hey so this is my first story and i would like some feedback even if negative so as a reminder i do NOT own :kickin it converse well enjoy the story :)
kims p.o.v
i was walking through the forest and i hear someone yell my name out of instinct I run to them .My hands start sweating and my eyesight starts to blur as i walk closer . I hear them telling me to walk away ,but i keep going ... .Forward SPLASH !
I pen my eyes " conner what are you doing ?!" I yell .
"waking you up kim I didnt want you to be late on your first day of school !"
" thanks conner" I say cooling down
"moms making breakfeast when your done "
"ok "
I walk in the bathroom and take a quick shower and slip on soke skinny jeans and a white v-neck with black converse and run down the stairs.
"honey do you want your eggs sunnyside or scrambled" my overprotective mom asks
"umm actually mom Im just gonna take an apple instead"
"but its your special breakfeast " mom asks a bit to worriedly
"mom im kinda running late"
"ok hun" she says calming down
"love you mom"
I grabbed my skateboard and skated my way to seaford high . On my way to whats gonna be my new high school I see really nice houses . I got to my new school soon enough . As soon as I walked in everybody looked my way. But i didnt care after about 10 new schools you get used to it .
I headed to the office to ask for my schedule .
"here you go"
"thank you"
I had homeroom in 202 ,then spanish in room 301 ... wow smooth kim smooth i forgot to ask for a map ! BAM ! I look up to see a confused looking guy .
"im sorry"
"woo mamacita"
"actually my name is kim"
"soo kim are you new"
"yup"
"can i see your schedule"
..."wow we have homeroom and spanish together"
yes now i dont need a map
we were walking when the guy said hii to some other guy
"hey jerry"
"hey eddie"
I cough as in a sign for them to introduce me
"ph umm this is kim shes new " "oh hey kim im eddie " "and im jerry sorry i didnt tell you before i usually get lost " brrriiinnnggggggg
ugh lets see how these classes go ...
authors note~ soo thats the first chapter im sorry its not to loong but ill try next time ..REVIEW plz and ill shout u out .. shoutout to forgottenmoments she helped me to post this well thnx REVIEW !
