And the Walls come Crumbling down

by BitterRose516

A poem I wrote using an OC of mine named "Kaiyo". This is a Poem about what might have been going on when the Fire Nation tore down the Walls of Ba Sing Se, told through the eyes of a 6 year old girl. She ends up trying to run away towards the end.

*Disclaimer*: I do not own Avatar, but I do own the OC used in this Poem!!!!

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And the Walls come crumbling Down....

The strong walls come crumbling down,

soldiers' marching all around.

As I stand so small,

clutching on to a lifeless doll.

Blood splattered on the ground,

voices all around.

A woman dying to my left,

a baby crying to my right.

So much chaos it feels like you're going to lose your mind.

Smoke drifting in the air,

choking our lungs without a care.

Fire burning all around,

burning everything to the ground.

There I quiver at the sight,

hoping everyone will be all right.

I see a man in dark red,

hit some guy on the head.

I close my eyes and start to whimper,

wondering still, "Where is my Sister?".

I hear the crackle of the flames,

and I quickly run away.

There in front of me, a man so tall,

makes me feel so very small.

The Earth trembles under my feet,

making me feel so very weak.

I turn my head towards the ground and start to weep,

as the flames burn on,

as the walls crumble down....

There goes my doll,

it's falling to the ground,

without a sound.

There's noone around....

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Please be kind with your comments. This is the first thing I have ever Posted on here, and I wrote this Poem at about 5 A.M. so I know it's not that good. Anyways, Read and Review (if you want to)!!!! Suggestions, Anyone?

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