Do I really belong?
So my first fanfic :3
This is before the war and shes still in abnegation :p so enjoy don't hate too much! Also I don't hav a beta so PM me if u wanna b my beta anywhale enjoy! ;3
Disclaimer~ I crashed my car into the bridge I DON'T CARE I DON'T OWN DIVERGENT I DON'T OWN DIVERGENT BUT I WISH I DID ! :3
So chapter 1 do I belong?
Do I really belong here? I think to myself I live a simple abnegation life where grey walls consume me abnegation is my life follow the rules be selfless
Selfless
Selfless
Selfless
Selfless
Selfless
Selfish
Selfless
Wait what?
I don't belong here at all what will I choose choosing day is in 2 days
Erudite? no I hate learning
Candor? No I lie WAY too much
Amity? No I don't like farming and singing and dancing
Abnegation? No I want to be FREE I hate it here
Dauntless? They are so brave I watch them every day jumping off the trains I wanna be one I want to be DAUNTLESS
PaGe BrEaK PaGe BrEaK THE PAGE IS BREAKING NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
The names pass in a blur till I hear Beatrice prior I step up on to the stage its kinda rusty and feels and sounds terrible I hear every footstep I take. one choice one chance one life this decision will change my life forever I receive the knife stick it in my hand a shot of pin comes through me begging me to stop no I must as my hand is covered in blood before I know it my blood sizzles on the hot black coal I chose Dauntless be brave be strong be willing I look into the crowd my father looks angry like he wants to punch something it must be a lot to take in his two only children transferring Caleb chose Erudite I knew about the books the hidden information the reading the hiding he was born to be Erudite he looked so peaceful now he is finally where he belongs as soon as I know it im running with the dauntless whooping as we run soon were at the trains I jump in as I'm about to slip a grip holds me and pulls me up she has brown hair and some soft brown eyes and is wearing black and white Candor? (A/N this is what in want Christina to look like she's in MY fanfic :3 continue) hi I'm Christina she beams hi my names bea no Tris ok…. Nice to meet you Tris! I soon see building we have to jump Christina and I link arms 3.2.1 JUMP! We hit the ground
HOW DID YA LIKE THE FIRST CHAPTER NEXT WILL BE THE SCENE WHERE SHE MEETS FOUR
*eyebrows wiggle* WHAT WILL HAPPEN STAY TUNED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF DUN DUN DUN DO I BELONG? LOL HOPE YOU ENJOYED RATE AND REVIEW IS THERE A RATE ON THIS IDK ANYWHALE SEE YA NEXT TIME which will be sometime this week I hope! Review to keep me going and give me the motivation to write bye bye I hav the ending planned out and it may have a sequel if you enjoy so review :3
Tobias and Tris have a message for you REVIEW byeeeee
~chloe
Yes that's my name don't judge continue with your day to day life where I will be on here just reading fanfiction and playing minecraft and having a avril avigne marathon because I have no life byeeeeeeeeeeee