Okay so guys plzzzz review and give me suggestions and tell me whether u liked it or not? Oh and in this fan-fiction the war never happened and they are continuing their normal lives at Dauntless. The idea is widely used I know that but I promise this is something special and better. The story starts 2 years after Tris' initiation. Just 1 day before the current choosing ceremony. And if I get reviews then I'll upload 2 chapters in a day. And u guys can give me ideas for new chapters and everything.

Tris

I wake up pretty early at 6:30. I turn off the alarm and enter the bathroom to take a quick shower. Today there is not much to do but we have our Initiation meeting, Plus Christina is also taking me shopping later for New Year or something. I have started liking shopping now only a bit but I do find it exhausting. I have my days off work now as the Initiation is going to start in a day. I quickly change into a dress as I don't have to do much work. It has short sleeves and goes just under my hips. It is a short (very short) dress but I like it. I then do my make-up. Eye-liner, Mascara and Gloss. I leave my hair open I just brush through them and they get naturally curled from the tip, I like em that way. I decide on wearing heel sandals which are surprisingly comfortable. I quickly check the time 7:10. I still have time the meeting doesn't starts until 9:00. I decide to make breakfast for me and Tobias. I finally set on making Pancakes and coffee. It doesn't take long. Then I set everything on a tray and put a flower on the tray. I slowly make my way towards our bedroom. I put the tray on the nightstand and make my way towards Tobias. I gently kiss him on the lips and he slowly opens his eyes "Tris" he mumbles. "Morning Handsome" I say "Oh and I made you breakfast in bed"

"You're so nice Tris" he replies. "Thanks now come on eat it up" I carry the tray towards him and sit next to him on the bed. We talk about initiation and eat. He then gets up to shower and change. I redo my gloss. He comes out and I just stare at him. He's wearing a black short sleeved shirt which is also extremely tight and shows his muscles. He seems to notice me staring and says "What?" I quickly control myself "Oh, nothing" He grins I know he knows why I was staring I grin too knowing that he knows why. "Oh and you're looking pretty Tris" he says and I blush.

We leave the apartment at 8:45 and make our way to the cafeteria. We sit down on our usual table with Zeke, Shauna, Uriah, Marlene, Christina, Will and our ex-initiate and Tobias' new best friend "Two" we are the ones who gave him the name as he's training Initiates with us this year and we thought it would look cool if we all had the same type of names. Everybody's eating and talking until we come in. We exchange greetings. Zeke starts to notice that we aren't eating anything and he questions us "Aren't you guys going to eat anything?" Shauna seems annoyed and says "Is food all you care about Zeke?" "Yes" he replies "Now tell me!" he says. "Tris made breakfast today" Everybody thinks it's cute and Uriah says "Huh, buddy Four if only we were all as lucky as you" Marlene slaps Uriah's back and everybody laughs.

We are sitting in the meeting room discussing the Initiation. This year Me, Tobias and Two (well that's what everybody calls him now) are going to train transfers and Christina, Uriah and Marlene are training Dauntless-born. I'm actually happy for this year's Initiation as Eric won't be here. He is still a leader but as Two is also a Dauntless leader so this year he's overseeing the training as-well as training with us. I work as a faction ambassador and Christina works in the fashion department. Will works in the control room as well as Uriah, Tobias and Zeke. Shauna works in the tattoo parlor. Marlene works as a nurse. We get a 20 day break from our jobs for the training.

By the time we're done making a timetable of training and everything it's 01:00. Time for lunch. We make our way towards the cafeteria we are greeted by a not so happy Zeke (and by we I mean Me, Tobias, Christina, Marlene, Uriah and Two).

"What happened?" Four asks Zeke. "Well I got into a fight with Shauna, and trust me a seriously bad fight!" replies Zeke. "What did you do this time?" I ask. "Well I might have just forgotten that it was her birthday today" Zeke replies. "You forgot her birthday!" Uriah, Marlene and Christina scream at the same time. "You have to make it up to her!" Two exclaims. "What should I do?" Zeke asks looking towards Two. "Don't look at me you're the one with the bright party ideas" Two replies. Christina joins in "Well you could throw her a surprise 7:00 clock party" Christina exclaims. Everybody seems to agree with her. "Thanks God now we'll have to prepare for the party and we won't have to go shopping" I brightly say. "Oh no missy, you promised me you would go shopping with me a month ago!' Christina literally shouts in my ear. "Okay so listen I got this worked out" Zeke says. "Me, Four, Uriah, Will and Two are going to do the decorations the setting and everything and you girls could keep Shauna busy so she won't find out about the party!" Zeke says clearly proud of himself in making a decision so quickly. "I'm in as long as it involves shopping which we'll have to do to keep Shauna busy!" Christina says happily. "Oh but where are we going to have the party?" Uriah asks. "Well what about the empty building near the compound which has a huge roof!" We all nod in agreement. We leave with our packed lunches as well as Shauna's and go to the tattoo parlor to get her.

We shopped for almost 3 hours now we're in Christina's apartment ready to leave. I'm wearing a short sleveless dress which barely covers my hips I didn't wanted to but who can protest against Christina? It also has sort of stripes on it. I'm wearing knee lenth black heeled boots. Christina did my make-up. Sahauna is looking absolutely gorgeous wearing a sort of dress with a cape. Marlene is wearing a small dress just like mine but it has sequins on it unlike mine. Christina is dressed in the same type of dress as Marlene. My hair are open and curled on my side.

"Why have you dressed me in such fancy clothes?" Shauna asks Christina

"I can't tell you just trust me" Christina replies

We finally arrive at the party.

We open the door to lead Shauna to the roof. Just as we open the door everyone shouts "Happy Birthday Shauna". The place is extremelly well is a huge banner which says 'Happy Birthday Shauna' as well as a huge chocolate cake. Shauna looks shocked but happy at the same moment her mouth is in a "O" shape

"OMG! It's amazing. You guys are the best" She exclaims in excitement.

"You deserved it Shauna" I say and everybody nods. The boys look impressed by the work they did.

Only us friends are here non one else.

"You guys did an amazing job" Marlene say me Christina and Shauna nod in agreement

"Okay so it's time for present first" Christina says

We all take seats in the sofas and take out our presents.

Uriah and Marlene go first. They give Shauna a pretty charm bracelet and a perfume.

Will and Christina go next. They give her a pretty black dress with sequins and matching heels which are like 4 inch long.

Me and Tobis go next. We give her a pretty necklace which has a glittery 'S' written on it. Also a black but pretty Sweatshirt with "Shauna" written on it.

Two goes next. He just gives her a gift card of some boutique.

Last but not th least Zeke. He stands infront of her kneels doen on one knee, takes out a black box and says "Shaua I love you, I always have and I always will. I love ou more than anything and I want to be with you orever so will you be my wife Shauna?" We all gasp well at least me Malene, Christina and Shauna are shocked. The boys are just grinning like they knew what was gonna happen.

"I'd be honoured to be your wife" Shauna finnaly replies. We all cheer, clap and hoot.

We spent the whole time dancing to our favorite songs and eating cake. We enjoyed alot.