Okay so I had to like, edit this and change it up a lot, because I reread it and I thought it definitely needed some work. So here's the updated version of it. Thanks for reading, and enjoy the new chapter!
I wailed as my mother carried me to the nursery. "Mama! I'm just as old as Brightkit and Elderkit! Why can't I play with them?"
Honeyflower set me down gently in my nest. "You're too small. You'll get crushed, dear."
I growled. "No I won't!" My fur began to bristle and my tail bushed to twice its size. "See? I'm big!"
Honeyflower sighed, gazing at me pitifully. "No, you're not, Littlekit. I named you that for a reason."
"So!? I'll show you! I can win a fight against Elderkit like it's nobody's business!"
I rushed out the nursery and mock-roared, pouncing on Elderkit. I scratched at his back and bit his tail. Elderkit screeched in pain. I bit his throat, and shoved him away from where he was. Brightkit leaped on me then, but I kicked his stomach with my hind claws and he jumped back. I ran back over to Elderkit and pinned him down. I bit his throat, and our father, Heronwing, burst out the warrior's den and bowled me off of my brother. "How could you do this!?" he yelled. "You've nearly scratched him hairless!"
Coldleaf, the medicine cat, came rushing over, and a few other cats gathered, including Smokepaw, Leappaw, Larkstar, and Fallentail the deputy. Brightkit came over to his brother, licking his fur gently. "You killed him!" he cried. "You killed your own brother!"
I flattened my ears, backing up. It couldn't be true. It couldn't- "He's not dead," Coldleaf soothed. "Just passed out. I'll see to him while the wounds don't hurt." She padded away, carrying Elderkit, and I knew all eyes were on me now.
"I just wanted to prove I could win a fight. I didn't mean to have my claws unsheathed," I reasoned (or, at least, tried to).
Brightkit glared daggers at me, and I wanted to shoot that glare right back, but I kept myself looking shy. I then sighed, and slunk back into the nursery.
Later that day, I found myself walking by the medicine den to see if Elderkit was okay. I stopped when I heard voices, though.
"She's dangerous." I pricked my ears. Coldleaf?
"Indeed. She seems to put on an innocent face." I frowned That was Larkstar. Was he accusing someone of something?
"You think she's evil?" Fallentail was there, too? How many cats were there? I wondered.
The medicine cat and leader said together; "Yes!"
The third didn't seem to think so. "But Littlekit was always so nice."
I widened my eyes and peered through the ivy to look at them. They were accusing me of being evil?!
Larkstar rolled his eyes. "This is why I'm leader, and not you."
Fallentail gave him a playful cuff over his ears. Larkstar smiled and bowled him over. Coldleaf growled as they play-fought. "This is no laughing matter! Stop acting like kits!" She sat down in her nest.
Larkstar muttered something, but I was too far away to hear what he said. They were silent for a while.
I begun preparing myself to walk in, but then a paw slammed onto my tail, stopping any forward movement. "Ow!" I turned. Brightkit. "Are you spying on the medicine cat?" he accused immediately.
"What!? No!"
Coldleaf came rushing out. "You were spying on me!?"
I growled. "No! I just came to see If Elderkit was okay."
"Elderkit doesn't want to see you," Coldleaf said quickly. She glared at me for a moment, but then turned and stalked into the den.
"You were spying on her, and I'll prove it!" Brightkit hissed behind me.
I growled, turning and jumping at him. "Not if I can help it!" I unsheathed my claws and scratched his limbs. I bit his ear, then his scruff. I also managed to scratch and bite his back a few times. Brightkit didn't fight back. Eventually, he wailed, "Help, help! I'm hurt!"
I gasped, realizing what he was trying to do, and I ran into the nursery. I curled up in my nest and closed my eyes, but I listened to the voices. "What happened?"
"Is he okay?"
"What in the name of StarClan-?!"
I soon realized that the voices were beginning to get fuzzier, an my breathing slowed as I relaxed in my nest. I tried to stay awake, but with all the fighting and the events of the day, I was exhausted. I wrapped my tail around my nose, and soon enough, I fell asleep.
