Ranma_1
Stopp! If you read this you should know that I'm a German girl - English is only my second language which I am supposed to learn in school....I say supposed to!*laughs*There'll sure be many mistakes *sobbs*. (If my English teacher would read this…OMG!)
This is my first fanfiction. I've read so many good ones that I had to try it, too. Please give me a chance, I'm certainly not that good but I'm trying my best! But now, enjoy my first chapter!
Please review if you have any ideas or whatever.
(I know, the name a bit odd, every suggestions for a better one are welcome!)



Lonely Island



Chapter 1

Shampoo went to bed early because she was tired from the work in the Cat Café. She was sleeping deep and innocently so she didn't realize it when suddenly the door opened a little and a small ray of light lightened up the room.
The ray of light grew bigger and bigger and a soft voice wispered:

"Shampoo…? Shampoo, wake up!"

Cologne entered the room. She turned the light on and sat down next to her
great- granddaughter.
Shampoo blinked blinded by the light. Her drowsy eyes searched for the reason of her sudden awaken.

"Great-grandmother? What do you do here?" She nodded to her alarm clock. "It's
three o'clock in the morning!"

A strange smile appeared on Cologne's face. "I have a plan" she said mysteriously.
Her eyes glittered excited. "A plan how to get rid of Akane."

Immediately Shampoo was awaken. "Tell me!" she ordered and followed Cologne into the kitchen.

About ten minutes later the main plan of Cologne was explained. Shampoo's face showed confusion.
"But this… this is hard, isn't it? You mean we shall-"

"Yes, I mean. It's the only way to get Ranma." The old lady nodded dedicated.

"And you are really sure?" Shampoo couldn't believe what she had heard.

"I am. I've thought a long time about that. The plan is perfect." Cologne smiled. "And soon you will marry Ranma.", she added pleased with herself.

The two Amazones spent the whole night with organizing the following Friday when the plan should start. Cologne had to do a few telephone calls while Shampoo tried to imagine what Ranma would wear on their wedding.

* * * * *

Meanwhile Akane had a unsettled night. She rolled around in her bed and could hardly find any sleep. So she was thankful when finally her alarm clock rang.

* * * * *
Tendou residence

"Ranma!!! You idiot!" Akane shouted angrily, her face red like a tomato. "What do you think you're doing here?!"

"Uh-uh" Ranma whispered. He had surprised Akane in the bathroom like it was often the case. Before he was able to say anything to defend himself Akane jumped completely naked out of the tub, wrapped a large towel around her body and slapped Ranma hard into his face.

"Pervert!"

She pushed him back out of the door.

"Macho-girl!" he shouted after her. "Do you think I wanted to see you naked??!"

She closed the door and leaned against it, sighing.
Another average day …
Slowly she put on her school uniform and went down the stairs. She had calmed down a little and she had to confess herself that she's been a little hard with Ranma.
Maybe it hasn't been his intention to catch her in the bathroom.

Downstairs her whole family was already awaken. Kasumi was putting the breakfast on the table so Akane arrived exactly in time to get something to eat before Mr Saotome had eaten everything alone.
Ranma gave Akane an angry look. He was slandered and sure he would sulk the whole day. On his right cheek glew a red mark looking like a hand. Akane blushed. She didn't want to slap him too hard. She sat down as far away from him as it was possible and began to eat her breakfast. Slowly, one after another, everybody stood up to go to school or somewhere else.
As Akane looked at her watch she noticed that she was really late. She jumped up, grapped her school back and shouted at Ranma, who had fallen asleep at the table. His nose was bathing in a cup of coffee.

"Ranma! Hurry up, we're late!"

Ranma jumped up exactly like Akane had done it before. He rolled his eyes and mumbled a "Why didn't anyone wake me up?" and ran after Akane.
As they reached the fence Ranma jumped on it but kept on running.

Akane wasn't sure if she should do it but at the end she decided that it would be better to apologize.

"Ranma?"

"What?" Ranma asked back slightly annoyed. He was still angry because nobody had woken him up.

"I'm sorry. Didn't want to hit you so hard." Akane said quietly while blushing badly.

Ranma looked down at her reproachful. Then he began to grin. "I just don't understand why you're always as outraged as if it would be something special to see you naked. I've seen you naked often enough, you should be used to it with the time."

"Idiot!"

"Macho-girl!"

The average conversation between the two of them continued until they reached the school.

