My OC
Gabriela Santiago- A young woman with long black hair, brown eyes and tan skin. She wears a gray newsboy cap, a blue jacket, a black dress, striped purple stockings and black boots.
Loan was covered in bruises as she was crying.
Loan hears her mother's angry voice in her head.
"You're a whore"
"I'm disappointed in you young lady"
"Loan you're a freak!"
"Loan we need to talk about your report card"
"Being a girl is not a excuse"
"15 minutes until you graduated from high school, 20 minutes until you get your diploma from law school and finally 65 minutes until you marry a doctor"
Loan covers her ears as tears streaming through her face.
But she hears a sweet voice humming.
It was a mexican girl around her age with long black hair, brown eyes and tan skin. She wears a gray newsboy cap, a blue jacket, a black dress, striped purple stockings and black boots.
Loan said "H-hi my-my name is Loan Loud"
"Gabriela Santiago"
Loan and Gabriela blushed
Loan and Gabriela have fun together like build a sand castle, watching mexican horror movies, playing in the park and winning a dance contest.
But Gabriela saws Loan's bruises.
Gabriela tell her father that Lori abuses Loan.
Bobby said "She did what!?"
Gabriela said "So Papi you're not mad at Lori for cheating on you"
Bobby decided to call his ex-girlfriend Lori as Gabriela heals Loan's bruises.
Gabriela said "Loan i must tell you something...it's my mother"
Loan gasped "You mean-"
Gabriela nodded
"Follow me"
Loan and Gabriela went to Royal Woods Cemetery.
They saw Mariella's grave.
Here lies Mariella Santiago
She was a good mother
1999-2029
Loan said "You had a good mother and i don't"
Gabriela started to feel sorry for Loan.
Loan said "I wish i has a mom who is nice to me and help me when i get in trouble"
Gabriela pulled out a ring "Will you marry me"
Loan said "Yes"
After they graduated from high school, they save money to buy a house.
Gabriela was wearing a white wedding dress.
Bobby said "This is your big day mija"
Gabriela and Bobby hugged
Wedding March played as Gabriela sees Loan walking in her wedding dress.
"Do you Gabriela Santiago take Loan to be your wife"
"I do"
"Do you Loan Loud take Gabriela to be your wife"
"I do"
"You may kiss the bride"
Loan and Gabriela blushed and kiss as the crowd cheers
Gabriela tosses her bouquet
The girls fight over the bouquet.
Loan cut the cake.
Monton de tierra played as Loan and Gabriela began to dance.
The crowd cheers.
Later, Loan gives birth to a beautiful baby girl with black hair, brown eyes and fair skin.
Gabriela said "Let's name her Mariella"
Mariella smiles
Loan and Gabriela said "Aww"
The End