Good Girl Gone Bad

(The Revision)

I know I should be updating Bitten first, but I decided to do this one ehehe. It's just a revision anyway. :) I hope it's better than the first version.

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Disclaimer: Naruto ish not mine.

( RD-CHAN HOKAGE )


SAKURAAAAAAAAAAA!

Thud. Thud. Thud.

"Did you find her?"

No answer.

"Ugh. That little – "

"Maybe she's at the attic." A suggestion.

Pause.

Thud. Thud. Thud.

Footsteps fading.

Silence.

Haruno Sakura sighed in great relief.

She ignored the tiny space that cramped her small form in; darkness engulfing her entirely as she hid in the cabinet. Sweat began to form in her forehead, she supposed; heat inside the closed space slowly hitting her skin and it won't be long before she's begging for cool air. Her fingers gently pushed the one flap of the cabinet, careful not to make any creaking sound.

Light streaked inside.

She pushed further until the whole flap was opened. A cool breeze swept through her damp face, causing her to breathe in heavily, swinging her legs outside. A pink-haired girl emerged from the stall. Wearing a white t-shirt and boxer shorts, she smirked at the earlier conversation.

She hopped down, bare feet in contact with the tiled floor and left the place.

Though she had only made five steps until a familiar blonde showed up.

"Going somewhere?" The blonde, her hair tied in four pigtails, had a triumphant glint in her eye while standing on Sakura's way.

"Can't we just please go somewhere else?" Sakura cried.

"Nuh-uh." She replied, shaking her head for emphasis. "You are going there with us."

"You do know I have this fear of men, right Temari?" The rosette cringed.

"Sak – "

"And that place would be swarming with males who are worse than rapists!" The girl was flailing her arms which Temari, her friend, found a bit amusing.

There was no way in hell would she go to a night club.

Sakura was about to add more when a loud stomp of foot surprised the two girls. They both looked at the hallway on the left of Sakura and saw their other friend, a brunette who had her hair tied into two Chinese buns, covered in dust. Her chocolate eyes instantly glared at Sakura upon seeing her.

"You." She glowered, eyes narrowing at the pinkette who was obviously stifling her laugh. "YOU STUPID LITTLE VIRGIN! HOW DARE YOU!"

"It's not my fault you easily fell for it!" Sakura shot back. At least her trap didn't come to waste. Heh.

There was a growl. "Come here you mother – "

"Now Tenten, this isn't the time – "

"Shut. Up." The girl hissed, clearly furious. "I am not fucking talking to you!"

That caused the blonde to narrow her eyes next. How dare she talk to her like that?

"You did not just do that." Temari snapped angrily.

"Who cares if I did?!" Tenten answered, her attention diverted to the blonde.

Sakura watched the interesting turn of events, glancing alternately between the two. They seriously have this creepy aura of ripping each other's eyes out. Knowing she's finally out of the topic, she shrugged and muttered "Happy cat fighting!"

Which was wrong. Very, very damn wrong.

Two pairs of eyes now stared at her. Both narrowed and made her suddenly nervous. She shouldn't have muttered anything at all. Actually, letting them go into her house was all the cause of this. Because their supposed one week stay with her turned into making her a 'brave' girl.

Hence, the night club.

"Ehe ~" She smiled sheepishly, scratching her head. "I was just kidding." But deep inside, Sakura told herself she was pretty much screwed.

And then there was black.


Groan.

Twitch. Twitch.

Slowly opening her eyes, Sakura was glad she was in her room. The familiar peach interiors of her bedroom made her relax but as she moved from her lying position, something was odd.

Her hands and feet were tied.

She was tied up.

In her own room.

A scream was about to tear from her throat when someone cut her off.

"Finally." Temari sat in front her, like she'd been waiting for her to come back to life.

"Why on earth am I tied up?!" Sakura asked, annoyed. She tried to move, but only ended up squirming. Her friends were really insane. They even have the nerve to bind her in her own house.

"So you won't escape again." Temari answered coolly. "Duh."

Sakura groaned. "If you guys are planning to convince me to go to a night club, then my answer is no." She shook her head. "Nope. Nada. Zilch. No. No. And no."

The blonde sighed and looked to her left.

"You know Sakura, 'no' makes a good fuck turn to rape." Tenten said, now fully cleaned.

Temari facepalmed.

Sakura stared at her weirdly.

