A/N This is a fixed up version and commentary of MyImmortal by Tara Gibson. I know it's been done before. First in the 'What is this with kdawg' series. I just can't read this or let you read this without fixed up spelling. I will be doing rude and sill number names until I can't think of any.
Chapter 1.
AN: Special fangs (get it, because I'm gothic It took me a couple times to figure it out) to my gf (ew not in that way soooo you don't like leisbian) raven, bloodytearz666 4 helping me with the story and spelling and bad spelling if I might add. You rock! Justin Justin beiber? your the love of my deprssinging life you rock to! MCR ROCK!
Hi my name is Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way and I have long ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) with purple streaks and red tips that reaches my mid-back and icy blue eyes like limpid tears That sounds like emo and a lot of people tell me I look like Amy Lee (AN: if you don't know who she is get the hell out of here!ok the I'm leaving). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie wait, you like incest. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white and vampires have crooked brown teeth. I have pale white skin. I'm also a witch, and I go to a magic school called Hogwarts in England Scotland where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen Wow I couldn't believe that). I'm a goth don't you mean emo (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there Hot Topic isent in England. For example today I was wearing a black corset with matching lace around it and a black leather miniskirt, pink fishnets and black combat boots. I was wearing black lipstick, white foundation, black eyeliner and red eye shadow and that's a piece of information I needed. I was walking outside Hogwarts. It was snowing and raining That's immpossible you can't have them both at a BOOK so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps as in 5 year olds? stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them That works for everything.
"Hey Ebony!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Draco Malfoy!
"What's up Draco?" I asked.
"Nothing." he said shyly Have you ever read a Harry Potter book.
But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.
AN: IS it good? PLEASE tell me fangs! sorry but we don't.
A/N I don't own my immortal and I'm happy about it.