This is just an idea that popped into my head one day. So far the story is in Rikki's POV, but I'm not sure if it'll stay like that.
Plot: Zane tells Rikki he loves her and she says she loves him back, but when Rikki's mermaid powers disapper she'll have to dig deep inside herself to get them back.
Disclaimer: I don't own h20: just add water or any of the characters
I looked out over the ocean and was taking in the beauty when I felt someone staring at me. I looked to my left and sure enough Zane was smiling at me with a big smile.
"What?" I asked, feeling a little self conscious.
"You're beautiful," He said.
"Thanks Zane, that almost makes up for the way you acted back there." I replied bitterly.
"Come on Rikki, I apologized to you and to the owner." He pleaded. Zane and I had gone on a date to some fancy resturant and he walked in there acting like he owned the place. It was almost as if Mr. Self-Absorbed was coming back.
I ignored him and continued to look at the ocean, when Zane playfully pushed me towards the water. "Zane!" I yelled. "That wasn't funny," I said.
"Look, I have something really important to tell you." He said seriously.
"You're actually Zane's twin brother, and the Zane I like is going to come back?" I asked half joking, half hoping.
"Haha, very funny. No what I have to say is actually pretty important." He grabbed my hands and looked me straight in the eyes. "I love you."
"What?" My eyes bulged out.
"I said, I love you." He repeated.
"I love you too Zane," I said with a smile.
Zane started to say something, but my cell phone beeped. It was a message from Cleo.
Come on, it's almost 9 o'clock
"Sorry, Zane but I have to go." I said.
"Another secret?" He asked as I walked away.
I shook my head no and turned back towards him, but his attention was already focused on two bikini-clad girls walking up the boardwalk. I sighed and headed towards Cleo's house.
"Rikki come on!" They yelled as I got closer. It started to rain and I ran fast, but I felt a rain drop on the back of my neck.
"Shoot," I muttered and waited for the tail to come. But nothing happened. I looked over at Cleo and Bella and they both had shocked looks. I ran inside after I realized the tail wasn't coming.
"I'll go call Lewis." Cleo said as I dried off.
"How was the date?" Bella asked from the couch. She was keeping her distance, so she didn't get wet.
"He told me he loved me." I said with a smile.
"Do you love him too?" Bella asked with an eager smile.
I looked out at the rain. "Yeah," I said. I turned back to her. "I do."
"Well, I think that's the problem." Bella said. I snapped my attention towards her.
"What?"
"You don't love him," She said calmly.
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