"What?"

"Why are you guys even trying to make me go there?" Sakura asked them, burying the earlier statement into the pits of her mind.

"Overcome your fear of meeeen ~ " Tenten answered happily.

"And have some fun." Temari added.

"No. I don't care if it's one childish fear. But come on, isn't sleep over more fun?" She convinced them again. Men, she shuddered. She had developed the fear during her childhood when boys kept on making fun of her, more like bullying, especially her forehead. And what made it worse was when her childhood crush pretended to be her friend, only to learn that he was also one of her bullies.

Ever since that day, she pleaded to study in an all girls' school and rarely went out of her home.

"Sakura, you're imprisoned here for almost thirteen years! Don't you want to at least get some new atmosphere?" Tenten said. "And if you think guys will bully you, fear not. You're hot Sakura." The girl winked as she giggled mischievously.

"Are you lesbian?" The pinkette blurted.

"Excuse me, I'm fucking straight." She retorted. "I wouldn't be dating the Hyuuga Neji if I were."

"Whatever, I'm still not going." Sakura huffed, staring at the ceiling.

"Please, Sakura. Just for tonight." Temari's voice rang in her ears. She was shocked that her friend was actually pleading. But no, she can't go there. A lot of men would be there. And the last time she encountered a man, she almost fainted for she blushed uncontrollably and couldn't think straight. It felt unusual. Maybe because she shunned herself from the specie for a very long time?

"We're just going to hang out anyway."

"And overcome your fear of meeeeen ~ "

"Stop it Tenten." Temari shot.

"What? It sounds awesome. Meeeeeeeeen ~ " She prolonged the 'men' which earned her a flying pen that hit her exactly on the forehead. "The hell was that for?!" Tenten cried.

"Well Sak? I know sleepover's fun but we just want to go party with you for one freaking night." Temari stared expectantly at Sakura who seemed to be deep in thought.

Okay. Temari did say just for tonight. And truly, I've been locked here for a really long time and barely made any contact with any guy except that last time. –sigh- I'm freaking eighteen yet I can barely make eye contact on a man. Oh gods. Okay okay. Maybe it is alright to go there. As long as they protect me from any rapist. Nod. Nod.

A sigh escaped her lips. "Promise me, you won't let a guy drag me somewhere."

Sakura's emerald orbs gazed at the blonde's eyes fiercely.

"Sure. So is that a yes?" There was a hint of excitement in her tone as Temari leaned.

Tenten also had her attention on Sakura, staring at the tied pinkette.

A nod.

"Yes!" The brunette jumped from her sitting position, cheering merrily and grinned deviously, while Temari went towards their friend and began untying her.

"Time to make Sakura-chan smeeeexeeeeehhh ~ " Tenten declared as she exited the room, her footsteps echoing.

"Say what?!"

"Relax, it's just a make-over." Temari assured her. Before she could protest, the older blonde dragged her away from her room as she cried mentally; again regretful of what she'd done. Won't a simple tee and jeans do?


Brush. Brush.

Shuffle. Shuffle.

"Ow! Watch it!"

"Sorry!"

Ksshh! Kssshh!

"Are you frying my hair?!"

"It's called curling."

"Ohh Sakura, lots of men would surely tap that ass!"

"Shut up, Tenten!"

An hour later…

"Tadaaaaa! Our masterpiece!" Tenten yelled with pride, spreading her arms as Sakura stared at her reflection on the mirror, with eyes wide. Temari only clapped her hands, gazing at her from top to bottom approvingly.

Holy crap.

"I look like a slut!" Sakura exclaimed, turning to her friends with a look of disbelief. Her friends only shrugged and seemed to be happy with their so-called masterpiece.

On the mirror was a girl wearing a really short glossy pleated skirt with a matching belt on; from her thighs was a fishnet along with stilettos for her feet. She wore a black spaghetti strapped blouse that reached her navel, rising when she stretches under a cropped crimson top that had silver sequins designed in a swirl. She had black eyeliner and glossy lips.

"Temari, we can be beauticians!" Tenten remarked, eyeing Sakura once more.

"Right, beauticians for sluts." Sakura said sarcastically. "I feel so nude! This skirt is too short. And what's up with the fishnet? Is this what a club wear supposed to be?" The pinkette questioned, hating that she's showing more skin than she expected to.

"It's fine Sak." Temari assured her, smiling widely. "Men would surely crowd around you."

