Hey peeps!
brambleclaw: i want some peeps!
me: not those kinds of peeps
Brambleclaw: aw foo
Me: anyways I was trying to sleep but this story kept bugging me so much! _ also i need to know if i should continue posting chapters of this story of i should write them and keep them to myself.
Brambleclaw: this creeper does not own warriors
me: hey!
I know I should hate her but I still love her so much even after what she did.
but I can't forgive her so easily because lying about my kin is a big deal to me.
but that was my mistake
Hello my name is brambleclaw and I will guide you through this tradgeic tale of hate, love, blood, forgiveness, and the ultiamite sacrifice.
It all started on a normal day for me getting up at dawn to go on border patrol
as I walked out I saw squirrelflight pacing around anxiously, her head shot up as soon as I saw her.
"brambleclaw I need you to listen to me" she said, I just walked past her ignoring her completely.
"fine"I could hear her hiss "if thats how your going to respond then I shouldnt bother trying" she said a mix of hurt and anger in her voice.
I ignored it completely and met up with sandstorm, lionblaze,and thornclaw.
"ready to go?" I asked the all nodded their heads and we headed back
When we got back most cats were awake and the camp was very busy.
I saw squirrelflight look at me sadness filled her eyes, but there was something else there too, determination.
Right there and then i wanted to run towards her and forgive her for what she did,but I held my own and turned my head away.
"brambleclaw" firestar said padding up to me.
"firestar" i dipped my head in aknowledgement.
"i need you birchfall and graystripe to go out hunting" he said
"alright firestar" i said walking off to meet with graystripe and birchfall who were waiting for me
"ready" graystripe asked
"yea" i said with that we walked out of the camp
"where are we hunting" i asked
"over by the clearing" replied birchfall
my stomach grumbled, I still hadden't eaten today and i was tempted to eat the pray that I would catch right away, but I knew that was the wrong thing to do.
for the rest of the way we walked in silence, when we got there we started hunting.
I crouched down low to hide myself while hunting a robin. i was just about to pounce when suddenly-
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the bird flew away i cursed under my breath and went to see what all the fuss was about.
But when i got there i could not believe my eyes
graystripe and birchfall were standing over a dead cat.
i walked closer to get a better look.
The dead cat was spiderleg.
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me: so was it good? was it bad? do i need to work on or change anything?let me know for possibly next time
Thanks for reading
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