Hello my fellow readers, writers, and people who have been enjoying my stories so far, I'm back with not a new chapter but with another new story. Well it's not really a new story but a rewrite of one that when I reread it for myself it pretty much makes me cringe which means it's pretty bad. Anyway, I've brought this up before and have been putting it off so I decided you know what I may as well since I have nothing else to do right at this moment.
Anyway, at this point I have nothing else to add at this except I know for a fact that with the increase in my writing prowess that I have gained since doing the original version of this I guarantee that this will be better then the original. Also, I'm going to be having a poll on my page of who Ben should hook up with so just keep an eye out for that.
Also at this point like some people do when they write with Ben post Ultimate alien and into Omniverse I'm having it where Azmuth decided to keep the evolutionary function in the Omnitrix that was the key part of the Ultimatrix. Anyway, since I really have nothing else at this point let's get this show on the road.
"Talking"
"Thought"
"Yelling"
(author's input, location change, time change)
Ben's P.O.V
It was a normal day in Bellwood where Rook and myself were just patrolling the city like normal since with the recent up rise in aliens landing on earth there was always the possibility of an attack at any point. Just as we were taking a break at Mr. Smoothies after arresting fistina for about the 20th time a swirling blue vortex appeared right next to us.
The person who was behind it was no other than Professor Paradox, a time traveler that only appears when something big is going down. He said "Hello Benjamin and Rook blonko" and I said "what time disaster is going on Paradox" and he said "it's not really a time disaster but a different universe problem going on."
I said "okay let's go" and Paradox said "may I suggest that Rook stay behind so that he can protect the town in your absence since there is no telling how long it will take you to solve this universal problem." I said "hold on couldn't you just pretty much pause time like they do in the movies" and he said "I would if that were possible but since it isn't a time problem, I am unable to do it at this point."
I said "man having the ability to time travel must be a real damper if you have to follow all the rules that there seem to be" and he said "yes they do sometimes tend to as you put it place a real damper on the actual power." Just as I was about to grab my smoothie he said "time to leave" and I said "hold on" just as he teleported us away.
When we reappeared in an alleyway, I said "dude you could have at least given me the time to grab my smoothie" and he said "there was no time since the first battle of many at this point is about to begin." I said "what do you mean" and instead of explaining he pointed toward what appeared to be a city square. Something with a red upper body with what appeared to be eyes on the shoulders and a whole face on the lower half with what appeared to be a blue skirt.
He was terrorizing the civilians and as I was about to transform Paradox held out his hand and I said "I can't just standby while the Civilians are in danger." he said "they should appear any moment" and I said "just who are you talking about" and just then 5 people then appeared standing at the top of steps that led away from the city square.
I said "they're going to get themselves killed" and ignoring Paradox's insistence that I don't transform I activated the Omnitrix and transformed into Spidermonkey and charged out into what would be a fight. I looked at the people at the top of the steps and they appeared to be shocked at my appearance and while I was fighting off the butt-ugly things being led by the ugly big boss at this point.
I heard one of them say "what the hell is that blue monkey thing" and another said "I don't know I've never seen a blue monkey" and the apparent leader of the group said "first we defeat the nightlok then we'll figure that out" and they took out what appeared to be phones. They then drew some weird symbols in midair and they were all in different colors red, blue, green, pink, and yellow.
After a flash of the color in front of them the people were in what appeared to be battle suits that would hide their identities and in the same color as the symbol, they drew in front of them. They charged into the battle with swords drawn and they started attacking the followers just like me and eventually I came back to back with one of the people.
They said "you got some skills for a monkey" and I said "and you've got some skills for a modern swordsman" and I wrapped web around one of them that was about to attack him from the side. I then ran into the thick of the group and transformed into Swampfire and shot fireballs at the followers which caused them to explode on impact.
I then looked to where the guy in red was fighting the leader of this group and it looked like he was struggling with the fight so I shot fireballs at the back of the thing. As they hit it turned toward me and said "what in the hell are you" and I said "I was going to ask you the same thing" and I powered up a fireball and shot it at the upper body of the thing only for it to block it with the twin swords it was holding.
I said "okay let's try this" and I shot a medium size fireball at the skirt part of his body and when the fireball hit the thing started backing up in pain. That gave the guy in red the chance he needed to slice the thing with a sword that looked way to large to be wielded by someone his size. The thing that we were fighting then exploded and as they regrouped the guy in blue asked me "who are you and what are you doing here."
I said "if red here is your leader I just probably saved his life" and blue said "still who are you" and I said "that's for me to know" and red said "be on your guard the nightlok has two lives the one we just faced is the first one now get ready to deal with the mega monster." Then out of the flames that occurred when the now called nightlok exploded the nightlok appeared again and like red said he increased his size and he was almost as tall as Humungosaur at his tallest.
I then said "okay I'll deal with it" and Blue said "what are you going to do against the nightlok" and I said "just watch and you'll see" and I transformed into Humungosaur and then slapped the dial on my chest and evolved into Ultimate Humungosaur. I thought to myself "When I see him again, I got to thank Azmuth to including the evolutionary function into the new Omnitrix."I then grew so I was on even size with what they called the mega monster and then the nightlok said "I'll ask you again what the hell are you" and I said "I'm a superhero" and I turned my hands into rocket launchers.
I then shot bone fragments at the nightlok which was causing it to back up but it didn't seem to be able to deal and real damage to it. I said "okay that's not working so how about this" and I jumped up in the air and over it and then slammed my tail down on it which caused it to fall over but it just got back up and swung at me with its sword.
Just as I dodged the thing, I saw what appeared to be robots that looked like different animals a red one that resembled a lion, the blue one resembled a dragon, the green one resembled a bear, the pink one resembled a turtle, and the yellow one resembled an ape. Just as the dragon shot blue flames at it the turtle decided to spin rapidly and hit it with the momentum only for the mouth on the skirt part of the body to open up and catch it.
I said "spit it out now" and I punched it on the back of the skirt which caused it to open its mouth and release the turtle and it flew past me and I could have sworn I heard it say "thanks" and I said "no problem turtle robot." Just then the lion folded up into a pentagram shape and I heard the voice of the red guy say "pentagonal fury" and it caught fire and hit the nightlok's mega monster form which caused it to explode for the second time.
As I decreased my size back to it's base and reverted back to my normal Humungosaur state and the group of five which had apparently been in the robot animals landed back on the ground. The blue one said "now that we're in the clear what are you" and I said "that's a bit complicated" and the pink one said "why's that" and I transformed back and said "well it's kind of a long story."
And we're going to leave it off here for now in the next chapter we'll have Ben fighting along side the rangers again against the second nightlok. I decided to leave it off here for the simple reason that I like creating cliffhanger and the second reason is because I want to focus on them becoming a team in the next chapter a team of 6.
Anyway with all that out of the way until next time this is Diamondholder signing off.
