The Life of an Avenger

Disclaimer: I don't own the Naruto character, jutsu or other stuff, besides who would buy my fanfic? The only things I own is my characters and the jutsus I come up with ok.

AN: Ok this story is mainly going to be about my new character that is named ... you will see. In my Naruto fic Chouji doesn't exist and my character takes his place. Well this is actually my first seriously fanfic but you guys should notice it. Oh and I'm going to make a whole new way to use chakra for my character since he has unique abilities like Sasuke sharingan or Narutos way to use ninetails chakra. I don't know all of the Japanese named jutsus so I will skip that nonsense and my Author notes will be before and after every chapter if I have to say something important to say. Remember review or be struck by my wrath.

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Chapter 1: A past pain

Flames was everywhere in the little village. Nobody knew what had happened; twenty minutes ago everything was normal. But now the peaceful village at the outskirts in the unknown region was on fire. Many of the pacifist farmers and wandering merchants tried to run for their life while trying to save what was left by the hungry flames.

Amidst the chaos a young woman ran with her young boy at the tender age of four. She tried to find her husband and the father of the child but so far she found nothing but people who were screaming in agony. But as she and her child wandered near the centre of the village she saw it was emptier than the other place, the question was why. This was naturally the way out of the small town but she soon found out the answer.

Boys Pov

As my mother ran with me I saw more death than I ever imagined could happen in the same place. As death engulfed the most people we encountered I thought maybe my dad is not alive anymore, maybe he has met the same fate as the others. The boy shakes of the thought almost immediately. No my father is a live, he is after all the strongest leader in the town, he couldn't die this easily.

My mother started to run faster when we came near the towncentre and I was curious why she had to move this fast and my question was answered when the smoke subsided. In the middle of the very centre stood a very tall man with long black hair and an almost too pale complexion to his skin. He had a very frighteningly stance and as he stood there I wondered:

"why does this man remind me of a snake?"

In front of him stood twenty of the most feared men in my village and leading them was my father. He was standing firmly on his place while mumbling something almost like a spell. The snake like man said very threateningly:

"I wouldn't do that, I could kill you all without any effort." He said it so fast it sounded like he spat out the words.

This guy is definitely a shinobi I thought and a strong one also to be able to threaten my father so casually.

Many of the other men started also to rhyme mumbling words. The ninja drew out a big sword from his mouth and used the moment of weakness when they had to concentrate. He lashed out at them and killed many of my father's followers in a quick series of stabs. After about ten minutes my father was the only one standing and now he had stopped mumbling the words and he screamed out "Banishment" but in the same time the Shinobi had already put away his sword and he made a series hand seals

"That must be jutsu, it is like magic but with hands instead of words my father had told me before."

The ninja yelled out loud, summoning a big snake but then it suddenly disappeared. My father banishment had taken out the snake but not the man.

"You might as well give up right now and teach me your villages secrets before my wrath destroys your puny homes" The man said with a more threateningly ton.

"Never" My father said but he sounded definitely afraid.

I couldn't understand what was happening but my own father was afraid, the man that had fought of more demons and shinobis that I could count. My mother now started to try to motion me out of the place because it started to take a much more dangerous course.

The shinobi tried to cut down my father after a bit more dialogue but after that I couldn't see any more of it as my mother ran to the exit with me in her arms.

Father PoV

The shinobi had cut down many of my friends and now he is still here after the strongest spell, Banishment. As he thought more about it, the ninja in front of him became impatient.

"If you won't give in and teach me the skills of this village, I will have to kill you all" The ninja said.

I stood there trying to find a way to live to tell this tale and suddenly I remembered. The power of the Banishment was still left in my body but not in it is fullest potential. I started to say the first words of the spell and eyed the man in the same time. He ran at me in a fearsome pace. Just before I was going to say the last word of the incantation, his sword was about to cleave in to two pieces so I whipped out my staff. It was safely hidden under my cloak so the ninja became startled to se a great long cane with a red ruby on the top. I parried the attack with my cain and in the same moment as I said Banishment the shinobi yelled out the Counter jinx.

Who had taught him one of the strongest spells in the village, Counter jinx?

Oh what a way to end up the man was just banished away from the town never to be able to step on this soil but alas I wasn't as lucky since the counter jinx made the spell it hit double its power and hit the owner of the incantation. My body disappeared while my soul still lingered on the earth banned to walk this land for ever.

Mother Pov

As she ran with her child from the godforsaken village she felt almost guilty to leav her beloved husband to fight such a monster. The only thing that comforted her was that she rescued their child from death it self. She kept running but when se turned her head she felt something hit her. This was it, her husband had died and now the only thing she had left from her previous life was her son, the little heir to all the power of the village. He would have great potentials to be able to learn all of the secret arts and skills from the two greatest clans in the little infamous village.

