ok first story ever so read and review

Chapter 1 Vita e bella ( life is beautiful)

Fang held me in his arms we were at the Andrea Bocelli concert in the vatican after seeing the pope this morning fang thought Benedict XVI was a nice man and Max wanted to buy a swiss guard and Angel silly girl had convinced the pope to let gays get married Nudge, Gazzy and Iggy were there too Iggy's blindness was cured as he touched the tomb of Pope John Paul II the all it was a good day Max and Angel were sitting behind us and I was on fang's lap.
Nudge and Iggy were shopping and Gazzy was behind me and fang. Bocelli was singing a beautiful song and i was translating into fang's ear. and suddenly he turned and kissed me like full blow makeout. when bocelli fininished he brought out some chinese piano player Lang Lang and after some soft rhapsody we applauded. but throughout the concert i could feel his love i mean gods love since i am in front of St Peters Basilica, but we're only here for a few days and max says we have to go on to another place i dont have wings yet but Dr Martinez saw them in an X-Ray of my back so they're coming.
for now i ride holding on to fang's chest. i love fang so let me tell you a little bout me, I have been weird since i was little but i was told i was part of the winged teenager experiment where you went on normal till you were in your mid teens then you grew wings. I am 14 and have dark brown hair and blue eyes i am pale and a little shorter than fang i'm quite skinny and have a small muscle tone. I love fang very much and we met and had a first date back before this whole adventure started. Before angel was kidnapped and fang left but he came back for me in the end. Bocelli did some more songs with various people and we went back to our hotel early it was just outside the vatican and we could see a lot. Fang took me on his back and i put my arms around his neck. we flew out the window and over the sky to the top of st. peter's Dome i loved being so high as we came in through a small open window like thing i mean come on what's the worst that could happen me and fang having sex with all the dead pope's watching or getting struck by lightning. but fang pulled me into a kiss and suddenly it all happened so fast and i woke up laying next to fang two hours before dawn. and it smelled of sex i woke fang up. " fang did we..... um..." i said. " not entirely no you sucked my cock and i fucked you once" fang said. " FANG WE JUST HAD SEX IN THE BASILICA OF THE POPE WITH ST. PETER WATCHING" I SAID pointing to the small lit lamp by the altar housing the bones of the saint. " WE SHOULD HAVE BEEN STRUCK BY LIGHTNING DAMNIT FANG I'M GOING TO HELL AND SO ARE YOU" I SAID.
i got up and turned on the fans and the smell dissapated in a few minutes. i put on my clothes and me and fang explored the crypt. i knelt down and appologized to all the popes as Fang laughed and suddenly i heard wings fluttering and then max and iggy talking then angel saying EWw. then i heard the swiss guards coming down into the crypt they turned a corner and....