Inspired by Run it Back Again by Corbin Bleu
I don't expect this to get popular, but it was an idea needing to come out. Anyway, here's the details.
A pony comes to ponyville in hopes of living in a peaceful town. This pony though, has a special ability that no other pony could do without strong magic. Control time. This has caused problems in his past. But will it also save him, his new friends, and somepony special, from a rising evil. The only way to learn the story, is to go to the beginning...
and press play (Figuratively speaking).
Setting: Alternate reality set after season three Episode: Spike at Your Service
Do not bother me about Spelling or Grammer or, if ever to happen, mismade info.
There's only one more thing to show.
My Little Pony OC Character card one: Luke Rewind
Stallion
Pegasus
Age:19
COLOR
Fur: Dark Blue
Eyes: Purple
Mane: Dark red
Mane style: rough and messy, but not too messy. Medium length mane.
Normal height, width, and length
Cutie Mark: A golden Stopwatch
Personality: Cocky and Stubborn. Has a little problem with losing when the stakes are high. Sweet and willing to help anyone with a problem, no matter how deep.
Likes: Winning, friendship, fixing problems, especially his own, exploring, reading, getting better, being a hero.
Dislikes: BARRELS!, evil, Pinkie Pie(when she goes to far), and jumpscares.
O.K.! Now let's start the fun, here's chapter 1!
Time: 11:12 P.M.
"Gotta... fly... faster!" Luke growled as he flew quickly through the dark town.
"GET BACK HERE!" Guards yelled at him. It was sorta like a regular day for Luke. It wasn't his fault, it happened by a freak chance. It's just... when you can control time, wouldn't you try something? Well Luke didn't. He can't control it properly. So time stopped while he was walking around Manehatten, he didn't notice and saw some free bits on the ground, and after a few steps, time unfroze and as it turns out, those were dropped bits, not forgotten bits.
And now he was flying. And flying he did. He only stopped when he was sure he lost them.
"I tried to give it back, but NOOOOO! They call the guards on me." Luke mumbled agrilly. "O.k... That was the third mishap to happen in Manehatten... So i won't be able to go there anymore..." He took out a map from the sack on his left side. He slowly looked over the map, then, pulling out a red marker, marked an X over Manehatten. He then looked over for a place that wasn't Xed out.
'One choice left. Hope I won't screw this place up.' he thought as he placed the map and marker back and headed towards Ponyville.
Run it Back Again
10:25 A.M.
"Hey Twilight." Spike asked. "Why is there a pony sleeping on one of the libraries?" Twilight looked at Spike with a confused expression. She looked out the window and saw a dark blue pegasus hanging by his back hoof off a tree branch.
"Oh my!" She opened the window and used her horn to bring the pony in. He whinned a bit as twilight placed him on the floor.
"Are you O.K.?" She asked him. He slowly opened his eyes. But he didn't expect a pony and dragon to be over him.
"AAHHHHH!" Luke screamed as he backed away from them. "I'M SORRY FOR WHATEVER THING I DID! PLEASE DON'T HURT ME! I... uh... hello..." Luke stared at the pony and dragon. They were both staring at the floor. He realized he froze time, giving him time too leave. He walked towards the window... and noticed the tree branch he crashed into.
'I must of scared them, being outside of there house... I better tell them the truth. I mean... I hope they'll let me tell them the truth.' he calmed down a bit and focused a lot of energy into it... and time started moving again.
"You were outs..." Twilight stopped when she noticed the pony was gone. "Where did he go!"
"Listen." Luke said, making both turn in shock. "I didn't mean to bother you, I was just tired from flying and I started to fall asleep. Sorry if I bothered you." Twilight shook her head at this.
"Don't feel sorry, it was an accident." Twilight told him. Luke started to chuckle, earning a glare from Twilight. "What's so funny?"
"Well your the first pony to ever except my apology."
"Why? What else did you do?" Spike asked.
"Well... lets start from the beginning. My name is Luke Rewind and I have the ability to control time." twilight looked at him, confused. "An example, you guys scared me bad enough for me to unintentionally stop time. I walked over to this window, realized what happened, and I made time flow again, see how i did the disappearing trick there?" Twilight gasped. "It's hard to control it, to be honest. I always seem to do it whenever the power feels like it. I have no way of knowing when time will stop, rewind, or fast forward. This has caused me many problems in the past. So many problems, that I have been run out of town by the ponies or guards... this is the last town that hasn't done that to me. So I'm moving into Ponyville. It's just bad luck that I crashed into your home." Luke finished. Twilight was shocked beyond words. She has never heard of a pony who was run out of every town he lived in.
"I-I'm so sorry to hear that."
"Don't be. I didn't have any friends to be sorry for me, so I don't expect you to do it."
'No friends... that's it.' Twilight thought. "I will be your friend and I will make sure you will live a happy life in ponyville."
"That's really sweet of you, but I can handle it. I've handled it for Sixteen years, so I'm pretty sure I can handle this town."
"Sixteen... How old are you?..."
"Nineteen."
"I'm definitely helping you now. No pony should live like you have. From now on, Ponyville is your home." Luke smiled at her kindness.
"Well thanks! I better go find a place to sleep then. Bye." Luke said as he flew out the window.
"What a way to start the morning, eh Twilight." Spike said with a laugh.
The prologue is obviously short, but I will try to make at least a three thousand word chapter from here on. If this actually gets noticed.
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