"You open the door!" Akane ordered. They were late and she didn't want to go in and break the silence in the classroom first.

"Me? No! You go first!"

"WHAT? Open this stupid door now!"

"Do you wanna fight?!!"

Suddenly the door opened itself.

"Huh?" Akane made confused. "Who-"

Their moody maths teacher stared at them angrily.

"What do you think you're doing here?! Classes started fifteen minutes ago! And why do you cry around here? We were writing a short math test. Thought you'd come a little late to miss it, didn't you?"

Akane went red. "Uh… I didn't know about that test. I'm late because-"

Her teacher stepped a little nearer. "It doesn't interest me why you're late. You both come to me after classes. Until then I will have thought about your punishment."

Akane nodded frightened. For a short moment she could see Ranma grinning into his fists behind her teacher.

"And now wait here!"

He tourned away and stepped back into the classroom where the whole class was standing on chairs or tables to hear what was going on. (Of course they first took the chance to correct their tests)

After the door was closed Ranma started giggling.
"What??!" Akane shouted.
"You should have seen your face!" he started. "Poor little Akane's afraid of her maths teacher! You've already fighten against monsters and now you're tembering when your teacher is angry with you!" He chuckled.

Akane hurled her bucket of water against him with a snort of rage.
"You damn idiot! You have to visit him after school, too!"

"But I won't tremble or have a nervous breakdown when he speaks to me." he teased her.
He stuck his tongue out at her quickly before he ran down the corridor.

"Ranma! You idiot! I really thought you're a little bit more gentle or something!" she shouted after him.
"You shouldn't think so much. As an effect your brain might explode." he grinned before disappearing from her view.

Akane was really hurt. But she somehow didn't feel like running after him and fighting with him. AND she didn't want to be caught once more from this idiot who was her teacher.
She stood there and thought about a really good apology to explain that from her two buckets was only one left.
Several minutes later Ranma showed up again. He didn't say something, or better he wasn't able to say something because the schoolbell rang exactly in this moment. They entered the classroom and sat down at their places, acting like the other was not there.

School was boring like allways so it seemed to them like an eternity until they finally could go home. Everyone, except Akane and Ranma who slowly walked up the stairs to the teacher's rooms.

It's all your fault!" Akane said.

"Oh, come on, you'd rather care about not to mumble that much when you go in there now!" he said nastily.

They reached the door and knocked carefully. Their maths teacher opened. When he saw the two of them he made "Oh!" in surprise. "I completely forgot to think about your punishment."

Akane sighed reliefed while Ranma tried not to chuckle loudly as he saw the respectful expression in Akane's face.

"Well, I think I've an idea! I've heard you are Ranma's fiancee," he told Akane proudly, "so how do you think about a nice honeymoon in the toilets? Tomorrow you two will help the charwomen a little." He grinned nastily. "I'm sure they're needing some help." After he had spoken out his outrageous judgement he tourned around and closed his door.

"I can't believe it!" Akane shouted angrily when they reached the fence. "Okay, I knew he is unfair but that he would do this – no, really not!"
Ranma walked on the fence like usually. For a few minutes nobody spoke a word.

Finally Akane broke the silence. "What about a little apology?" she asked chilly.
Ranma didn't say anything. He compltetely ignored her.

"What? First you tease me this nasty and now you're pleased with yourself or what?"

"Oh, poor little Akane is hurt? I'm very, very sorry."
To provoke her a little more he asked: "What?! Do you wanna fight?!"

"I hate you." She only wisprered. She expected a "Okay, let's fight!" or something but what she got was a little bit different.

"IYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!"

Akane jumped back shocked.

"But…wha-what is…?"
She looked at him. His eyes were opened wide and showed pure horror. She followed his eyes with hers and noticed the reason of Ranma's scream.
Cologne stood a few meters away, grinning, carrying four cats on her arms. The fifth one hung on Ranma's feet.

"Put them away!" he cried full of fear.
But Cologne only continued grinning and started throwing the next cat after Ranma.
This was enough for him. He ran away in horror crying and shouting like there was a monster after him. After five meters Cologne stopped following him but Ranma didn't notice that and kept on running.

Akane rolled her eyes slightly annoyed. Ranmas fear of cats was indeed a little annoying. But the fact that this little incident had interrupted their quarrel made her feeling better.
She wondered why she and Ranma always had to quarrel. They teased each other where ever they could. Ranma was not that stupid. She thought of all the moments when he was so nice to her and they had fun together. He was handsome and sometimes really lovely but it would be much easier to know if she really loved him if there wouldn't be those pointless quarrels and fights between them.

