Youth of Devastation
Well what can I say, it`s my first story so if you critics feel like being honest in your comments go right ahead. And I'm not entirely content with the title, but what the heck it's original, so enjoy!
Chapter 1
It is August 16th 1995 and a young vibrant blond haired boy is running laps around an expensive armchair finishing his daily exercises. His older sibling is writing a letter to her supposed boyfriend, a bright scientist by the name of Xander. Their parents our out on an annual date night, and the quiet moment was disturbed by a car horn. They ceased their actions to look outside at the postal delivery truck parked awkwardly in front of their two story house. Out stepped a young girl about five foots high plus six inches with curly blond hair and her work's clothes.
She was carrying a package, as she left the oldest sibling stepped outside and called to her, but she ignored them and sped off into the night. Dash brought the box in and found that the box was Violet's new Walkman she had ordered online. They had a time-consuming day ahead of them and were oblivious of the man standing stiff as a board outside their kitchen window.
This however did upset the youngest member of the Parr family; he babbled and cried in his two year old voice at the unsettling sight of the hair-raising stranger. The almost adult girl picked him up and shrieked as she caught a momentary glimpse of the figure leaving the view of the window. Dash sprinted in knocking papers off the kitchen counter, and within an instant carried his brother to the master bedroom of the house. The man kicked the back door open and tackled the startled girl to the ground before she could react. With all her might she kicked him of and noticed Dash holding a hammer, he tossed it to her and in one swift motion she smashed the plastic Halloween mask off the intruder's face.
Removing the mask was simple, realizing that a middle aged balding man who had many previous disagreements with the Parr family was disconcerting.
Yes it's ridiculously short but it's my first so don't worry. To be continued! Almost immediately considering this was a MUCH needed re-write. See you soon, hopefully!