So I gave in decided to join the drabbles, I tried to cut it down to 100 words but it seemed wierd when I cut stuff out. I had an English teacher who once said "Being concise is an art." I am not sure about the ending it seems sort of abrupt so tell me what you think
#75 My Soul's Shelter
128 words
He trembled with anticipation as he took his love's hand. She looked like an angel, a vision in white with red roses crowning her flaxen hair. They had both waited over a thousand years for this day, and now it was finally here, their wedding day.
When the priest signaled that it was time Darien squeezed Serena's hand and shakily began his vows, "Serena, my love, my life, before I met you my life was empty, I don't like to admit it but I was scared and alone. When I met you, you were so—bright, so vivid that I was afraid and pulled away. What I didn't realize was that you were my other half, my light, my soul's shelter. I love you, my princess, my life."