Broken but still moving chapter one
G.G; Hello this is me replying to the challenge set by BloodRedSword23, don't worry it's not gonna just be some utter rubbish about various scenarios that are gonna be stuck together. I'm serious about writing this, and incase you hadn't yet noticed the hammer of thor has already made it's appearance, it just hasn't announced itself fully yet.
(sorry but I'm not going with the rules BRS23 set cos I don't write like that I like a good mystery + I'm a lazy cow and can't write 3.000 word long chapters. I'm sorry I gotta spend more time writing my ther stories like the village hidden in time and ARDARK which is nothing about the animal.)
But hey who's up for a bit of good ol' bit of sakura bashing! And maybe a bit of teasing Gaara and his cute little panda ways. HE IS SUCH A TSUNDERE!
Naruto ran for his life the mob behind him brandishing sharp weapons and flickering torches that glowed like demons casting the men's shadows on the ground, skidding on the slick mud that filled the alleys of konoha Naruto cursed and mumbled to himself as he saw men standing, waiting for him to run into him at the end of the alley he was currently on. Still running Naruto felt a soft wettness on his skin and he looked up just as the heavens broke open and started to pour down water making it near impossible to see any more than a few meters infront of you. If you had normal eye sight that is. Naruto saw easily through the rain and the now copious clouds of steam that billowed up showing him where the men with torches resided. Mentally thanking the kyubi for his eyes Naruto ran on twisting round yet another corner still running, he couldn't stop. No he could never stop, if he did they'd kill him with out a second thought or the slightest care. After all who would lose sleep over demon spawn?
A foot clad in ninja tabi flew into Naruto's face and sent him flying into a wall. A cry of,
"There I heard a crash! Maria's found him!" echoed through the humid air of the summer monsoon and Naruto sat and glared at his new assailant with sadness in is eyes. He knew the Bronze haired Kinoichi before him, oh her face was ingrained in his memory down the slight tint of green in her murky eyes. The kyubi cackled softly and cried out in Naruto's head screaming and ranting the same words,
"SEE THEY DON'T CARE! ALL OF THEM ARE THE SAME! THEY DON'T CARE FOR YOU! AFTER ALL WHO COULD LOVE MY KIT!" The kyubi was screeching now having one of his brief yet uncommon moments of pure insanity that hailed from being locked up for so long with out contact with it's own kind. The glare of the female ninja before naruto was so filled with pure hatred and disgust that at that moment something broke in Naruto, something that had kept him from killing every single person who ever insulted him or threw those random looks of hate in his general direction when he was simply having a snack at the ramen stand. It had stopped him flinging the senbon needle's he always kept on him at the glares that fell on his back. And now it had broken, no he was broken. His dreams of being hokage to Konoha was crushed by his own will and his mind opened up it's dark recesses that he had previously kept locked so that he didn't go mad.
Grabbing the nearest hard object near him naruto wrenched it out of the sodden ground wth a squelch and walked forwards his eyes blazing red and the scars on his cheeks standing out black. He let out a primeval growl that could break the heart of a beast. One that could make the very nine tails inside his stomach feel scared.
The ninja stepped back in fear and the newly arrived mob cried out in terror as a figure stepped out of the mist formed by the downpour. Two blood red orbs surrounded by black and glinting white canines stood out on the boy face making him seem even more demonic than when he was using his kyubi chakra cloak.* A wave of pure unbridled killing intent swept over the crowd of quivering adults and an animalistic growl that had some of the crowd falling to the sodden ground with equally damp trousers ripped itself out of the boy throat. He raise his fist in which he held a large hammer that glowed with an unearthly light. The manic smile of a killer spread onto Nruto's face as he leapt forewards bringing the hammer down on the brown haired ninja's head with a sickening crunch, lifting the hammers out of the woman's head and shaking the shards of skull and the mush of skin blood and brain off his weapon, a chuckle that soon turned into roaring laughter tore out of his chest making the remaining crowd scatter screaming for their lives. The rest were quickly disposed of and swiftly with cruel laughter echoing down the south eastern slums of konoha naruto set about hunting the others who had hunted after him.
As the clouds of madness cleared his young mind naruto thought clearly how he would escape getting locked up for this and his now open mind thought up a simple but effective answer. Rounding up the bodies into a sealing scroll Naruto left the scene of the crime letting the blood on his skin and on the ground wash away. Eyes fading back to cerulean blue and scars returning to silver lines on his face Naruto's eyes skimmed the roof tops for people. A girl stood in a doorway, she'd seen the whole thing.
Naruto turned to face her and gave her a cheery smile that warmed her heart,
"They deserved that, tell you what let's keep it a little secret. They were really bad people. They would've killed your entire family." The girl hearing this smiled hugged him and thanked him and walked of happily thinking that her new friend had saved her life.
Naruto sniggered at the girls innocence and flickered out of existence.
*Not that he could actually use that yet but oh well..