Okay! Everybody listen up! This is my first story. The beginning's a little short and boring, but just keep reading until later and you'll get some laughs! -
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"Why do I feel like something's going to happen?" I whispered to myself walking in the park. I rubbed my temples sighing. "Stop talking to yourself, idiot."
A breeze gently lifted my hair. The air smelled so different. "What is it?" I wondered.
"Naruto doesn't say it like that, stupid!" I heard a little boy say. "He says it with a weird voice, kinda!"
"No, he doesn't!" The girl argued. I laughed to myself. All of a sudden, leaves started to swirl in front of me as if they were dancing in a circle. For a moment there I actually thought something was going to happen.
"Behind you..." A voice in the wake of my presence said in a serene voice. "Apprentice..."
My hearing sharpened along with my vision...I was scared. My heart was pounding faster than I could react.
"W-what do you want?" I demanded attempting to conquer my panic.
"Just you..."
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Chapter 1 Apprentice
The sound of water against the earth had woken me up and caused me to wonder where I was. "What the hell!?"
I looked at my surroundings to find water...water everywhere. I was sitting on a rushing deep, blue river, and yet I wasn't wet.
"You finally wake." said the same voice from before. I looked up to his face. For some reason, I wasn't scared. "Apprentice, arouse. A threat is about to heighten in danger. Although it is small now, it will grow over time."
"What threat?" I asked curious and confused.
"I'm sure you know of this man. He is the immortal known as Orochimaru." He said scornfully.
"Orochimaru? From..Naruto? How can this be...it's impossible!" I thought panicking.
"Calm down, Apprentice. Nothing should trouble you for I will keep watch. Farewell." said the man.
And just like that I fell through a hole that came from nowhere but under me, and I blacked out.
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