Sunken in her thoughts she walked down the streets. Her eyes passed over the pavement so she noticed the shaddow a second before she crashed into the owner of it.

"Oh, I'm very sorry, I- Shampoo?"

"Yes, me. Hello Akane! Me want talk to you alone. Have a few minutes?"
'Shampoo behaves strange today.' Akane thought but followed Shampoo into the Cat Café. They enterd and Akane noticed the little sign at the door on which she saw the word 'CLOSE'.
This was odd. It was Friday, normally the café would be open. Inside was nobody else than the two of them.

Shampoo offered Akane a chair to sit down and took herself place on a table. The air inside was musty. All the windows were closed - and also all the curtains.

"It's dark here." Akane said and stood up to open the curtains.

"Sit down!" Shampoo ordered sheerly.

"Me wanna talk about Ranma!"

Of course! Akane expected something of that kind. After all they weren't what you'd call best friends. It was odd enough that Shampoo wanted to talk to Akane so it was almost clear that it had something to do with Ranma.

"Okay, what do you want?" she really didn't want to hear it but she leaned back into the chair sighing and hoping that she could leave soon.

"Keep it short." she said annoyed.

"Well. Ranma is mine, okay? If Akane don't accept we must fight. Give up or it is too late perhaps. Shampoo could injure Akane seriously." Shampoo said steady.

Akane went red in rage.
"I will fight! Not for Ranma but I never ignore a challenge!"she shouted angrily.

'Who does she think she is?' Akane thought. She wanted to stand up to show that she was ready but she somehow couldn't move.

"Wha…what've you done?" she shrieked shrill.
"Akane gives up?" Shampoo demanded tender.

"I NEVER GIVE UP !" Akane cried.

"But you've never ever won against me."

"And now you can't even move." another voice sneered. It belonged to Cologne.
"Ranma has to deal with other things." she added and grinned. "We'll be uninterruppted."

"What the hell is going on here?" Akane sat there between this little China clan, not able to move, and didn't understand the weird stuff they were talking about. Soo it was only natural that she was a little confused.
It was obviously has bewitched her or pressed some points to paralize her. But what was that good for? What did they plan?
She was surrounded with two Amazones, both of them with a nasty grin on their face.

"I will explain" Cologne started.

"About time." Akane mumbled.

"I just can't hold it back. I'm too proud on my idea." Her nasty grin tourned into a proud one.
Shampoo just sat on the table and watched Akane's face. Akane faced away.
"Ranma would hate you for that." she wispered.

Shampoo hesitated for a short moment but then her grin reappeared again. Akane thought about what she had said and she reminded the last words she had said to Ranma:
"I hate you!"

Suddenly she wasn't that sure anymore that Ranma would hate Shampoo for that. Fortunatley nobody else knew about their little quarrel. Lost in her thoughts she suddenly realized that Shampoo had started shackling her.

"Hey! Let that be!" she complained. Shampoo only smiled softly.

"Okay honey, listen to me. I won't repeat.", Cologne began. "My plan was to get rid of you somehow." Akane blinked disbelieving. "Well, I happen to know that you can't swim so I thought for a possibility to bring you to a place which is far away and surrounded with water.
See what I mean?"

"A…an island?" Akane stammered frightened.

"Clever girl." Cologne agreed nodding.

"Oh no, you wouldn't do that! Nobody would!" Akane's eyes widened with fear.

"Wanna bet?"

It was eerie. Akane's mind was full os disbelieving and rage. She didn't know what to do. She was completely helpless as long as she wasn't able to move. So she tried it otherwise.

"You know what? Kiss my ass but I won't give up! Someone will come and rescue me!"

"Na, na, na! Shampoo made with the voice of an incensed mother.

"What does Shampoo hear? Akane would better be nice and friendly. Didn't Akane understand what we wanna do? Akane is going to be put on a lonley island. How will someone rescue you? Nobody knows where Akane is."

This was the causing sentence to blow away any hope.

"I can't believe that you're going to put me on an island. This is like Robinson Crusoe! Where are the cameras? It isn't the first May, you know?"

"We know exactly well." Cologne grinned. She sounded very amused.

But then Akane had an idea. It was just like a little ray of hope in this dark room.