"Hurry up Jin we cant afford to get killed when your father protected us with his life" I said and felt that it was too much to say too little child. At least he will think now of vengeance and probably kill the man who did this to us. While they were running she looked down to the child and saw the resemblance to his father the long blue hair and the yellow eyes that was a trademark for the clan.

"I have to take care of that."

We must hurry to the hidden spot or else that man will get us and... no I can't think about that I tried to tell my self but that was mistake of me to not look around in the surroundings.

Two huge snakes appeared from nowhere and were now trying to capture the couple. I was ready for this kind of situation so I yelled out the power I hade restored in my body

"Summoning"

out from both sides of me, around 25 wolves came and attacked the two vicious snakes. I appointed two of the wolfs to guard my son while I helped to slaughter the snakes.

But instead I was the one to be killed because under the battle most of the wolfs got injured rather easily and I myself got caught in the middle of the two snakes.

"Take Jin out of this place and to somewhere safe please hurry up, take him to Konoha" After I yelled out to the two wolves, the snakes had already taken me up in their mouth and swallowed me

Boys PoV

"Noooo mother" I yelled and started to cry as one of the wolves took me on his back and started to run as fast as the wind. One of my wolves staid behind and tried to help the others. After a while running I heard loud howling the wolves had surely died and the one who was protecting me vanished. I landed hard on the ground but still I wouldn't give up.

My mother and fathers last wish was for me to survive but where should I go Something inside me told me I already knew the place, Konoha

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In some strange way as I was thinking about Konoha I felt my body being drained of my power. In the next moment my whole body seemed feather light and I was in a different place. My eyes got caught up by the beautiful village below surrounded by thick forest; it looked almost like a... hidden village. But as I felt being still drained of all my power my body which was just four years old couldn't take the pressure. My last vision I saw was first the guard running to me and then the beautiful family picture consisting of me and my parents but that was probably my brain playing with me.

Jins PoV

Suddenly I woke up from the terrible nightmare. The room I was in was pitch black and my clothing was all drenched by my sweet. I fumbled a little in the dark and founded the switch light. I took a good look of my self in the mirror. Now my brown hair was held back to place with my bandana and the blue eyes, they shone back at me in the dark and I had still not got accustomed to them.

My thoughts pondered back to my nightmare or flashback as it rather was. One day I would get my revenge to kill that shinobi who ruined my whole life. But for now I needed to be stronger and the way was to become a shinobi my self.

"Fire against fire uh." I thought and went to my balcony. The ever so peaceful hidden village of leaf lay to my view and I felt a pang of jealousy to it.

"If just my village could have had it that night."

I took a glance of the clock and noticed it was 9 pm and I became startled.

"Oh shit I'm late again, oh god Asuma is going to kill me."

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Oh shit, really I'm more than two hours late, damn I have almost the same reputation as Hatake Kakashi

After running a while I came finally up to the training grounds and as I expected nobody was there. They had left some tracks after them and I followed it easily back to Konohas main streets. There they stood, Shikamaru, Asuma and the beautiful Ino-chan.

My heart always pounded faster when I was near her, the reason for it was beyond me. Shikamaru was one of my best friends since the academy, so I respected both of my team mates greatly. The only one I didn't respect much was Asuma as he didn't show me why he should have it.

"Ah so you finally show up, lazy bum" said Ino.

"Hey, I'm not the lazy bum in the team that title is held by Shikamaru" I said with a hint of humour.

Asuma and Shikamaru listened for a while as we argued but then I gave up and Shikamaru said

"How troublesome women can be..."

Ino punched him hard on the head before he almost was about to say something more and I chuckled.

After that Asuma told us what we where going to do this day.

Ah, this was a normal day for team 10 and I enjoyed these days but soon I knew in my guts that I would fight my parent's killer. If he was still alive.

End of Pov

Authors notes: Oh well this was my first chapter and I think it was pretty lousy but hey you guys got some information on the new character.. well you got his whole story for crying out loud. Pretty good for one chapter. My new character will have a mixed personality a little from Sasuke and a little from Naruto so this will be fun he he. Well this story is going to take place between just when every team was passed as genins and after Orochimarus attack. So I will follow the Anime episodes and change some stuff to my own licking so no hard feelings ok guys and girls :).

"For a great future you need a even more hard past"

Ah a quotation from me your beloved author (some people are saying right now yeah right beloved what the hell is he talking about) But now enough of the chitchat review already you morons (don't mean it) and good luck with your life's (those who have any) goodbye :).

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