Hiya guys! This is my first story on here, so I'd really love reviews. I hope that the story of Severus Snape's dark, slightly sadistic little girl is successful.
Evelyn slowly got out of bed as she rubbed her eyes. As usual she was in her dark green pajamas. She was once again happy that her room was in her father's private quarters and not in a giggly girls' dorm. She walked over to a small cupboard. She mumbled something as a pair of dark grey and black slippers danced out of a drawer. She slid them on and walked out of her room. "Hello Father," she muttered as she walked up to her studying father. His head shot up and he grinned a bit. "Good morning," he said. Eve sighed and muttered "I guess I mustn't walk around the dungeons with my PJs on." He gave her a slightly playful glare. "You shouldn't," he softly said. She looked at her feet and walked back into her beautiful room.
Severus chuckled lightly at his daughter as she trudged away from his desk. "Silly girl," he mused quietly. He returned to grading papers. He came across one with very familiar writing. He examined the answers and found that the student had gotten the majority of them quite wrong. He looked at the writing once more and sighed. "I swear, Evelyn Umbra Snape…If I must, Iwill personally help you with potions, having you write down every detail…" Evelyn popped her head around the corner. "But you won't, will you Father?" Severus jumped and turned his head. "No, dear," he muttered, trying to act innocent as his daughter most likely knew more about him than he did. He would never embarrass his daughter like that, and she knew that far too much.
"Daddy…?" Evelyn asked. Severus jumped again at hearing the word. Daddy? He thought. What's wrong with her? She hasn't called me Daddy since she first met the Dark Lord, let alone been known as the Dark Lady!
~Flashback~
"Hey! Daddy! Come on! Play." Evelyn squealed like the 6 year old she was. Severus ran around his little house on Spinner's End. "Daddy?" She stopped as her daddy stopped too. "Yes, little one?" He warmly said. "When will I get to meet the Dark Lord…?" Severus's heart seemed to skip a beat. His face immediately hardened as he gave her a blank stare. "Daddy!" She slapped him. He grumbled, "I'll take you now." She seemed to smile a bit. "Okay!" He managed a small grin. They flooed to Malfoy Manor as there was a Death Eater meeting that night. He had his robes and mask on as he walked up to the table with Eve. Voldemort smiled a warm smile, not his usually wicked one. "Ahh, Severus, you did not tell us you had a child," he said. Sev nodded and sat down at his usual spot. Evelyn stood beside him. All of the Death Eaters stared at the girl in disbelief. She gave one small wave and then looked at the Dark Lord. He looked at her and said, "We have a man that needs punished…Would you like to do the honors?" Severus stood up. "No! She sha—" He started to protest. He then muttered, "She's only six…"
Voldy looked at him. "Surely you are ok with this….Am I hearing correctly?" Severus sighed and sat down. Evelyn smirked and walked up to the Dark Lord. "Yes sir," she said. She looked out at the table as he said, "Brown! Get up here!" She looked at the man as he slowly stood up and walked forward. Voldemort yanked off his mask in disgust. "You have ruined a perfectly successful attack by changing it at the last minute! You must be punished!" Brown nodded. Voldemort whispered to Eve, "Just use the Crutiatus Curse." She nodded as she lifted her small wand. "Crucio!" She said. The man fell to his knees and writhed on the ground in pain. She smiled as she watched. Voldemort smiled too. Severus slowly cursed at himself mentally.
~Flashback Ends~
Hey! This story is still in progress, so chapters will be arriving slowly. I hope you like it so far, though!