"Hah! If you take me to this island the others will notice that you're gone. They'll have a hunch."
Shampoo looked nervous and sorrowful now, but Cologne didn't even interrupt her grin.

"My dear! I haven't the intention to take you there myself. A few good old friend of mine will undertake this.
Shampoo sighed relieved. Akane had already realized that Shampoo wasn't completely dedicated in Cologne's evil plan.

"Why are you so terrible?" Tears went down Akanes cheek.her world broke apart when she saw that there was no chance for her. She closed her eyes and sobbed almost noiceless.

"Don't cry. You will survive, think positive. We could also have killed you." Cologne made fun of her.
Shampoo opened her mouth to say something but Cologne ordered her with a sign of her hand to be quiet.

"I'd really prefer that." Akane muttered keeping on sobbing.

Shampoo stood up.

"Shampoo.Won't.Kill.Anybody. Clear?!" Akane could feel Shampoo's breath on her face. She looked away, her eyes filled with teard of rage. She tembered.

"Let me go!"

Shampoo looked deeply touched, but Cologne made the tragic scene an end.

"Shut up now! I will make her sleep. And Shampoo, don't talk to her, understood? She won't wake up until she's on the ship of captain Joe's."

Shampoo looked worried. "Great-grandmother, Shampoo is not sure if we shall do it. Shampoo can't believe that Ranma will forget Ak-"

"Go now! You will thank me for that in a few years."

Shampoo left the room slowly. Standing right in front of the door she looked back to Akane. Her mouth opened and closed as she formed the words 'good luck' with it. Akane screamed as Cologne who was shaked with evil laughters hold a little blue bottle a few millimeters under Akane's nose. Seconds later she fell asleep. The world around her changed and she forgot all the things to worry about. She dreamed a lovely and nearly endless dream but it should be the last one of this kind.

* * * * *

Ranma reached the Tendou residence gasping for breath.

"Old witch!" he growled. His feet looked as if the cats would have done their work properly. Thousands of scratchers were to see and his trousers hardly reached his knees now.
He stumbeled through the door and let himself fall into the sofa.

Kasumi looked through the kitchen door. "Ranma! There you are! You're late, where's Akane?"

"Dunno. I've been attacked by a few cats the old witch threw afer me. Akane should already be here."

Kasumi put down the plates onto the table and rubbed her chin sorrowful.

"No, she isn't. and she's not in the the dojo."

"I don't care." Ranma waved aside. "She hates me. So why should I worry about her?"

Kasumi sighed. "You two are quarreling around all the time! She's your fiancee and when she's disappeared it's your job to look for her."

"No way! I've had a hard day and I'm not in the mood to search for Akane. Do you happen to know how often she told me that she can look after herself?"

"Very often?" Kasumi asked carefully.

"You can say so. Well, now she can proove it."

To Ranma the conversation was finished then. But when he saw the worried expression on Kasumi's face he tried to calm her down a little.

"Don't worry. Probably she just had met a few friends and now she's sitting at Ucchan's eating okonomiyaki and chatting like girls allways do."

"Perhaps you're right." Kasumi agreed, putting the plates on their right places. "But she could have phoned me."

"You know Akane!" Ranma chuckled a little.

"Indeed." She grinned and went back into the kitchen.

Ranma sighed. He wondered how someone could worry about a macho-girl like Akane. Not long ago she had to handle with all the boys at Furiken and then she fought against monsters and eight-headed dragons.
'Kasumi really worries about everyone.' he thought head-shaking.

But after after an hour he started to be unsettled as well but he'd never confess that it was because of Akane.
His heart nearly stopped beating when he heard Mr Tendou stamping up the stairs.

"Akane!!!! Where is this girl? She's allways gone when you need her."
He hit against the door. Then he entered, looking as furious as a wild rhino.

"Ranma! Have you seen Akane? I told her to buy my cigaretts before the shops will close, but this stupid…-"

"Dunno where she is. I haven't seen her after school." he lied. "Kasumi told me that Akane didn't come home, but – "

"WHAT? You know Akane isn't there and you didn't search for her?!" Mr Tendou cried outraged. "It is almost dark outside! You are her fiance. Look for he!r" he added furiously.

Ranma looked at his watch and wondered how long he had been chased by the cats. Finally he nodded and went down the stairs.
"I'll look for her. She can't be far."

The whole Tendou family was sitting downstairs watching him angrily while he put on his shoes. Ranma grinned emberassed.
"Uhm… I'd better go now." he said.

