This story is actually a drama, not a comedy so sorry for the false advertising.
I started this story when I was 14 and I'm 20 now so I'm also sorry for the change in writing styles. I don't believe I will ever finish this story but if you want to start reading this, just be warned that I left it on a horrible cliff-hanger.
Anyways, enjoy.
Chapter 1
"Tatsuki-chan!" A bouncy figure ran into the view of Arisawa Tatsuki. The one and only Inoue Orihime.
"Hey Orihime. Are you excited about our hike, today?" Tatsuki called out before being engulfed by the flaming hair of Orihime, by which Orihime was trying to hug her best friend.
"Oh yes! Of course I am!" Orihime pulled away from her friend and pulled at the gigantic bag upon her shoulders.
"... What did you bring?" Tatsuki pointed at the massive bag and sighed.
"Oh! I brought some food, some bug spray, my umbrella, some spare clothes, my camera, a picnic rug, my torch and my first aid kit and... I think that's it..." Orihime looked up at the sky as her finger was placed on her chin.
"We aren't going to camp out here and I won't let you get hurt... Wait, how much food did you bring?" Tatsuki should have known that Orihime would bring alot of food for this 'trip'.
Before Tatsuki could have said wow, a massive mountain of food came tumbling out of Orihime's bag.
"Why did you bring so much food, Orihime?" Tatsuki sighed again and slapped herself across the forehead. The mountain of food before the two friends was a jumble of sandwiches, chips, drinks and lollies.
"I thought we might be hungry so I packed up some food for a picnic!" Orihime happily chimed.
"Please define the word 'some'." Tatsuki's voice dripped in sarcasm.
"Oh, don't be mean, Tatsuki-chan! Come on, let's start our hike!" Orihime twirled in excitement while Tatsuki bent over and started to pack the food back into Orihime's bag.
"By the time I get all this food back in your bag, it'll be time to go home." Tatsuki mumbled.
The two girls hiked along the rocky terrain of the park, resting once in a while to have a rest. Except 'once in a while' was about every 10 minutes to Orihime. Stopping for the 10th time in the last hour, Orihime pulled out one of her sandwiches and drinks.
"Let's stop for lunch, Tatsuki-chan!" Tatsuki couldn't say no as Orihime had already pulled out the picnic rug from her bag. Tatsuki sighed before she nodded and headed backwards, towards her best friend.
"Today is such a nice day! We should hike more often!" Orihime looked up at the blue sky before jamming most of her salami and tuna sandwich into her mouth. Tatsuki watched playfully, as her oblivious friend rambled on about the day.
"You know what, Tatsuki-chan? We should stay here for a few more hours before we go home!" Orihime mumbled joyfully through her sandwich.
"Orihime, you have some salami sliding down the side of your chin." Tatsuki nearly giggled at the sight of Orihime. (a/n: see the word 'nearly')
"Oh. Thanks Tatsuki-chan. Do you like your sandwich?" Orihime had a tinge of hopefulness in her voice.
"Uh, yeah I do. What did you put in it today?" Tatsuki was looking worriedly at her sandwich now.
"Oh! That sandwich has tuna and peanut butter! I wanted you to try it first for me!" Tatsuki suddenly lost half her appetite, but didn't want to disappoint her friend and her unusual food choices.
"It's actually not that bad!" Tatsuki gulped down another bite of her sandwich to make her lie, believable.
"Really? Let me have a bite!" Orihime extended her hand out and Tatsuki gave her the sandwich gladly. Taking a bite from where Tatsuki had, Orihime held the bite in her mouth for a while before exclaiming.
"That is really good!" Orihime grinned widely at her new 'invention'. A dribble of the peanut butter landed on Orihime's cheek, going unnoticed by the cheerful youth.
"Orihime. You have anoth... Never mind, I'll get it." Tatsuki reached into her pocket for a tissue and slowly brought it up to Orihime's cheek. Wiping the dab away, Tatsuki couldn't help but smile at how cute her friend looked right now. Orihime looked like a small child, having there face cleaned by their mothers, almost protesting yet grateful. Tatsuki looked away, a blush creeping over her cheeks for more than one was a person that could definitely win an award for best at hiding her feelings. Deep within Tatsuki's heart, Orihime had somehow carved her name in there. It pained Tatsuki to not be able to fully love her crush but she was grateful that she could be a friend.
"Come on, Orihime. Let's get going. I didn't come here just to eat. I planned on actually hiking today." Tatsuki hauled herself upwards and headed up the track, leaving a pouting Orihime in her wake.
"Tatsuki-chan! Wait up!" Orihime scrambled upwards, pulling her bag upwards with her, "WAIT!"
Tatsuki spun around on her heels and watched as her friend was having a hard time at stuffing the picnic rug into her bag.
"Do you need help?" Tatsuki called back.
"No! I don't! I don't need any of your help! You can go away!" Orihime finally got the rug into her bag and spun on her heels and headed back down the path, only to turn into the wrong path.
"Orihime!" Tatsuki ran after her friend, who had walked out her view, "Orihime! I'M SORRY!"
Tatsuki turned the corner and saw that her friend had walked further up the wrong path. Orihime had her hands over her ears and was headed towards a suspension bridge, sitting lowly over a river.
"Orihime!" Tatsuki ran faster but Orihime had already reached the bridge and began to cross it. By the time Tatsuki reached the foot of the bridge, Orihime had already travelled about three quarters across the bridge. Tatsuki couldn't run across the bridge, way too risky but she did sort of power walk across the bridge. Orihime had reached the other side of the bridge, only giving a slight glance back at Tatsuki. Orihime's temper was overpowering her and nothing would stop it.
But maybe a one sound. A snap.
A resounding snap was heard, making both girls stop in their tracks. Another snap, before another. The two girls' eyes travelled over to the ropes holding the suspension bridge up.
"Tatsuki!"