Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or the characters. I simply own the story itself. Naruto belongs to Sasuk…. I mean Kishimoto.
Just in case: Due to Naruko being the name created by fans, therefore being a fandom name, it is not required by me to use 'Naruko' as the name for female Naruto. Kishimoto was not the one who created this name for that version of Naruto. I will however, place any and all female Naruto stories I have within the 'Naruko' category due to the story being about the FEMALE Naruto. {Since previously I was complained to for placing my stories in the Naruto Character category; since the story was about a Female Naruto.}
I do realize that I am not the characters however I write my stories in first person perspective. If you do not like first person stories, then feel free to leave if you are not willing to give it a shot. I can understand people's preferences towards stories. Third person is more centered on description, whereas First person is more centered on feelings/emotions.
No Criticism, Flamers or any of that. Don't like, don't read. That is why they invented the "X" at the top of your browser and the back key in the address bar. Do not leave the story via the review section, seeing as that keeps you within the story that you possibly didn't give a chance.
Warning: I speak more Japanese than I do English; therefore you will find some translation errors or possibly a few grammar or spelling errors floating around. I don't have a beta reader and, honestly, I do not want one. The last time I tried to have a Beta Reader; they tried to change everything that would happen in my story. It takes me a while, but I do go back to older chapters and rewrite them or check them for errors.
There was a winner for the poll; Hikari o Mite. The abbreviation for this story will be HoM, so everyone can understand when I say 'HoM.'
This is the reveal of the newer story I will start updating sometime on a weekly basis possibly after Thanksgiving or sometime in December.
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Things couldn't get any worse right? Yeah I guess that was just a load of crap anyway. All I could do was sigh as I decided to take a different path than normal to get to the Uchiha compound. Today was a very long day. I literally just finished helping Kakashi bring Sakura, who was passed out, to her home. To be honest, I was glad she was passed out; man did she give me the worst headaches when she was awake.
I don't quite understand how I got stuck in helping Kakashi bring Sakura home anyway. I mean, Kakashi is a big boy, he can do it all by himself! Is he trying to say that Sakura is fat or overweight? I myself may believe that out of sick humor and possible hatred towards the girl. Can't blame me, she scares me to death with her fangirl fantasies that involve ME in every fantasy she has. It's not like she even tries to hide it!
I groaned as I rubbed my forehead. Things would go better if I stopped thinking about her and focus on heading home. I nodded more to myself as I continued down the sidewalk. I heard people talking from the alley that I had just walked by but ignored it. I only stopped because my shoe was untied! Yeah, that's it… I wasn't listening in on anything they were saying at all, yeah!
"My father told me that I could do anything I want to you, even if it meant letting out all my sexual anguish on you." Sick kid right here… "He even told me that I could knock you up and then knock you off to the side." What the hell? I raised my brow as I turned my head back towards the alley. Who the hell would tell their child to knock up someone and then toss them to the side? That IS sick!
"The best part about all of this? You can't even call for help! Hell, you can't even fight back against us!" I heard someone else say. Now I was stuck between a mental debate. Should I interfere or just continue heading home? But, I knew that if I left someone to get raped, I would regret not doing anything for days to come. They even said that she couldn't defend herself, so now I felt partially obligated to help. I sighed as I turned around to peer down the alley.
There was a group of people surrounding a girl. She seemed very impassive, despite what the boys were saying to her. I instantly recognized the girl. 'Uzumaki? What is she doing in a place like this?' I definitely had to help now. I stared at the group of men as they continued to tell the blonde haired girl with red frosted tips, how they were going to rape her and what they would do after that. My eye twitched violently as I fisted my hand. I couldn't let them touch my teammate. I reached down, picking up several rocks.
One of the men lifted up a knife to her clothes while I lifted one of the rocks from my hand then threw it. It hit the guy hands right on target, causing the knife to fall to the ground. "The hell?" He said as he turned towards me. "Leave Uzumaki alone." I stated in a stern voice as I threw another rock, hitting one of the other men in the head. He fell to the ground, causing double the damage which led him to pass out.
"It's a U-Uchiha!" One of the men shouted as he dropped his knife and ran past me in fear. Before I could go after him, the leader of the group growled, catching my attention. I watched as an emotion passed through his eyes before he stood up straight. "Alright… you want this demon? You can have her then…" I watched him with caution as he moved out of the way, letting Uzumaki walk past him.
Just as she got towards the end of where the group was; the leader kicked her right in the back, causing her to fall down on the ground, head first. All I could do was shout "Shit!" as things sunk in.
†Break†
Her breathing was fast yet so calm, I noticed, as I continued to stare at the body of my teammate. When I thought the night couldn't get any worse; the doctor had came to inform me that my teammate was blind. He was unsure if it was temporary or permanent and said that after a few weeks they would possibly know. All I could do was remember how this happened, how the guy had pushed her right into a broken bottle… a bottle that he had apparently broken to get her attention. All that glass had cut her right in her eye, some going very deep. I instantly shuddered at the thought.