"You can say so." Nabiki answered mad.

"Great!" Ranma mumbeled sarcastically as he stepped into the rain and changed into his female form. The icy wind threw the rain into his face and he had difficulty in coming forward. With his bad mood he walked up and down the streets shouting "AKANE!" every five minutes.
After one full hour he had enough. "Damned! Akane, where are you?"
He reminded the quarrel they had had this morning and for a short moment he thought he had found out the reason for Akane's disappearing. "No, that can't be!", he wispered. Then he continued his search. When he asked Ukyou she only could offer him an okonomiyaki. He even searched in the school and he asked every single friend of Akane's he knew. But there was not the smallest hint of her.
If he'd go home without Akane – he really didn't want to think about what might happen then. Mr Tendou would do nothing else than kill him. He could imagine Nabiki standing next to her father with a nasty grin on her face.

Strained he thought of all the places Akane might be. He hasn't asked Shampoo already – but the Cat Café was closed and why should Akane be in there? Talking with Shampoo was a really unlikely possibility.
He began to hope that Akane was already at home in her bed but as long as he wasn't sure he wouldn't dare it to go home.
Ryouga was on a journey but he wouldn't be a great help. Who was left? Ranma came an idea. He didn't like it but it was possible: What if she went to Kunou? This pervert would do everything to be alone with Akane.perhaps he gave her a kind of poisson so she loved him? And now they…
Ranma made a nauseated grimace because he couldn't stop his fantasy anymore.His mind was full of stupid ideas about what could happen if Akane was in Kunou's house. Two minutes later he was already on his way to the aforementioned house. He jogged down the streets and in his hurry he totally forgot to change back into his male form first.
It was dark now and Ranma really hoped to find Akane before he arrived at Kunou's. He'd rather liked it if she would be at home already. He was really worried now.
Out of breath he arrived at the Kunou's house.

"Kunou?!" he shouted, realizing that he had a girls voice.

"Pig-tailed girl?!"

Kunuo nearly broke the door apart when he opened it. "Like I've allways dreamed." he said dreamy when he spotted Ranma standing there dripping wet in the dark outside his door. Ranma looked not very happy.

"Do you know where Akane is? She's disappeared.", he demanded sheerly.

"Akane Tendou? The poor, sure she's jealous because you're visiting me this late. But I will go out with her tomorrow!", he shouted out in the dark. Ranma gave him a piercing look. Kunou didn't seem as if he would conceal something.

"Come in, my honey." Kunou murmured and waited until Ranma was inside.
Just to be sure that Akane was really not there he entered.

"Show me your room!" he ordered.

Kunou had an expression as if a volcanic eruption would take place on his head. He ran upstairs and Ranma followed him. To his relief there was no Akane to see, but his relief soon turned into anger. First he searched for hours in the icy rain, then, what was the most terrible thing, he had to visit Kunou. And after all this he couldn't find her anywhere.

"Damn! Where is she?" he asked himself. Kunou interrupted his thoughts.

"I suppose it's your fault.", he said convinced.
Ranma hesitated.
A second time he thought about this possibility. He hadn't been this nice to Akane the whole day. He had teased her and it might be that she was hurt deeply after what he had said to her that morning. – But … how could Kunou know about that? Ranma was a girl!

"Why…why do you think so?" , he asked him with big puppy eyes.

"Oh, that's easy. She's angry with you." Kunou said as if he was a psychiatrist.

Ranma was totally baffled.
"But why? We've only quarreled around like we allways do. That's certainly no reason to run away."

"You didn't understand, girl with plait. She's angry because she thinks you've more chances to go out with me than her." he said, "but she has at least the same chances.", he added grinning.
Ranma felt like throwing a hammer after him. But Kunou's stupid gossip brought him to the idea that it was perhaps his own fault that Akane had run away.

"Have to go." he just said faintly.

Then he opened the window and jumped out of it with ease. Kunou watched his sweetheart with an outraged expression on his face.

"You go?! Don't you wanna take a hot bath with me?" he was near the tears. "You're pretty nasty to leave me alone now!"

But Ranma didn't hear him anymore. He had enough now. Despondently he went back to the Tendou residence. When he arrived his heart nearly stopped beating.
There was light in Akane's room!

"ARRGH! Now you're in trouble, Akane!"