"Exactly. That's why I need to change." She glared at Temari.

"Oh don't worry Sakura-chan, we're going to wear the same attire." Tenten popped up from behind her, a pair of leather fingerless gloves on her hand. "But yours should be sexier." She gave the gloves to her and suddenly snapped her head to Temari.

"What?"

"You think he would be there?" She asked the blonde.

"Who?"

"Duck-hair, duh."

Temari shrugged.

Sakura stared at the two. "Who are you guys talking about?"

"Oh nothing, just the God of Sex." Tenten said, disappearing from the room leaving Temari to answer. Sakura looked confused and instead direct her question to the blonde.

"Just a guy whom girls offer their virginity to him."


"Hey Teme! Find any gal yet?"

Sitting on the counter, away from the grinding dancers in the middle, were two men. A knuckleheaded blond tapped his friend who gulped down his drink of beer. A foxy grin made way to his whiskered face when the Teme smirked.

"I never run out of girls." He said smugly, flashing a random girl a grin. "They come to me after all."

"Pshh. You and your stupid ego, Sasuke-teme." The blond rolled his eyes. "Anyway, gonna go scout for Hinata."

"Hn."


Sakura felt her eardrums almost bursting the moment they entered the club. The music boomed in every corner and people are dancing crazily in the middle, their bodies grinding in a sensual fashion she couldn't help but feel disgusted. And it was so dark.

"I seriously want to go home now." Sakura mumbled, nudging Temari. She stood uncomfortably in between her two friends. She can already feel the many gazes of people on her and most of them are males.

They walked further and as expected, men approached Sakura, much to her dismay.

"Sorry guys, but she's off limits." Temari shooed away the incoming hormone-raged teens that eyed Sakura with hints of want. The girl could only shudder in fear.

"See Sakura, you shouldn't waste your beauty. Lots of men want to bed you now. Literally." Tenten told her.

"That is not helping me at all." Sakura murmured, wishing she'd brought her jacket for cover. She can barely feel her clothes with all the stares she get. Like their eyes were removing every piece of her clothing.

"Oopsie. I spot a Hyuuga in the corner." Tenten whistled, brown eyes staring at a particular long-haired male. She stared at Temari. "My man needs me." She explained and gave Sakura a pat on the head before vanishing in the crowd.

"Uhm, Temari… you're not going to leave me alone right?" She looked at her friend pleadingly.

"Unfortunately, yeah." She replied, but before Sakura could complain. "But I'll be back. I think it's better if you wear your earphones and keep watch on your phone so you can call me if you're in trouble."

"I'm already in trouble." Sakura said distressfully, making a quick glance at her surroundings.

"You're eighteen Sakura. Act like a woman." The blonde flicked her forehead and left.

Meanwhile, Sasuke began his hunt. Slipping through the crowd and ignoring girls that didn't suit his taste. They almost looked the same, bearing that whorish appearance again and again. He wanted something new, something fresh. His onyx orbs scanned the place, hunting for a new prey that would satisfy his needs for tonight.

He ran his fingers through his raven-hair when he found no girl. He looked around again and that's when he saw her. He licked his lips. Despite the delicious outfit she wore, he can clearly tell she was uncomfortable and new. Her innocence was calling out to him, tempting him to taint her with his charms.

"Hey sexy."

Sakura only flashed him a shy smile and walked past him. He probably was the twentieth guy that greeted her. She didn't need any companion because right now, she thinks every single one of the males are rapists only waiting for the right time to pounce her. She walked to a less crowded area, hoping a normal girl would be there too. The stilettos were already killing her feet so she decided to rest, leaning her back against the wall and sighing.

Going here was more boring.

"What's up, little girl?"

Another shunned away man.

"Sorry but – "

Oh it seems someone made it interesting.

As she looked up to see whom – she only noticed now – the deep seductive voice belonged to, she felt her cheeks burn in utter surprise and female instincts. Towering before her was a guy, no older than herself, who was the absolute definition of a god. His smoldering midnight pools stared at her with a hint of naught and interest.

"What was that?" He asked her, leaning closer to her. His arm rested just above her head as he looked down at her, never breaking away his intense gaze.

"S-sorry but – " She immediately took a gulp and avert her eyes from his. "I – I don't talk to s – strangers."

Crap. Crap. Crap. I'm cornered by this hot – I mean unknown guy. What to do?!

