there is a clan of each eveveluation if you step into one of the other clans tirritory you will be punished or killed or exiled one clan is of lefons umbreons esponse vaporons flaeons glacions joltons but the darkest clan is the umbreons they kill on site so they were all killed but one female baby umbreon servied the killing here is her story i ran being one years old and no stregth and a shiny purple umbreon is a bad mix i berly now who i am so i named myself luna i did not now of the clan tirroties yet so i was runing into espon tirritory but i did not look were i was going and bumbed into someone it just happend to be the clan leader hey all umbreon are to be killed i begged for mercy please i was just borine and do not now anything at all please doint kill me how did you servie just as she asked the quistion the littile umbreon ran off then she was in glacion tirritry she saw a cave so she went in it and soon luna relized how tired she was she fell asleep instaintly she was rudly awokr by a showdow ball hiting her it was a male glacion and his mate so sorry sir i thought this cave was aboned i just wanted a home get out now hun look at her she looks like a freek lets sell her with that she ran away she then wadoerd into leafon territory a bush of food but a leaf sticking out she bulles on the leaf ouch what was that a male leafon came out who was the clan leder saw the baby umbreon please doint hurt me get out young one sir please i have no home all pokemon here hate you dumb umbreon with that a home made net was put under on top of her hey let me go nope we going to make some mony from you please i beg you please no they put her in a store and caged her up she cried all day hey shut it please let me out then a male jolton walked in (this is a town were all pokemon can be together) hello i want to buy a fresh slave well sir heres one right here he pulls me out onto the floor still in my cage i cower in the corner not nowing wats going on were did you find her she pulled on my tail in the woods she is still very hungry you will habe to feed her yourself she is about one years old please let me go hey shut it were talking he then put a mussele on my face next thing i know is a leash is but on me i am tied up to a wall and being examed sezes i was not potty triend i peid in fright she is quite scared then i got a punch in the stomeck hey she dident mean to dude she ist potty traind leave her alone fine i was but pack in my cage and in a wagon with ponyats makeing it go i was then takein out of my cage and i was in a den but the cave enterence was being guarded please i doint now how to work then to more jolton came out on female the other male looked young hun why is this slave in the den she is only a baby hun when she is 4 or 5 she will be able to work fine get the whip yes mom why the whip to show what hapens wehen you mess up or disobay heres the whip after a lot of slashings i was but in my cage and cried myself to sleep mom can i take her for a walk ok but hold her leash titgh and heres the mussel ok he puts it on me the the leash come on he makes me start wlaking and i begin to wimber hey shut it so i stoped then he took me to a food place and tide me reely good next to his taple were he then met a female jolton hey whos that spark just the slave we caught now i no why he brought me to get a girl i began growling but he slaped me shutup so i stoped wow she looks cute shes a baby so why the mussle ok i will take it off for now takes it off and i cower under the table she gets nurvose around people
what do you thnik for a first chapter