Hi this is my first fanfic! Please read and review!

BPOV

My name is Bella Swan. I have no idea to who I was before all of this happened. I appear to be 17 years old but I haven't aged in the past 700 years. There is no name for what I am but the most accurate one I would say is 'monster'.

I was travelling through Washington when I smelt something unusual. It wasn't human but more like my scent. I was curious to what could give off such a scent so similar to mine. I started running towards this curious smell. If anyone saw me running they would think I was a figure of their imagination as I run faster than most racing cars. I soon got into the dense parts of the forest and suddenly I stopped. The arrangement in the air had changed. Whoever was giving off the sweet scent had disrupted the way in which my power worked. I could sense a something harder than a human in the vicinity and it was making me anxious. I felt something push against my 'space bubble' as I liked to call it. I immediately blocked it out and kept on running.

I followed the sweet scent even deeper into the forest until I came upon a river. But it was not the river that fascinated me, it was what was behind it. A beautiful white house, well more like a mansion, with a wall of glass facing me. Carefully I jumped across the river and ran up to the house. I stopped at the door and held my hand to the intricate brass knocker on the door. I hesitated. Then, seconds later, the door flew open and standing there was the most beautiful creature I had ever seen.

Okay what do you think?