Her heart kept on pounding inside her chest and he was dangerously close to her. Her mind was suddenly in a jumbled state. Oh gods. Was it because of his sex appeal?

He grunted, smirking down at her. She almost fainted. "Uchiha Sasuke, babe."

Sakura bit her lip. He was making her feel warm and aroused? Fuck. She did not just say she got turned on by him! And why on earth was he calling her babe? She glanced at him and immediately looked away, mumbling a soft timid, "Okay." Sakura thought he was going to leave but when he only leaned closer to her, she gave him a questioning look.

"Anou…" She tried to stop her blush. "Aren't you a – a bit too close, U – Uchiha-san?" She almost, almost squeaked the close part. What the hell was he doing to her?

"Sasuke." He stated.

"Huh?"

"Say it babe." The raven-haired teen said smirking at the 'babe'.

"Sa – Sasuke?" This time she looked at him, tilting her head in confusion.

"So babe – "

"It's Sakura!" She cried unexpectedly. She almost slapped herself at the outburst. Great. Now they're not strangers anymore.

"Say Sakura," Oh gods. Her name on his lips. "Wanna hang out with me?" His eyes did not simply mean hang out. There was sex in it. She was sure of it. His eyes screamed of hardcore sex!

"S – Sorry Sasuke-kun – " Now she added the –kun. Stupid, stupid Sakura. "My friends would be here soon." She lied.

The Uchiha needed full self-restraint from taking her right there on the wall. He didn't care if it was rape; all he wanted now was to have her in his bedroom, those slim legs wrapped around his waist as he pounded roughly inside her tight – Fuck. This was overboard. And her Sasuke-kun was heavenly. With only inches measuring their distance, Sasuke knew he won't be able to hold back his need any longer. As her glossy pink lips moved, so was his free hand.

But to his shock her hand suddenly held his wrist. He saw her face, fully flushed. She was obviously feeling the sexual tension between them.

"No touch!" She claimed.

"Oh." He touched her forehead with his, their warm breaths mingling. "Make me." He challenged, breaking away from her grasp and started to caress her smooth thigh. He grinned devilishly upon hearing her cute 'Kyaa' and seeing her eyes shut close at the contact.

"Still no touch?" Sasuke teased her. He was surprised she wore no shorts underneath the skirt so he freely roamed, making sure he gave her rear a nice squeeze. Her hand that once halted him, gripped his arm tightly. This made him feel triumphant. She was falling into his temptation. Her breaths slowly became uneven, panting softly against his face.

"This – This is rape, Sa – Sasuke-kun!" She protested but the way her emerald orbs gazed at him in a dazed state didn't convince him. It only turned him on even more.

"Really?" He moved his lips toward her ear, distance no more, nibbling her earlobe before whispering seductively. "Then why are you so responsive to me?"

His hand that was under her skirt began to caress her inner thighs where Sakura felt all her self-control diminish. What was happening to her? Despite the dirty, immoral actions, it all sent pleasure to her. Her womanhood throbbed as he inched closer.

"Sasuke-kun…" Sakura whimpered, trembling uncontrollably as jolts of pleasure ran through her. Her other hand held on his shoulder for support. She tried to stifle the moan, trying to prove she could resist him but crap. Resistance seemed futile to him. Her eyes could only squint at the Uchiha.

He dragged his moist lips to her cheek, along with his hand that traced the satin panties. He wondered how damp she would be. He licked away the gloss of her lips that slightly parted, inviting him to ravish the wet crevice. With control growing thin, he inserted his tongue and pulled her into a fiery kiss. His hand then began to rub her sex through its satin cover that was soaked with her fluids. She moaned in his mouth, still in their lip lock while he toyed with her below.

Her skin burned in warmth, the sensations driving her mad. She can feel his tongue exploring her mouth, all the while playing with hers. But what heightened her ecstasy were his fingers doing wonders underneath the pleated skirt. She can feel herself growing wet below.

Their kiss only broke when he played with her nub. She hastily buried her face on his shirt, muffling her noise as he traced the slit through the fabric.

He will surely bring her home tonight. No matter what happens.


Read&Review :3

Yep. Lemons.

I think it went too fast? Sorry for OOC characters. D:

I have forgotten the plot of the original story lol. But I hope this one's okay.

So, have my lemon skills dropped? XD