My first Fanfiction! Wooottt!
It's about FinnXMarceline, so cuute! I wuuv them.
So yeah basically you get better as you write so it's a rough start I know but if you read this and it puts a smile to your face it will really make my day~
Enjoy homies~
It was a peaceful night in Ooo. The gleaming rays of the sun had recently set and the sky was engulfed in darkness. Everything was still, except for a slight wind that blew casually through the crisp air and rustled the grass and leaves. The nights had grown darker by the day, and there was no light except for a single moon highly perched in the sky encircled by shimmering stars. The silence of the night was halted as sweet musical notes filled the air.
There sat a girl appearing to be around 17 or 18. Her skin was a light gray and sharp fangs came out of her mouth. She wore a sparkling cream colored dress that lay above her knees and a black unzipped leather jacket. Along with a pair of dark high-heeled boots and a bat necklace resting between her collar bone. Her long onyx hair glowed against the moonlight's bliss and sprawled around the rock she was seated upon. It was Marceline. She strummed a few notes on her axe bass and hummed, enjoying the melody.
A presence came over her as an arm reached over her shoulder and ran its fingers down the strings of the bass. She hissed and jumped backwards, but sighed and relaxed when she realized who it was. It had been no other than Finn the human. He looked as startled as she was and gestured an apology.
"Trying to pull a fast one on me, huh hero?" Marceline snapped as she raised an eyebrow and placed a hand on her hip.
"Hahaah.. well uhh.. no… err… hello to you too." Finn stammered, trying to find the right response.
It had been about 5 years since they first met, and Finn had grown quite a bit. He stood about an inch or two taller than Marceline and became more muscular. His golden shaggy hair fell below his ears while his bangs swept to the side and reached his eyebrows. His ocean eyes seemed more stunning than before, and always had a heartwarming expression to them. He still wore his favorite hat, but how often dwindled as the years went by. Marceline couldn't lie, he had become quite attractive, although he still had that same goofy smile, and she kind of liked that.
"Where's your dog?" She asked, returning to the rock she was positioned on.
"Jake's with Lady Rainicorn, so I decided to leave them alone. Not that I don't like Lady or anything, she's totally math! But I can't understand what the cabbage she's saying." He replied, taking a seat next to her.
"Ohhh I see how it is." She said as a devious smirk arose from the edge or her lips. "So you rather hang out with me than your girlfriend Bonni? Don't worry I won't tell her!" She laughed and Finn's face flushed up.
"She's not my girlfriend! It just that I- "
"That I secretly love PB! Ohh my sweet lil' gum drop! Hahah~" She imitated him and slapped her forehead laughing.
By this point Finn's face was red as a tomato. "I don't like her! Okay?" He crossed his arms and turned his head away from her.
"You keep telling yourself that lover boy. Hey you still got that piece of her hair?" She nudged his arm with her elbow. "I bet you make out with it every night!"
"I don't! Two can play this game! Hey Mar-Mar, why don't you go hang out with Ashy-poo?" He retorted which led to a slap across his face and he tumbled off the rock into the grass.
"Owww… okay I probably deserved that." He said, rubbing the side of his face, "But were even now."
"Hmphh… weenie…" She glared at him then levitated onto her back grumbling.
"Hey! I said I was sorry!" He pouted.
"Yeah whatever…" She muttered.
They remained silent for quite a while. Neither of them looked at each other, the only noise audible was Marceline's bass.
"It's getting kind of late…" She said, breaking the awkward silence, "You should probably get going before Jake starts to worry."
"Naaahh… he won't notice. Jake's got a pickle brain plus he's with Lady so it's all sugar, suga'." He wiggled his arm and gave a thumbs up.
"Whatever you say nerd." She grinned.
"Hey you're always calling me names! Meanie! "
"I'm not mean I'm a thousand years old!"
"So you're an old meanie."
"Hehh.. got me there."
"Ohhh Holy cow!" Finn beamed at his victory.
They continued laughing and talking, mainly enjoying each other's presence.
"Hey Marceline I have a question." He asked, suddenly serious.
"What is it Finn?"
"Are you lonely?"
She looked at him puzzled. "Am I lonely? Well I'm hanging out with you so no."
"That's not what I meant, the fact that you'll live forever and don't have anyone to spend eternity with." He noticed her face sadden. "Ahh.. sorry if that was too personal and junk."
She snorted, "I have a pet dog you know." She stopped levitating and sat close to Finn, placing her bass on the grass. She shifted her gaze to the stars. "Being a vampire and living forever does have its perks, trust me. But I guess it's not always a bowl of strawberries. Time works against me. I see people come into this life and leave it while I'm still existent. I don't know it's fair or not, but I wish I had someone to stay with me." She laughed darkly and looked at him. "But I'm okay really."
"I won't let time take me away from you." He smiled warmly and placed his hand on her shoulder.
"Thanks Finn…. but you know that's impossible."
Finn grabbed Marceline's other shoulder and brought her into his chest, embracing her tightly. He brought his palm underneath her chin and titled it upright carefully, then pressed his lips against hers. She pulled away and gasped, starring into his eyes.
He whispered so only she could hear it, "Nothing's impossible."
And that's it! :D Please let me know what you think. I'll probably write more and add action and romance :3 Tehheee~
I take no offense to critical writing because I know I need improvement so it's always welcome.
If you read to think point, here's a cookie. I thank you very much3