"Sasuke." I peered up from my teammate to see Kakashi standing at the door. "The third is punishing those men… thanks to you. He said if you hadn't knocked them out and tied them up, that they would have gone after her again and still gotten away with their crimes." I grunted as I put my gaze back onto my teammate. "I didn't get one of them… the instant they saw me, he bolted off."
"That was the thing I came to tell you. He was captured not too long ago. He was hiding in the girl's bathhouse, claiming he thought it was the men's… the instant he saw the others sitting in the interrogation room, he broke down and told us everything." I looked back towards Kakashi. "That's good."
"Sasuke, it wasn't your fault that all this happened. You saved her from getting raped-" I cut Kakashi off instantly. "But not from going blind." I stated. "Unlike Sakura, Uzumaki LOVES being a ninja… tries her hardest and takes it seriously." Kakashi simply nodded. "That is true but… if I know her, she will still fight and find a way around being blind." I fell silent. "For now though…" I raised my brow, staring at Kakashi.
"You will be in charge of making sure that she can get around the village. Being blind, she won't be able to make it around on her own for a while. She will need to try and remember the layout of Konoha and how to get around so she can become independent again." I nodded in agreement. "Good, I don't have to say it's a mission from the Hokage to make you do it." Of course not… I felt this was my entire fault anyway.
Though… I guess I can't tell him that or he would give me another lecture that I wasn't willing to sit through, not right now. I stood from the chair then went into the hall. I wanted to sit down to think; I mean… I've been here for a while now.
"Uchiha Sasuke?" I looked up from the seat in the hall, to see the doctor. "Yes?" The doctor nodded to me as he sat down next to me. "Your teammate will be fine, but she is blind. All the glass shards went straight into her eyes… we had to take her into surgery just to get some of the shards out." He handed me a piece of paper. Why was he repeating himself again about the shards? I knew that already! "She might suffer from depression, so someone needs to watch over her through it." He pointed at the paper. I peered down at it. Oh, that's why. "That is a discharge sheet for Uzumaki Naruto Akuma… You may give it to anyone you know to sign it."
"Can I sign it myself?" I instantly asked, causing the doctor to stare at me in shock. "Well, you could but… are you sure you want to watch over her?" I nodded. "She is my teammate, so I understand her better than any of the adults could." He nodded to my reasoning. "That is definitely a teammate thing." He said as he laughed.
I looked the paper up and down. "May I have a pen?" I asked the doctor as he nodded. He reached into his pocket and handed me his pen. I once again scanned through the sheet so I wouldn't make any mistakes. "You just need to fill out some of her information since the hospital doesn't seem to have her record. After that, at the bottom sign your name." I nodded to him as he stood up. "I will be in her room, you can hand me back my pen along with the sheet when you are done."
I clicked the pen as I began filling in the paper.
Name: Uzumaki Naruto Akuma.
Date of Birth: October 10th.
Birth Parents:
I stared at that before writing down orphan. I believe he could take that, right? I mean no one really ever stated who her parents were nor did people seem to care. I quickly filled out the rest of the sheet then signed my name. Realization hit me after I finished signing my name. What if she wanted Iruka to watch her rather than me? I hope she doesn't mind… I mean, it would be strange I guess? I stared down at the paper before shaking my head. I returned to Akuma's room and handed the doctor the paper and pen before he nodded to me.
I had to live with my decision… and I sure as hell hoped that she didn't mind my decision either. The only thing was, would I have to take care of her at her place or mine? Her place was a mess… at least, that was several months ago that I last saw her room. I do faintly recall Kakashi telling me that she does 'spring cleaning' at the start of spring and during the summer. He also said something about her hating the cold.
So maybe the Uchiha compound would be better right? I mean I keep it cleaned… there is REAL food in the fridge, not some heart attack in a cup waiting to happen.
I could ask her right? Though… I highly doubt I would get a response.
Damn it.
-AN-
So I was doing a poll for a while and the original winner was going to be 'Echo.' Instead, Hikari o Mite gained a bunch of votes at the last minute causing it to be the winner.
I wrote several versions of this story to see which one seemed better for a story mainly based in Sasuke's perspective. He will be the one leading you through this entire story. It took me a while to finally choose which version seemed best; and it ended up being this one.
In this story, Sasuke will be more of the 'nice guy' tone however, not entirely. The big thing is, he won't be emo-tastic like he is in the anime/manga.
During this story, you will see the female Naruto get called between: Naru, Naruto, Aku, Akuma, Ku-chan, Uzumaki and dobe. This is due to the fact that I look at how people treat each other and notice that each friend has a different way they call their friends. For example: Some call me Daemon, others call me Akuma, family calls me FerFer/FurFur and Midget, some call me T or so on.
Due to this small observation, each character will call the Female Naruto differently. As shown in this chapter, Sasuke is constantly thinking 'Uzumaki' because he isn't close to Naruto. He does still say dobe, of course.
Well I think that is all I wanted to give towards information of this new story. Trust me, I know it isn't that great, haha! Most of my stories aren't, but I do this to keep my mind focused on my main story without random ideas coming out of no where.
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My username for Tumblr and Twitter are also DaemonDeDevil but for ease, I have the links to my accounts for those sites in my profile at the top.
That is all.
-Ja ne