He somehow managed it to climb up the balcony. The door was open a few centimeters so he could enter. Angrily he hit against the door shouting "AKANE!".
The next thing he noticed was a little black ball jumping fast straight into his face. With his unbelievable reaction he kicked it against the door before it could smash his nose. He was proper sure that the little black thing was knocked out. But when he looked at it once againhe had to determine that the 'it' was nobody else than P-Chan.

"Oh, Ryouga! What the hell did you do?" Softly Ranma picked up his enemie and sneaked quietly into the bathroom. After making sure nobody had herad him he stripped, threw his wet clothes into the corner, washed himself with cold water and – hold P-Chan, or better Ryouga below it.
With a short "SQUEEK!" the little pig jumped back and shaked himself. He looked slandered at Ranma, tourned around and jumped into the tub with Ranma following him.

"Brrr. That's been cold!" Ryouga complained after he had changed back into his normal body.

"Just tell me what you're doing here and why you've attacked me!" Ranma said. The hot water defrosted his toes. His muscles relaxed and he noticed how tired he was.

Ryouga went red a little.
"Uhm… I thought… might be you were a thief or kind of. I just wanted to defend Akane's room."

Ranma rolled his eyes. "And what do you do here? Akane isn't there, is she?"

"Oh, I heard Akane's father roaring like mad in the house. I understood something like "Akane isn't there!". I just wanted to find out what was going on so I turned into P-Chan and slipped through the door – "

"Ah, thought you could spy a little, didn't you?" Ranma interrupted pertly.

"Let me finish! Well, I slipped in, Nabiki picked me up and put me into Akane's room. I was in there for at least three hours and I wasn't able to transform back. It was my luck that she left the light on."

Ranma couldn't help grinning but Ryouga didn't notice.

"Fact is that Akane's gone. She's missing since right after school and nobody knows where she is."
Ryouga jumped up and with him half the water left the tub.

"We have to find her! Perhaps she's in danger! Why don't you look after her properly?" Ryouga didn't understand Ranma at all. If he was Akane's fiance he'd follow her every meter she went.

"Ryouga, I've looked for her for hours and she's nowhere to find. Even her friends don't know where she is. I don't know what to do now so tell me! Her family will kill me if I don't find her. Please, ryouga, tell me everything she told P-Chan, every hint which could help us to find her!"

Ryouga was baffled. He hadn't seen Ranma in a state like this before. But then he suddenly smiled. "Ranma,", he said, "you can tell the whole world that you don't love Akane, but I won't believe you, never!"

Ranma wasn't able to reply something. Not because he didn't find the right words but because of Soun Tendou, who stepped into the bathroom. When he saw Ranma wenr red like a tomatowith a bad sunburnt. He snorted like a bull.

"RAAANMAAAAA!!!"

Ranma jumped back shocked.
"Uhm…Icouldn't find her. I came back five minutes ago."

"We are worrying about you two and what do you do? Akane could be in danger and you are sitting here having a bath!"
With every word he said he stepped a little closer. When he finished his sentence he stood right in front of Ranma, his eyes glowing with rage.

"If you are worrying all the day, why didn't you search for her as well?"
Mr Tendou made a little pause. He thought for a moment, but then he said:
"This is not what we're talking about! Your father and I, we had other things to do!"
Mr Tendou blushed while he was speaking.

"Uh-hum, I suppose a shogi-day is much more important than the own daughter." Ranma said reproachful.

"Shut up now!" Mr Tendou went a little more red than he had already been, but he didn't lose his control.
"Okay, so what shall we do now?" he asked and there was a hint of desperation in his voice.
Ranma left the tub as Ryouga had done it before and wrapped a towel around his hip.

"Of course I will help you! I'll do my best to find her, I swear." Ryouga explained ceremonial.

"Yes. We'll ask everyone to help us and we'll find her, I'm sure." Ranma added. They were acting like all hope was already gone and they'd be the last heros who were searching for the beautiful virgin.

"You…you are so nice." Soun sniffled.
"My daughter… my poor daughter." he sobbed into a pile of towels next to him.
"Akane, we're coming. Hold out!" he shouted.
It seemed as if they all knew in what a dangerous situation Akane really was.

* * * * *

END OF CHAPTER ONE

Puuh, this needed long… *exhausted* I hope you liked it. I didn't plan it that long but I – I really have no explanation for why I wrote that much. I'll work on the second chapter but unfortunately school has started again so it will take a while. Until then,
Nice fanfiction-reading !!!
(INSIDER-TIP: you should try a few by Kaeera)