) hope you like it.
oh and please review so i know whether i should keep uploading or not. i will keep writing anyways but i will only upload if people actually like it
enjoy! :D
"Of course." He picked up the shoes with difficulty and added them to the precariously high pile already in his arms. Billy struggled to keep up with Lulu as she pushed impatiently past people and expertly skimming her fingers over the clothes on the racks.
"Lulu". She stopped abruptly and turned to face him, causing Billy to nearly lose everything he was holding.
"What?" she hissed at him. She raised her perfect eyebrows at him and pursed her lips, waiting impatiently, her foot tapping.
"Look Lulu, it's been great having time with you."
Here he tried to hide the undertone of sarcasm that he felt; carrying things around for Lulu wasn't the way he wanted to spend his time with his girlfriend. "However, I have to go, Jane just sent me a message and I know she is really stressed out at the moment what with", he paused "uh stuff with Ben". The part about the message from Jane wasn't strictly true, but he was sure that anything about Jane was more important than 'shopping' for Lulu.
"What's wrong with Ben?" Lulu asked impatiently. "Never mind, I don't even care", as Billy opened his mouth to speak. "Listen Bill (Billy cringed, it was the new nickname Lulu had found for him, in an effort to keep things more exciting between them, and he hated it) I don't care about Jane, as you know, so suck it up." Her features softened and she whispered "listen this is the only way I can spend time with you in public, then we can go back to your place…." She raised her perfectly trimmed eyebrows at him and he sighed. He knew what this would involve as Tommy wasn't around anymore, lots of making out, because they hadn't done it yet. He sighed.
"No Lulu. If this is the only way I can spend time with you in public, I don't want any of it."
Lulu, not understanding, nodded her head and said "Ok then, let's just buy the stuff you have and we'll go straight back to your pla-"
"No Lulu." He raised his voice and her eyes widened. "I mean it. No more means no more. I'm done." With that, he dumped the stuff he was holding uncaringly on a nearby shelf and turned to leave. Lulu caught him by the arm and pulled him back, her nails gripping painfully into his skin.
"If you leave now, we are never getting back together, even if you beg!"
Billy shrugged and grinned. "That's exactly what I meant Lulu. Now if you'll excuse me…" He pulled his arm from her grip and left. He never looked back. Not once.
