Life with a Godfather

Chapter 1: Getting out of Hogwarts

This is my first book so please tell me how bad or good it is .Also please tell me if I'm copying someone else's story. Thanx

I wrote this Story because I really wanted this to happen in the book. This is in the 3rd book after Sirius Black asked Harry to live with him, of course Harry accepts. Sirius sent letters telling Harry were to go off the train and to send a letter to the Dursleys telling them that he's staying with Sirius but Harry called Sirius "his godfather that's a murderer" so they won't have any problems.

The school year ended and Harry is suppose to go on Hogwarts Express to the station and Sirius, as a dog, will be waiting. Hermonie and Ron are verry happy that he is out of that muggle mad house.

"Bye Hagrid" Harry says as he goes on Hogwarts express. "See ya Hagrid." says Ron following Harry. "Come on you guys lets get a compartment before their aren't any left." Hermonie says as Harry and Ron are saying bye to Hagrid. "Here this one is empty." Harry says as they get in the compartment and close the door so they can talk about Sirius. "This is so great every thing is perfect now: I'm living with someone my parents new and loved, I will be living with someone that appreciates me, and best of all I will be able to live like a normal wizard not one that has to sneak under their bed to study and I don't have to see the pig Dudley life is good." The rest of the ride they talked about how much fun Harry will have and then bought candy from the trolley.

Finally the trip was over Harry said he'll meet them outside then zipped off he ran off and looked around (where is Sirius) he looked ands looked. Were he thought Harry again. Their he is Harry saw him from the corner of his eyes that all black shinny dog. Sirius was right he looks better as a dog (A.K.A in the 3rd book he said that). Sirius ran so fast he knocked Harry over. He said bye to Hermonie and Ron and then they were off. Harry followed Sirius till they saw the forest then they went deeper and deeper till it was far enough. Sirius turned back to human and gave Harry a hug.

Well thats Chapter 1 Please REVIEW so I can know if I'm a good writer or not! THANX 4 READING!