Note: this is old story , I wrote it in grade 7 so I hope you like it !
Hope and Ysabelle were lost in the creepy dark woods. They walked in the woods. They were separated from their parents. The small rocky path lead them to the abandoned old cabin. The old cabin had an old door. The old door itself appeared to simply hang from its hinges. The windows were broken by balls or baseball bats. Ysabelle tapped Hope and pointed to something on the tree. Hope walked to the tree and saw the old paper and she grabbed it and read it slowly. Hope said, "Look and listen!" It said, "Be careful, when you enter the old cabin." The girls looked at other each, confused by the old paper. Ysabelle has no words to reply. Hope said," Let's check it out! I saw the old cabin there!"
The girls walked to the old cabin and opened the old door. The girls entered the old cabin. They were in the living room. Ysabelle walked around the living room. Hope noticed the hallway. It was very dark. At the end of the hallway, there was a door. Ysabelle said," Wet!" Hope said annoying," What is wet?!" Ysabelle lifted her shoe and she pointed to the red something on her shoe. Hope took a close look and said very quietly," It is blood!" The girls looked at other each shocked and felt nervous. Someone is in the old cabin!
Hope and Ysabelle were curious. They want to know who living in the old cabin. They walked down the hallway. They stopped at the door. Hope tried to open the door. Hope said," It is locked." Ysabelle saw the key on the floor. She bent to pick it. Hope heard loud foot stamps and loud voice mumbling. She noticed the black shadows behind the door. Ysabelle unlocked the door and Hope slowly opened the door. Ysabelle was scared and voice and footsteps stopped. Hope noticed the white hoodie like her black hoodie. She knew the person who wore the white hoodie was a boy. He had a dog who had red fur. The dog sat behind the boy.
Hope noticed the boy had a knife. The boy walked to Ysabelle and stared at her. Hope hid behind the door. The boy said, "Ah, I see a new friend!" The dog said, "Yes, we will have fun with our friend!" Hope was shocked. They thought Ysabelle was their friend. The boy said, "Come and sit on our bed." The dog smile devilishly and said," It is right!" Ysabelle came in and she sat on their bed. Hope smelled the dead people in the room. The boy slammed the door and locked it. Hope tried to open the door. But it was locked. The voice said," Go to sleep!" Then followed by the scream of Ysabelle and evil laughing. Hope was scared out of her wits. She turned around and ran as fast as she could. Hope found her parents.
Ysabelle did not come out of the old cabin. Her parents were very worried,So Ysabelle's parents called the police to find next morning, the police came to Ysabelle's house. The police said," I found your daughter in the old cabin, lying on the bed, I don't know what say but. Your daughter is dead. Someone killed her last night. Who kill her? We don't know. She was stabbed many times.