Hi Everyone, I am Gokukrish and this is my first Pokémon fan fiction / fan fiction story and I am new to story writing/telling so please bear with me and my English
DISCLAMIER: - I DON'T OWN POKEMON FRANCHISE AND POKEMONS AND SOME CHARACTERS I AM GOING TO USE OR USING
Thanks to Joy-Ling and his/her flash game "POKEMON TRAINER CREATOR" I was able to create my long journey trainer an appearance and one of his long journey companion an appearance
And make sure to read and review me guys and his will give new innovative ideas and enthusiasm to write new chapters and stories and too my English
THANKING YOU
PROLOGUE
Hi everyone, before telling about my adventures let me tell about myself and my family, my friends too. I am Krish, I am five years old who moved to Kanto region with my Uncle Mark Vincent and my aunt Mary Elizabeth from faraway region. We are living in Pallet town. I am studying in Pokémon academy in Viridian city and my Uncle worked in the department store in the city and my aunt was trying to make a restaurant and flower shop in the same city but couldn't afford that much money for the rent so she started making foods, sweets and grow flowers in the home itself and delivering in pallet town itself.
She is the famous cook and good flower maker in the town she even won the tournaments conducted in the town. She is very friendly with Xandu nursery too. My uncle is a hard worker he goes to the work in the early morning and comes home late night because there's lot of trainers visiting the route 22 for going in to Indigo plateau. My Uncle had a Pontya as his Pokémon and my aunt had as hers for helping her in home.
They joined me in the academy at the age of five in Grade One, because there is two reason the first reason is there is a rule in the region that every kid should have compulsory primary education and the second reason is the Pokémon technical institute is in between the Cerulean and Vermilion city and it is too far to travel from home and institute daily.
I met my friend Nima who is five year old girl she has two ponytails as her hair style from Grade One to still now and she loves cute Pokémon's so much. She is from Viridian city whose parents working in as scientists and one of the many geniuses who worked day, night and made Master Ball and Sliph scope, she lives with her grandparents. Because they only visit her few times because they are trying to create new inventions. And my another friend Nathan who is all time studying person his dad works as a Pokémon trainer in the Vermilion gym and as a Sailor in S.S. Anne too.
There is another most important person too in this academy is that the son of Daisy oak and his name Randy oak who is friend during my Grade One. We four were great friends .he was nice guy first then during the Grade Four and Five he always tease me, Nathan and other kids. Sometimes Nathan cries because of him. One day he teased Nima she suddenly got angry and beated him to pulp from then he never teases her and afraid of her. Whenever she is near with anyone he doesn't tease that person because of her presence.
In Academy they teach literature, geography, history, about Pokémon too etc... They conduct test during the graduate time at the end of the Grade Five before giving the Pokémon Trainer license and conduct temporary Pokémon battles too before that day this will test the trainer's ability and maturity, this is done in front of the great Professor Oak itself and he gives many Pokémon's every student for temporary battling to test the skills of trainer. There will be Officer Jenny and Nurse Joy of Viridian too. The failed persons in the exam will not be given the license and they should remain in the academy till they pass and some may continue the higher studies after passing.
At last I finished my prologue for my story and I will post the other chapters soon. The reasons I named my character after my name itself because I couldn't find any other name for another reason is even Pokémon creator had the same for his own created character the name KRISH indicates the meaning dark, NIMA means half moon which indicates her character being both nice and angrier as story and more stories progress. I liked this moon name this is also one of my friends real name similar too, NATHAN is one of my friends which have similar name to him and last one RANDY name means aggressive, rude mannered person and this guy is also my real life friend/rival too.
The faraway region is none other Sinnoh I will tell it when story progress guys and I only going to use Kanto Pokémon's in this story and I going to use games, manga , anime, movie experience to write the story so please don't blame me for using it and notify it by reviewing and I will improve it next time.
Guys please review about my prologue it will be great improvement for me for the upcoming chapters
I have some questions guys,
Should I make Nima, Nathan and Krish capture more Pokémon or less.
How the story can be told in conversion or, trainer point of view or, author point of view.
Should I include time and days to it?
Should I include more rivals in starting itself or later.
Should I make longer chapter or shorter ones?
I am new to this fan fiction guys so please bear with me and I planned my starter for my character and rival. Please keep on reviewing guys' .The next chapter is coming soon until then, I am out.
I updated or revised this prologue some days before and please review me if there is any mistake you notify. Thanking you for your support guys.