Hey people, I don't know how many of you know that I've been fixing some of my old crappy stories but I have. This a remake of a horribly written oneshot, I will make it in a long story well because I think it's meant for chapters.
I hope you all enjoy.
The Babysitter Chapter 1
It was lovely day in Konoha, the streets were crowded with people while, in the biggest mansion, in one of the corners of the village was a 16 year old girl, sitting in her bedroom, smiling to herself as she listen to some music.
Happy with herself she was, she was once a small pathetic girl, now she was strong and confident, confident enough to have her way with her father and her family.
Suddenly her father enter her room with a woman by he's side. The stern look on his face told he was annoyed and deep inside she was glad, although she didn't show it, after all she didn't want to get in to much trouble, she wasn't crazy.
"Hinata this is Akia, you're under her watch full eye" Her father said. Hinata looked at the skinny, brown haired woman beside her father. The woman looked weak and scared. "An easy target" She thought as she mentally smirked.
"Another babysitter?" She asked. Her voice was soft, not compare to the way she looked. This made the woman relaxed a bit. Hinata's clothes almost screamed rebel but it's not something she was. She just liked that kind of clothe, they made her feel somehow strong and fearless. "I told you I don't need a babysitter"
"I need someone to keep on eye on you" Her father said. The same speech he had been giving her since he got the crazy idea to get someone to "Protect her".
"Then why not send someone stronger looking?" Hinata asked, a smirked now visible, taunting her father. "A man, maybe"
"Hinata" Hiashi said in a loud commanding voice.
"Sorry" She said but she wasn't. Hiashi sigh loudly and turned towards the woman.
"Good luck" he said to her, laying his hand on her shoulder, assuring her that everything was going to be ok.
Hiashi left the room and both female stared at each other. Hinata stopped her music and began to get up. "This is how I work" Hinata said slowly. "You've got 5 minutes to turn around and tell my father that you'll leave" The woman's eyes grew wide and gulped loudly. Hinata was disappointed to know that she had brake through so easily. "If you don't… I will make you suffer. Suffer so bad that you won't recover even when you're out of here" She said. She stood in front of her, her eyes narrowed looking right at the frighten woman.
Hiashi sat in his favorite chair in the living room and prayed that the woman hadn't heard Hinata's threats. He knew about them, they had all the same excuse, Hinata had scared them away.
Each time, he felt his daughter slip from his grip, it almost made his wish that she was the same quiet girl she once had been.
"I quit" Akia cried as she ran out. Hiashi sigh, Hinata's had broken the woman. Hiashi grew angry and stomped into her room, where Hinata looked like she hadn't moved an inch.
"That's it young lady" He yelled making her look boredly at him. "I didn't want to come to this but you leave me no choice"
"Father" She said calmly, this made him madder. "I don't need someone to "Look after me". I'm strong enough to know and see what's in front of me"
"Hinata, when I say that something goes… it goes" he growled.
"That's not fair!" Hinata yelled, losing her cool. "Why can't I get to decide. It's me who has to have someone following her"
"Enough!" Hiashi yelled. "What I say goes!"
"I hate you!" She yelled.
"Save it for your drama class" Hiashi loud enough for her to hear, and he slammed the door behind her. Hinata gasped at her father's words. She began to scream from the top of her lungs and began to jump, stumping her feet into the wooden floor, knowing that he could hear it downstairs.
An hour later, the mansion was once again quiet. Hinata had finally calmed down and was sitting her desk, writing her daily blog. She pressed every letter with rage as her flawless eyebrows were pushed together. Suddenly she heard her door open.
"Go away" She growled without turning around.
"Hinata!" Hiashi spoke making her grumble.
"Why don't you just knock dad!" Hinata said snorting under her breath. "One day you'll get a surprise if you keep walking without knocking"
"Hinata!" This made her chuckled. She was mad at him, she couldn't let him win this easily. "Hinata turn around and meet you're new escort"
Hinata sigh and turned around just to be caught in a silent gasp. She stared at the blond man standing beside her father. He was dressed in green and brown colors and even though he was wearing some kind of sleeveless coat she could tell he had a body.
"A man?" She asked, in teasing voice.
"A ninja" He said, a smirked hidden on his lips.
"Ninja?" She asked.
"Yes. Although he is man, but he is a strong man. He won't fall any of your tricks… ANY of them" He said.
"We'll see about that" Hinata thought. Hiashi left the room and sigh, let's hope his friend were right.
"What's your name?" She asked but she didn't answer. He just picked a chair from beside him and sat. He laid his chin on his arms and stared at Hinata with his bright blue eyes.
"What? Don't you speak English?" Hinata asked raising her eyebrow. "You… What. Do. They. Call. You?" She asked slowly but it only made his chuckled. The short sound of his chuckled made her shivers, it was rich and sexy.
"Naruto. Naruto Uzumaki" He answered after a few minutes.
"Well Naruto" She said. "This is how I work" Hinata said slowly. "You've got 5 minutes to turn around and tell my father that you'll leave" Naruto blinked but not a movement of fear. "If you don't… I will make you suffer. Suffer so bad that you won't recover even when you're out of here"
He chuckled and Hinata's eyes opened wide. No fear, no break, no leaving.
She had lost round one.
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