This is my first fan fiction and I would love to know what everyone thinks. Thank to Jumeirah for their help.

The Secret Child

Abigale Sciuto awoke to the constant beeping of her alarm clock which drilled into the back of her head, immediately Abby regretted the late night of watching movies and extremely high sugar products and of course Caf Pow. As her head continued to pound although the alarm clock was now on the floor in pieces and was beyond working condition. She forced open her deep green eyes open only to close then quickly at the bright sunshine which was blaring through the open curtains; she reopened them to see the sun's rays reflecting off all the metal in the room causing it to glow. Gently Abby rolled onto her back only to feel something against her side, she slowly turned her head to face a young girl who was fast asleep led next to Abby, the young woman stared into the young girl's gentle sleeping face. The resemblance between them was massive, the girl had extremely dark hair, not quite black but not far off it, the straight hair fell down just past her shoulders framing her innocent face. Abby smiled as she watched the young girl sleep peacefully under the covers; gently she rolled onto her side to face her, trying not to wake her up. At well as the hair their face shapes was almost identical, making them look more like sister's than mother and child. A vibrating sound broke the silence; Abby reached over to look at who would be calling her this early on a Sunday morning, no surprises it was Gibbs. Reluctantly the young woman answered the phone hoping and praying that it was not bad news:

"Hey Ab's, I need you to come in. the paper work on the Rising case is incomplete" Abby sighed heavily.

"But Gibbs, Sundays are my day off, we agreed on it. Plus I'm busy"

"Sorry Abby it's got to be done".

Abby whispered back, being careful as not to wake her daughter. "Fine I will come in but, as soon as I'm finished am I free from the torture?"

Gibbs gave a laugh and Abby swore that if she could see him he would be smiling. "yes Ab's as soon as the paper work is finished you can go" Abby sighed again at the thought of going to work when she had a perfect day planned to spend some time with her little girl. "Give me an hour, and I will be there"

"okay, see you then". The phone line went dead. Suddenly a groan caused a smile to creep back onto Abby's face "I don't wanna go mommy, don't make me" the young girl rolled onto her side snuggling into her mother. Abby truly felt charmed as the girl continued to sleep into her side, though sad because she couldn't, though she wished spend the entire day with her little angel.

Gently Abby blew into her face causing the peaceful girl to stir, she blew again but slightly harder "wake up baby, come on wake up" Abby spoke softly as she continued to stare at the face in front of her. "I don't wanna, I want to…" there was a pause in the sleepy excuse as the young girl yawned "wanna…sleep forever" she yawned. Abby gave a small laugh and the smile on her face grew, "Zoe don't you remember today is our day" immediately Zoe's eyes snapped open to reveal the grey blue colour of her eyes staring into her mothers. A giant smile widened across Zoe's pleasant face, "what are we going to do mommy?" she said in her sing song voice. "Well my dear, you will have to wait to see…" …