please r&r this is my frist fan fiction ever so please give constuctive comments

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Nana's pov

The things she said to me still run thought my head they even haunt me in my dreams. She may not know it but every little thing she does makes me love her more than before. I pray every night that in the morning I would have the courage to face my fears and tell her I love her. But what then after I tell her will she feel the same and love me back or will she reject me and radical me. I say I love ren but the truth is I didn't know love till I met her. The thing that hurts me the most is the fact that no matter what I do I can't stop her from getting hurt. I know I messed up I should have never introduced her to him. But it was her chose to stay with him after the baby I didn't understand then and I still don't. Why did I leave? She still needs me and I left her. All I want is for her to be mine and forgive me for what I've don't.

Hachi's pov

Why, why did she leave I wanted to tell her so many time how much I loved her. But every time I tried I lost the courage when her eyes met mine .so I stayed silent and nights when she left me alone when she went to see ren the love of her life it broke my heart that she could never love me like she loves him. Even thought she my never love me I still remember the times it seemed like she cared. Like the times when I was scared and she would let me sleep with her and hold me ever so genially against her to comfort me.this all made me want her more. what do i do now no matter how hard i try, i messed up and she will never forgive me.Why should i try amymore?

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